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Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 10:23 am Title: "You were awesome on stage today."

You roock =)^^

Author's Response: awww thank yous! :D

Reviewer: F1Musa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 09:50 am Title: "You were awesome on stage today."

oh, wow :D
Reden is the best song ever :P
and Tom never promised it. muwahahaaa
keep up keep up :)

Author's Response: lol yess i love their twin moments in Reden! :) and i was wondering when someone's gonna figure out tom never promised anything :D *smiles evily*

Reviewer: dubistheilig Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/10 05:24 pm Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

Omg, it's so funny :D can't wait for more. I didn't see how many chapters there were, and I was like "ARGH!" when I found out there weren't anymore. Please continue ;D

Author's Response: LOL thanks! :P

Reviewer: bri93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 11:35 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

hehe Your not a horrible writer and I thanks you for posting a new chappy!!

Author's Response: awww ty :)

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 10:39 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

more!

Author's Response: *writes like a frantic* :D

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 03:50 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

Wow so cool I'm laughing my ass out here it's freaking alwsome :) can't wait

Author's Response: lmfao thx :D

Reviewer: nnniiinnnaaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 09:47 am Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

NO YOUR THE BEST author EVER I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH

Author's Response: awww :O you're so kind, thanks! :D

Reviewer: nnniiinnnaaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 09:30 am Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

OMG THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER :)

Author's Response: thank you!!!! :D

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/10 01:30 am Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

You must continue! SOON!
Love it!
XoXo

Author's Response: thank yous :D

Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 03:07 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

You are NOT a horrible author MAKE MORE :)

Author's Response: yess i will :D

Reviewer: Blackbyrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 05:54 am Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

lmao this is epic, i tell you, EPIC

Author's Response: awww :D i like epic things, ty :)

Reviewer: cherrybumbum88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 01:18 am Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

No, you so are not a horrible author, this is great! I love it!

Author's Response: ty :D

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 10:27 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

no you aren't horrible! you just need to maybe add more fluff and steam, i cant remember if you put a warning for smut or not but that will happen later. just make sure Tomi flirts back with Bill so it's more realistic and they'll fall for each other faster that way.

Author's Response: yesss the fluff and steam is coming :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 10:23 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

LOL
cute

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 08:54 pm Title: "Tomi, tell them about my plan!"

hehe i like the end

Author's Response: lol, not really the end... more like the beginning :P but thx :)

Reviewer: cherrybumbum88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 11:08 pm Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

Ahhhh, this is so great ^_^

Author's Response: thank you :D

Reviewer: Vampiredreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 09:58 pm Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

continue it soon :) First Chapter is pretty good.

Author's Response: thx :)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 08:15 pm Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

That's a promising start for a good story I think. Oh, evil Bill.. lol.
Keep writing.
My door is open if you're interested in a beta.
My name is Ema, email ema.dan AT live.com

Author's Response: lol thank you :D

Reviewer: Beth x Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 08:49 am Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

:) Yey this is awesome!!
I wanna see where this goes so bad.
You left a comment saying mebs today???
Yes :P??

Very very good though!

Author's Response: awws thankyous! :D i left a comment...? O.o

Reviewer: StillDollChan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 11:25 pm Title: "Tomi... what's twincest?"

*spazz flail* OMG YOU SO HAVE TO CONTINUE. OwO *ahem* seriously though, it's epic. :3

Author's Response: awwwwws thank you! :D *hugs for awesome review* i have ch.2 done, just need to beta it, however the hell i'm supposed to do that Dx

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