Date: 04/19/10 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Hmm I don know about this story, it's kind of sad that she doesn't like Tom, and she likes Bill but Bill doesn't like her, this is a effed up lov triangle :/ I feel sorry for Tom!
Author's Response: Hmm, I don't look at it like that - the way I see it, she doesn't like Bill, she likes Tom-as-Bill. There's a difference, and it'll come into play eventually :) Also, Tom got himself into this situation, so it's his own fault he's suffering the consequences. Boy's got to learn. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/18/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
First off, I LOVE the way you write these boys. You make them so REAL. And second, ouch. When she was talking about her past boyfriends being liars and cheaters, Tom, I think that was supposed to be your cue to come clean.
Author's Response: The cues are going right over his head *g* The boy's in for some trouble. I'm glad you enjoy the characterization, that means a lot to me. Thank you for reading!
Date: 04/18/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story so much and get really excited when you update :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you do :)
Date: 04/18/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story so much--the premise, the band's dynamics, even the OFC. ;) Every chapter is such a delight--I love the way you write Tom and I'm so excited that this story is going to be nice and long. :D And good boy, Tom, for not doing something he'd regret later.
Author's Response: *squeals* Thank you! Your opinion means so much to me. I'm absolutely thrilled to hear you like the OFC, that's the hardest one to pull off. The boys will be the boys :) Ah, I do love writing them. Thanks so much for your support!
Date: 04/18/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoy reading this ! And the chapters are so long, I love it!
I really would like to read more about how she comunicates with Tom as Tom if you can understand what I mean. I can't wait them to share their recipes or him show his draws if they will. It really seems like she could have a thing for him also hehe. I hope she does!
Can't wait to read more, so anxious to know how this will continue.
One of the best stories here, really !
Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait !:))
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving such a lovely review, I appreciate it! What you mentioned about her communicating with the real Tom is coming up next and a part I am very much looking forward to :) You're right, that's the puzzle piece that's missing - it's coming, I promise!rnrnAnd I am updating as quickly as possible! I wish I could be faster, but the chapters turn out long (to my own surprise *g*) and I don't want to split them up if it means sacrificing the unity of a scene. rnrnBut, anyway, there will be more soon. Thank you for reading, I'm happy you like it!
Date: 04/18/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Tom. I love how you're writing this though, how much you get into all of them. Fabulous ~
Author's Response: Haha, I can't really pity him - he got himself into this situation! But of course he won't have to suffer forever ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/18/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I doesn't matter what kind of story do you write, het, gen or slash, you always manage to surprise me with the relationship between the twins...
Your characters are very well built (I don't know if that is the right word in English) and Erika seems very real. Love the story!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy to hear you like all my different attempts at genre :) That's very nice of you to say. Glad you like this one!
Date: 04/18/10 06:55 am Title: Chapter 4
I feel so sorry for Tom, but also can't help giggling madly along with Bill. This really deserves so much more attention than it's getting *_*
Date: 04/18/10 06:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I didn't get chance to read this fully before I went away, but I do really enjoy it. I love all the little details you put in and how light it all feels. Lovely *_*
Date: 04/18/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 5
i should be asleep right now, but i couldn't resist not reading this. THIS STORY IS FREAKIN AMAZEBALLSSS! loveloveloveitttttt
Author's Response: Amazeballs, haha. :D Thank you, glad you enjoy it so much!
Date: 04/18/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 5
I really, really, really like this!!! I LOVE it actually! You are an AMAZING writer!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoy it!
Date: 04/17/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
this is so good - i've always liked to think up scenarios in my head where the twins switch places, but nothing as creative as this :) keep up the awesome job - i'll def. be waiting for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's such a fun scenario to play around with - you should give it a shot too! :)
Date: 04/17/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is truly a great story line and you are telling it very, very well. Your words flow easily, your twin interaction is just perfect and so cute, and I like to read the occasional het. This is really good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing the twins, so I'm happy you like it!
Date: 04/17/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
PLEASE update this again soon: it's hard to find decent het-writers on here and your story is one of only two I like reading on here at the moment :] When I'm not busy writing, of course, ha ha!
I have some theories, but I want to save them to see what happens. You're a very smooth writer. Do you write other things, too?
Author's Response: Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. I'm eager to continue this soon, so I hope updates won't be too long. rnrnI'd be interested in your theories :) although I think the plot is pretty straightforward, so there won't be any dramatic twists. I'm glad you feel this runs smoothly, that's always very important to me. I usually write gen with the focus on the twins, but I've written everything from band gen to twincest to het in this fandom! What's most important to me is an in-depth characterization of the boys, so as long as that's a given, I'm an equal opportunity writer/reader :)
Date: 04/13/10 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4
*snicker* poor Tom can't get a break!
The twin moments are hilarious.
Update sooon!
Author's Response: Thanks, the twins are my favorite thing to write :) Glad you're liking it.
Date: 04/12/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Swindled again! haha :D. I can see it all going wrong if she sees them both together, poor Tom...
Author's Response: Eventually it'll go wrong - but not yet *g* Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/12/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
holy shit. this is SEXY. it's like EXACTLY how i imagined Tom's head sounding like (if that makes sense). Girl is fucking lucky. but Bill should've been bisexual not gay lol more hope for me
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoy Tom's voice, he's my favorite character to write. Bill being gay served the story better this time around, but I don't necessarily portray him that way usually, so I don't think it makes much of a difference for his characterization, actually. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it anyway, thank you!
Date: 04/12/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
hahaha I find it very funny:p more please! love it
Author's Response: Glad you do! Thank you! :)
Date: 04/12/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love this story. It's nice to read a good het every once in a while, and this is exactly what I've been wanting. I love the twins' relationship and I love Tom in this. I can't wait to see everything blow up in his face.
Author's Response: I can't wait to write the inevitable blow-up! *g* It's such fun to make Tom suffer a bit. Glad you like it, thank you!