Date: 04/07/10 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm definitely glad that it wasn't straight sex. It made it different and very, very good. :D
But, alas, your writing is always very, very good. :)
And I think you should write more Torg. It's just so adorable. :)
The giant comment killed me, btw. xD
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I really enjoy writing Torg quite a bit. And I love that the giant comment killed you! lol It just seems like such a Tom and Georg interaction, doesn't it? xD
Date: 04/07/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, i like! lol
Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I didn't see this! I'm glad you liked it, thank you! :D
Date: 04/07/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, i like! lol
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/06/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
good story
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/06/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
*shakes head*
good luck on building those boundaries Georg i don't think it will take much for Bill to knock them all over
XD
Besides he should know what he's getting into it's bill and tom they come together like a package you date one you are dating the other as well just without the benfits XD
Author's Response: Heh, I'm sure he realizes. Just...not with Tom's dick in his mouth. xD
Thank you for reading! :D
Date: 04/06/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahaha, so cute! And hot! I didn't have a chance to read all the FQFs before the reveal, so this was brand new to me. You know I've been kind of wanting to read some top!Tom, and this gave me that vibe. It really satisfied my need to read some Torg with Tom in a dominant role--even though it felt really equal between them, it was different in that Georg didn't automatically roll Tom over and have his way with him, which, although nice on occasion, is the scenario that seems to play out in most of the Tom/Georg fics I've read. This was really refreshing in the way their dynamic played out, but it was also just really well written and hot. I loved their moment of realization when Tom has his hand in Georg's pocket--their feelings in that moment were so vivid. I loved this Mel!
Author's Response: Haha sweet! I'm SO glad you felt Tom in a dominant role here because I was actually thinking of you when I wrote it. I wanted it to go further, but it being their first time, just having realized that they might have what they wanted, I didn't think it would be realistic to have an actual top!Tom here. But, I was definitely thinking about you when I wrote this. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! Thank you so, so much, Jen. ♥