Date: 10/16/11 07:42 am Title: Scared?
nice story!
Author's Response: Thanks!rn
Date: 05/24/10 12:19 am Title: Scared?
This was great for a first fic. I remember my first fic being atrocious haha. Given that I do think it was ooc and a little rushed but keep up the good work! Try reading more interviews and fics or anything really to truly grasp the twins personalities for the future. Can't wait to read more from you soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks :) And I'm definitely hoping I'll improve for sure !
Date: 05/02/10 03:23 pm Title: Scared?
lmao. awe -favs-
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked :)
Date: 04/21/10 09:28 am Title: Scared?
awwwwwwwww.... i like this story its cute :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 04/10/10 04:37 pm Title: Scared?
Well that explains the very OOC personalities the twins have in this story.
Hmm.. so I dont think this was bad, but I also didnt think it was great. I guess it was just ok for me. Sorry.
The end especially was rushed and cut short, and Tom felt a little too accepting too quickly.
Anyways, keep writing, this was a cute idea. Wet dreams. *snickers* Cute.
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it at least okay :) i'm working on other stories which I hope are better. I didn't really think this one was my best. rnIt's great that you liked the idea xD Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 04/07/10 10:51 pm Title: Scared?
it's hard for me to imagine twins having personal space issues, and for Bill to like Tom and be so unwilling to stay with him when he's scared...it seems kind of heartless and out of character. It wasn't a bad story, i mean i liked reading, but i think there were some inconsistancies, from my perspective at least.
Author's Response: Thank you for your opinion! I really appreciate it. I guess it doesn't really sound like somehing the twins would do, but you never know. Some people are actually like that :P
Date: 04/07/10 05:15 pm Title: Scared?
Great story. PLEASE do a sequel??? PLEASE
Author's Response: Thank you ! I don't know what I'd do for a sequel :P I'll think about it though :)
Date: 04/07/10 06:59 am Title: Scared?
aw what a sweet ending :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: 04/07/10 12:59 am Title: Scared?
I liked this, it was different.
The ending was just a little iffy, but it was still good.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry if you didn't like the ending :S Oh well :)