Date: 06/03/10 08:18 pm Title: Epilogue
LOVED this story -- not only was it interesting and full of long, lovely chapters, but it was written SO WELL. I adore your writing style, and can't wait for what you cook up next!
...maybe a story about Bill and this Robert character? Or whoever will be his true love? :D
Date: 06/03/10 07:23 pm Title: Epilogue
Aww, I absolutely loved this story from start to finish. I loved the final chapter :D
Date: 06/03/10 06:36 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm sad that this is over, the updates made me bounce no matter what mood I was in when they came to my in-box, but this was perfect. Thank you for sharing it with us, Ms Peki. <3
Date: 06/03/10 06:10 pm Title: Epilogue
I can't think of a decent review now, I'm about to cry from awww-ness !
To start with, I'm quite sad it ended, but it did ended in the most astonishing way it could. I have said it quite a few times already, but it is the best fanfic I have ever read, and I've read quite a lot of them. It's just so realistic, and you write so good, it's hard to take the eyes off for a few seconds until you finish all the chapter.
About the epilogue. I totally loved it whole, but the part when Bill called and asked if he interrupted and Tom said to him "don't be stupid" was so awww worthy.
And of course the part, when Erica's song played on the radio. It was such a brilliant idea, loved it.
I'm so touched by this fanfic, I even caught myself thinking that I wish something like that happens in real life to them. Tom's in love, they are on their own label, Georg's about to become a father... isn't it amazing. It is. So is this fanfic and I want to thank you for it SO SO MUCH.
I'm so printing this out tomorrow when I get back home since it's too late for it now :D
Thank you once again, and keep writing, you have a huge talent.
ps. I will be always checking for that glimpse of Tom's future. I already can't wait hehe:)
Date: 06/03/10 05:29 pm Title: Epilogue
*_*
I always feel guilty for not having coherent things to say, but you just tell this story so well and I think I love it most for being so true to the boys and being Tom's story. I hope we do get that future glimpse someday!
Date: 06/03/10 05:06 pm Title: Epilogue
I am such a pussy: I cried! xD Congratulations on being the first to make me do so at a fanfic! You're a wonderful writer; natural born, my dear. This was great and I hope to read more from you :D
Date: 06/03/10 04:58 pm Title: Epilogue
Kay, I feel like the biggest bitch ever for not reviewing this story even once but I stalked it like a…well, like my inner fan girl. I’m convinced everybody has one ;]
So here I am. Beware, I feel the makings of a pretty lengthy monster review at the tips of my fingers.
First off, I love this story. Especially how well you characterize everyone. From Erika to Georg and everyone in between. I especially loved the connection between Bill and Tom’s characters and all their twiny moments. How Bill was always there for him no matter what but he’d also give him a push, nudge, and a shove every once in a while.
A few months back I was trying to think up a story where the twins would stitch places. Since I was young, I’d always sort of wanted to try that myself. Alas, I have no twin. I have a younger cousin who once told some random kid we were twin sisters once, but that was just…lol retarded. I’m 5 years older than her. See how well that works? Anyways, I ended up not writing it. I couldn’t come up with a decent storyline or a plot or anything so the idea sorta fizzled out. And then this magically appeared in the recent stories and I was hooked on it like junior crack!
Oh yeah, I’ve been stalking you from day one.
No, I am not really stalking you. That would be beyond creepy…and awkward. Should I stop saying that?
Ok, anyways, I was all excited. And you just kept reeling me in with every new chappy. I honestly cannot believe I haven’t said anything about this until now…now that it’s over. I think I was just too caught up with practically devouring each chapter. Darling, you write amazingly. I’m a Bill girl but you had me falling hard for Tom and a little more with every new chapter.
I’m kinda sad it’s finished but at the same time really happy. I'm not exactly sure how that works but it does x]. It’s been quite a bumpy ride and a most magnificent read. Thank you for such a lovely story =D
Date: 06/03/10 04:44 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG. Amazing. Perfect. I have no words.
Except maybe how about part 2 with Bill & Robert? ^.^
Date: 06/02/10 07:51 am Title: Chapter 11
OH MY LORDY!
you are one of the most amazing writers i have ever come across!
fuck...i can not wait for the next chapter and i ADORE this story! xD
keep it up!
Date: 05/29/10 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
HOLL SHIT that was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!! even the sex was awsome. makes me need a cigg lol. Cant wait to read the next chapter ^_^
Date: 05/27/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yaaaaayyyy!! Omg this had me all buzzing with happiness. I'm so happy they're together again.
Wow, this a beautiful story. I read the whole thing in less than two days.
And aw, only one more chapter.
Date: 05/27/10 06:55 am Title: Chapter 11
yayyyyyyy!!
:DD
Date: 05/27/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 11
ahh there are no words to describe how much i loved this chapter! :DD everything is perfect, from the way Tom was so nervous and jittery that he decided to wax (LOL) to how he is so unsure of himself when it comes to Erika
Date: 05/26/10 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
*squeee!!!!* I loved this so much! I was thrilled when I saw the word count for this chapter, and every bit of it was perfect. To start out, I love the way you write the twins, as always. The waxing bit made me lol. As a twincester, of course, I would have written it in an entirely different way, but the way you did it, it just felt like they completely thought of themselves as the same person. Bill didn't bat at eye at walking in on Tom in an awkward situation and Tom seemed just as comfortable with Bill being there. It was a really interesting way to read them and I thought it was so entertaining and well done.
Then the scene between Tom an Erica at the wall--it was such an important one because so much had built up and there was so much at stake, and I was glad you took the time to develop it right. I really loved the part where she said she thought Tom said "I love you" to all the girls and he said she was the only one.
And then the sex. :D I kept watching the scroll bar throughout the chapter wondering, Is she going to fit it into this chapter or will we have to wait for the next... And I'm so glad you fit it into this chapter! :DDD It was so hot and sweet and perfect. I love how eager Tom is and how much happiness just radiates out of them that they finally can be together the way they've been wanting too. *happy sigh*
Oh, and last but not least, Bill's outfit in the kitchen, with the sweatpants and the Gucci glasses and chains...I could soooo picture it and it made me smile so big. Oh Bill. *shakes head*
In short, I really loved this chapter so much!
Date: 05/26/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
HELLZ YEAH!!!
honestly looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05/26/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ahhh, this chapter! I've been waiting for this.
For some reason, I thought it'd take Erika a bit longer to cave, but at the same time, I'm glad she didn't. Their make up was beyond cute; the way they both wanted each other so much but kept stumbling over their words, and the last part is self explanatory, I think. Very sexy but at the same time, still loving and full of emotion.
I'm sad the next chapter is the last, but I'm sure it will be just as good as this one :)
Date: 05/26/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
YES
I have been waiting for this chapter! I loved it and I'm really glad they ended up together! :D
Date: 05/26/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
I had resigned myself to a bittersweet-type ending for this what with the lying the deception and all, but this was an amazing turn. Thank you. :)
Date: 05/26/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11
I've been on this site for the whole of last week just looking for an update to this story. The fact that I'm reading this in class probably shows how much I love this story right? This chapter was so worth the wait. You're a great writer! And now I'm a very satisfied reader. I'm very very eagerly anticipating the final chapter. :)