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Reviewer: ShadowWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 11:31 am Title: Jealousy...

Awesome story.. and yay! you like within temptation too!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah! Within Temptation is awesome; I listen to them heaps when I'm writing!

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 05:06 pm Title: Jealousy...

Aw! So very cute! I really, really liked it.

Author's Response: Thank youuuu! XD

Reviewer: jackie2249 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 03:10 pm Title: Jealousy...

there needs to be more

Author's Response: I'm thinking about writing more... maybe...

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/08 04:00 am Title: Jealousy...

loved it
wow...it was good that for a change Bill was the one being kissed and Tom the one being jelous and left alone on a roof...its usually the other way around ;)

Author's Response: I thought that it had to happen at some point... I'm glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: Neptunsie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/08 07:02 am Title: Jealousy...

I was looking like one of those fishes with a weird smile, you know, while reading this. So cute, angsty, pretty, well-written and... Everything else that I can come up with xD

Within Temptation loba! (I'm taking on my wife now :O)

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you thank you thank you... and aren't Within Temptation awesome?? ^_^

Reviewer: Blue Penguin Dude Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 11:28 am Title: Jealousy...

I like this is very sweet

I love Within Temptation too :)
Plz continue
*gives cookie*

Author's Response: Thank youu! Within Temptation are awesome for writing fics :P

Reviewer: Neptunsie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 09:40 am Title: Jealousy...

*checks off as TOBEREAD*

Author's Response: ^_^ Thank youuuu!

Reviewer: Tavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 09:32 am Title: Jealousy...

what a beautiful story :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Aaliyah_Babygurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 08:09 am Title: Jealousy...

OMG this is so sweet... i'm breahing so hard.. i hope they will be 2gether no matter what

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 07:33 am Title: Jealousy...

Oh-ho! Jealous Tom is like, something new here xD I liked it, really. Write something longer the next time, I'll read it with pleasure ;)

Er, before I forget, there's what I think is a mistake: "identical eyes boring into each other" boring I think isn't the right word xD you know, they pay attention to mistakes by now, so.. just for help :D

Author's Response: Hmm.. *checks fic* It's a word, I think... maybe I spelt it wrong or something. I'm having trouble figuring out how to change the story text though O_O... anyways, thank you for reviewing, and the suggestion. I'm trying to change it! :)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 06:45 am Title: Jealousy...

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww
so cuteeeee

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thank you!

Reviewer: tornribbon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 05:34 am Title: Jealousy...

Oh no! I forgot to rate! *spazzes out*
Here you go :D bunch of stars!

Author's Response: Woo! Thanks!

Reviewer: tornribbon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 05:32 am Title: Jealousy...

aaaaw!! This is the sweetest thing :') You wrote this so beautifully I just want to cry :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank youuu! I'm glad you liked it!

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