Date: 04/28/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 5
ohhmyybill the story is getting more interestingg now lol cant wait for the next chapter :]
Date: 04/27/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Thank's for the update-anxiously waiting to "get down to business" ^_^
Date: 04/27/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
IT'S LOVELY. I DROOLED. :3
Author's Response: that's nice xD
Date: 04/27/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
GAH!! The ending was soooo sweet!! Awwww
Date: 04/27/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
AH! I loved it! So adorable at the end!!!!
Date: 04/26/10 02:29 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww mannn, I thought something was going to happen!!
Date: 04/22/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg
i typed all of those in sequence, like, i don't copy in paste *iz proud*
anyways! i love this. i don't even know what to say. but i like the story.
i think, tom should realise being ~gay~ doesn't matter. denial doesn't help anyone, it just prolongs possibilities.
and bill.......... i want to see his point of view. not for a long time, but does he think tom's cute? and whyyyyy was he staring at him when he was gardening? AND IS TOM TEACHING HIM HOW TO SWIM JUST A SCHEME TO GET INTO HIS PANTS? i think so.
c:
Author's Response: So far, favorite review of this story yet xD
Date: 04/22/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww.
Why isn't that V. part not up yet?
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
I LOVE Tom's monologue in his head! xD
Author's Response: The V part isn't up because the grilled cheeses took too long so it's just gonna be the first thing to pop up in the next chapter, promise. And the next chapter will probably be up sometime this weekend. C:
Date: 04/21/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a really sweet story.I love it.
Date: 04/21/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
great! whant more!
Date: 04/21/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 4
yay!! I'm excited for the swim lesson!! wet sexy boys! =)
Date: 04/21/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 4
ack! why oh why did yu have to stop there! bitte keep it comin!
Date: 04/20/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
i like your story i cant wait to read the next chapter :]
Date: 04/18/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
keep it comin!
Date: 04/18/10 06:27 am Title: Chapter 3
ohmahgod.
This is getting too exciting! Lol.
Date: 04/18/10 06:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Really? Bill can't swim? Aha.
Love this!
Date: 04/18/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 3
So far so good. looking forward to more!
Date: 04/17/10 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Did I already said that you are one heck of talent?
OMG! I'm really looking forward in reading more of this story!
WRITE MORE AND UPDATE FASTER!
Date: 04/17/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 3
haha i like this give me more!