Date: 04/29/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww! When Tom falls he's going to fall hard!
Update soon I
Author's Response: Indeed :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/29/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice story, your original ideas really entertain me! Although a lot of fan-fics feature Bill dressing up as Tom or the other way round, but yours had a good reason and was so entertaining. Your story inc. lots of typical Bill and Tom moments which were so true to their persona. I honestly cannot find anything wrong with your fan- fic and i will absolutely read the next chapters!
You are a fantastic author!!
10/10
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying this take on the idea of the twin-switch. I'm having a lot of fun with it. Hope you'll continue to like it!
Date: 04/28/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awe, Tom Tom loves her! =D
I can't wait for the next one!! I absolutely love this!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you like it!
Date: 04/28/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 04/28/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwwwwwwww! i thinkk when Tom finally does want to tell her, she finds out in some weird way, gets pissed, & he gives her the drawing & she forgives him & then love happens
Author's Response: You're close, but not quite :) Hope you'll enjoy the new chapter!
Date: 04/28/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I flailed along with Bill *_*
Author's Response: Haha, I may have flailed while writing :)
Date: 04/28/10 04:05 am Title: Chapter 3
I have rarely read such a realistic twin interaction. And I have to say you HAVE been thorough with details, which is not simple at all. You picture them in a very realistic way, it's pure delight to red. My face stayed stretched in the most serene smile the whole chapter. This is so good, in every respect. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing the twins, so this is a wonderful compliment :) I'm happy you liked it and hope you're continuing to enjoy it!
Date: 04/25/10 09:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh, man, do you know how hard it is to find a good het fic these days? I've seen the odd chapter on LJ, but never read it and then I spotted it on THF and decided to, and I'm so glad I did.
I love the plot of this story, and Erika isn't a Mary Sue, which makes a change to normal. She's kinda quirky and full of life and real. I feel sorry for Tom in his dilemma though, but he has Bill, so I'm sure he will be alright in the end!
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm happy you're enjoying it. Yes, Tom is in a bad spot right now, but he got himself into it so he has to deal with the consequences ;) I'll promise though that he'll be all right, one way or another. You're right, he always has Bill. I'm very pleased you like the OFC though, that's always hardest to pull off. Thanks again!
Date: 04/24/10 11:11 am Title: Chapter 6
aww, the ending made me sad :(
Author's Response: Sorry ;) Hope the next chapters will make up for it.
Date: 04/23/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE THIS STORY! *___* The relationship developing is so achingly slow, but right on track all at the same time. And you have a way of making each scene between Tom and Erika just spark with sexual tension. I think I'm going to have to fave this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad if the tension between them is tangible :) That's what I was hoping to achieve. I'm so happy you're enjoying this so much! <3
Date: 04/23/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
LOVE IT!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/23/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh, tell her, Tom! She likes you, we can all seeeeeeeee that! *_*
Author's Response: Hmm, all in good time :)
Date: 04/23/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I could really feel all the emotion in this chapter and it's making me feel so bad for Tom. The poor guy!
Author's Response: Oh, he got himself into this mess, so now he has to suffer :) I'm happy you feel for him, though. That's a lovely compliment, thank you!
Date: 04/23/10 11:59 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow. He really likes her. Next chapter please.
Author's Response: Yes :) I'll keep the chapters coming as quickly as I can. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/23/10 11:54 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad this updated *_* Love it still, love the twin dynamic and get the feeling Erika knows things, lol. It's such a gorgeous fic.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I'm so happy you like it!
Date: 04/23/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Awe, poor Tom =/
I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope he Tom gets up the courage to tell Erika soon.
Author's Response: All in good time :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/21/10 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is so freakin amazing! PLEASE update ASAP! I have to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you like it!
Date: 04/20/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5
So. I intended to write you a glorious and in depth review once I had finished with this chapter -- but I find myself a little speechless. It is a glorious and deep kind of speechlessness? This story is beautiful. Your characters, as always, I love, the twins and Erika and the Gs. I love how you write the twins, and I'm a little surprised, but pleasantly, that I am actually rooting for Tom and Erika. I look forward to their scenes together -- at the beginning of the chapter when Tom texted Erika to have coffee together, I flailed a little and thought hopefully 'Will that be in this chapter? =D!' and then caught myself and was a little confused. But as I said, it is a pleasant confusion! ;3 I just love this, and continue to be in awe of your writing. &hearts!
Author's Response: Jelly! <333 You are the best, and your reviews the sweetest things. Thank you so much, your good opinion means the world to me! *huggles*
Date: 04/19/10 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooo, Tomi is in looooooooove! *_* Love this and I can't wait for the truth to come out. :D
Author's Response: I can't wait either :) I'm having such a blast. Thank you for reading, it means a lot to me!
Date: 04/19/10 08:39 am Title: Chapter 5
I like the story but god it's fucking long. Wow how long do you work on this? Hours? Days? Shizz.
Author's Response: Well, personally, I like reading longer chapters so that's what I write. I see no point interrupting the natural flow of a story for the sake of cliffhangers, or posting a part of a chapter before the whole thing is done. That's just how I do it. And yes, I work on each chapter for days - a whole story of this scope will often take months. But I think that's normal if you're serious about writing :)