Date: 05/06/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved it. You write so well! I love how Tom cried at the end, it was very real. ahh, the secret is out finally. I can't wait to see what happens next! :) And I love how the episodes are really long. Please update soon :)
Date: 05/06/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow. That was so sad. I have tears in my eyes. I absolutely love this. :)
Date: 05/06/10 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
FUCK, I LOVE THIS! God, please update soon, this story is incredible and i don't know how much longer i can wait! your writing is unbelievably amazing and the way you write tom and bill is perfection! pleaSE UPDATE SOON! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?!?!
p.s tom crying = two huge thumbs up. it's nice to see a tough guy cry ya know :D
Date: 05/06/10 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the way you write, I really do. It comes easily for you which is obvious. Oh and congratulations on the feature!
Again, I adore how you've brought Tom and Bill's relationship into focus. I picture them just like that and that's exactly how my twin and I are. In fact this morning he caught me sitting in the living room writing a song at 5 in the morning xD
Anyways, I thoroughly enjoy reading this story and I hope to see an update from you soon: this chapter made me all teary! Beautifully realized.
Date: 05/06/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh noes! The kiss tells all!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
XD
Date: 05/06/10 11:47 am Title: Chapter 8
and the truth comes out! oh god poor tom. i feel so bad for him. but at least he finally got the truth out and she finally found out. but erika likes him too!! ahh i love this. thanks for the update!
Date: 05/06/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor stupid, dumb Tom ♥ But you write this so well, still loving it and darn if I didn't totally ditch going shopping to stop and read this, lol.
Date: 05/04/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Tom have to tell her and fast.
Date: 05/04/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 4
I don't know he didn't want try it as himself. He have been himself all night, restrained but it's him. More he lies to her and goes further more it will be difficult to tell her. He can't sleep with her as Bill because him sure that's not Bill she wants anymore.
Date: 05/03/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
*_*
Author's Response: :D
Date: 05/03/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely love this! The combination of your writing style and the plot are amazing. I became addicted to this story from the first chapter. Everything just draws you in. It makes you wonder how everything is going to end up and how long it will take Tom to own up to his lie. Really sweet and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased the story leaves you wanting more, that's a great compliment :) I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.
Date: 05/02/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh my gosh. I normally really don't like reading het but... oh my gosh. this story is AMAZING. You have an amazing writing style. I LOVE how you describe Tom's emotions. I love how you describe Erika and I like the image that these descriptions put in my mind. And plus, this is a summer story! I can not imagine any more good things being together in a story. You really need to post the new chapter soon or I might just die ... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for giving this het fic a chance then! I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. The new chapter is up, so I hope you'll like it.
Date: 05/02/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
UM WOW! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Oh, definitely :)
Date: 05/02/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Right. On a hunch, I decided to have a look at the featured fic. I never do that. Just like I don't like het, I do expect some nc 17 content rather soon than later and no way I bother to read an unfinished/WIP fic.
Still, here I find myself hours later, my Sunday afternoon gone, having read everything you've posted so far of The Best Laid Plans.
The blame is, of course, entirely yours. It's original, full of good characterisation and believable dialogue, which, all in all, is not uncommon. But it is rare, to find a story so fluently, seemingly effortlessly WELL WRITTEN. Thank You.
On the off-side, now I feel compelled not only to tag this tale but also to find out, and hell, probably read what else you may have written... ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for giving this a chance :) I'm really happy you enjoyed it and it turned out to feel worth your while. Thanks also for your comments on my writing, I'm not a native speaker so I'm very pleased the narrative felt effortless. That's very kind! Hope you'll continue to enjoy it.
Date: 05/02/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
my last review somehow got shortened. anyway I was just saying that I got so excited when I saw that my fave fic is featured now! This fiction deserved this so much ! congrats !!
and please update soon. I check for new chapter everyday though I know you cannot update that fast as your chapter are always super long which I love
Author's Response: I felt so flattered to read that you check for updates, I do that with my favorite fics and I can't believe someone is doing this for something I've written. Thank you! I'm definitely trying to update as fast as I can.
Date: 05/02/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed the previous chapter, I somehow forgot. :X
But I love love this story so much, it's definitely my favorite one ever. You have a huge talent, you made this Erika girl so real. And the fact that Tom loves her ! ohhh he is so cute on your story!
I still adore all the parts where Tom and Erika interacts with each other. I can't wait to see how all this continues, how will she react when Tom finally tells her the truth... and I like that Erika's feelings were broken before as strange as it can sound, but it totally makes it all harder for Tom hehe. And this thing that Erika thinks of Tom first, and just when Bill gotta mean something :D
I just hope it all ends with a happy ending after loads of drama haha
Author's Response: Oh, I can promise you loads of drama :) I hope you'll like the new chapter. Writing Tom and Erika together is my favorite thing about this, so I'm glad it's touching and enjoyable to you. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/02/10 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This story has had me hooked from the very start. I love how Tom has been portrayed, it's so cute how he has fallen for her. I can't wait to read more :D
Date: 05/02/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 7
He better hurry up and figure it out before I lose my patience xD
Author's Response: *g* I hope the developments that are up next will be to your liking. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/30/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
My mind's just going "Squeee!" That was so cute! 'Just the one'...Naww..
Author's Response: Hee, thank you :D
Date: 04/30/10 03:06 am Title: Chapter 7
Just the one~ ._. Awwww, Tom! I'm happy for him. I want to flail like Bill. =3 Well, I'm happy for him for now, and worried for him, for how Erika will react. He's so affected already, and I think it would just crush him if she reacted badly -- which, who could blame her? Though, she seems like she might like him more than fake!Bill anyway. I feel a little bad for fake!Bill, actually. Tom has a lot more personality than fake!Bill does, though. I loved this chapter, and I loved being able to see Tom interact with Erika as himself. So excited for more~!
Author's Response: I may have flailed like Bill while I was writing *g* I'm enjoying this so much and am so happy for your enjoyment of it. It's interesting you feel sorry for fake!Bill, but I agree, Tom!Tom just has more personality :) That's how it's supposed to be, no? Teehee, hope you'll like the next chapter! <3