Date: 05/08/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well, problem solved. I think it was the best way to tell her. I hope she will forgive him.
Date: 05/07/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
;_; Oh poor Tom, I'm teary eyed. Yes, he had it coming, but at the same time he is so in love that I feel bad he's heartbroken.
I must also say I really like Erika as an original character! Usually I'm not too fond of original female characters because they're too stereotypical or perfect, but Erika is real to me. And I knew she wasn't that stupid to not notice something was fishy. ^^ Brains and beauty.
I'm also looking forward to how the graffiti will play into this. I feel it's more important to the story now that you've mentioned it more. Is Tom the graffiti artist? It's a shot in the dark, but maybe it's an expression of his growing anguish of this mess he's made. I don't know! I wanna find out! Wonderful story! This is one of those I won't forget.
Date: 05/07/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Tom is going insane! I love this story but I feel that soon, the shit will inevitably hit the fan. Unless in some crazy way she somehow knows it's Tom and not really Bill. Gah! I love this story.
Date: 05/07/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow, there was so much in this to love. I love the twins' interactions again--the way their sleep cycles match up and the way Bill puts aside his tiredness when he knows Tom needs to work out the song. Bill's constant support and advise, and their constant closeness makes me aww all the way through this story.
And then, the encounter with Tom and Erica made my heart hurt--Tom's vulnerability in showing her the picture and then the moment when she realizes it had been him all along--I really didn't expect her to find out that way, and it was painful to witness Tom's heart-wrenching reaction, while at the same time it was nice to see him so affected, to see he really cared. I can't wait for the next part.
Date: 05/07/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Man this is crazy! It's really hard to picture Tom as Bill, to "see" Bill with Erika but that it's really Tom.
Date: 05/07/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, you're good, you're very good!
Date: 05/07/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 8
This continues to be absolutely fantastic. I never read het. This is maybe the third het story I've ever bothered to read on this site. It's completely amazing, your characterizations are so compelling. Please keep the updates coming!
Date: 05/07/10 10:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh my god. You're fucking killing me here! This is such an amazing story and the way you portray the twins are so realistic! It's amazing, I adore it. Need more. Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. Absolute fucking gem.
Date: 05/07/10 10:43 am Title: Chapter 8
I cant wait for the next part :O
Date: 05/07/10 07:48 am Title: Chapter 8
Drama ! Poor Tom, I really feel for him :/ Looks like he loves her so much ! I had tears in my eyes when I read that realization part ;/ everything was so good till she found out he had been looking at her for a long time. And even after that it was nice he told her he liked her and then Boom here comes the sad truth :(
I hope Bill and Georg will take a good care of that poor boy :/ and after that Erika gives Tom a chance to at least explain everything.
Love it!
and need an update! :D
Date: 05/07/10 02:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh god, I knew this bit was going to hurt. I nearly cried as it was when Tom showed her the picture he drew of her. And the kiss was so wonderful. Of course then she'd figure it out.
You've got me absolutely spellbound.
Date: 05/07/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 8
ahhhhhhh!!!!! oh god i love this! It's like a look into the tom we can't see through the tv screen or in the tabloids. This is amazing.
Date: 05/06/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
=OOO
OH GODDAMMIT.
Part of me thought Erika already knew and that was why she was flirting with both of them. And part of me thought Tom would get the chance to tell her, and they'd work it out.
No part of me expected that! =O Though maybe it should have. Oh, Tom. ;_; I feel so much for him. ._. The boy is just drowning in his love sickness, and he can't seem to take *action.* If he'd taken action in the beginning, when he'd first had an interest in her, it could have worked. If he'd taken action after the first date as Bill and explained, it could have worked. But he just can't seem to do it, and he sabotages himself as he lies in inaction, which is something I relate to a lot.
Georg and Bill to the rescue? *hopes* Tom serenades her and paints her more graffiti and she falls lovingly into his arms? *hopes more* IT COULD HAPPEN. It needs to happen. ._. She clearly cares about him. She's so sweet with him. She cooks and doesn't let him jog when he's tired and bonds with him over a shared interest in art. They're perfect for each otherrrr. *whine*
I had other thoughts of things before that ending, but it just blew them all out of me. =O I do love the imagery in this story, though. I swear I can *see* every scene, from Bill with his cheek on Tom's knee in the basement, to Tom and Erika jogging, to the dramatic ending -- everything is so real and vivid. I also just really loved Tom thinking of folding the napkins into swans. =B Oh god that boy. ♥
Date: 05/06/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
LOVE THIS!
Cant wait for MORE!!!
Date: 05/06/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Tom ='[
Poor Erika ='[
I felt my heart break for Tom when he fell down crying. I hope things work out, though
Date: 05/06/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
omg. i love you.
update.
Date: 05/06/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing! The best story ever.
Date: 05/06/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think I might love you. This is amazing. A-m-a-z-i-n-g. AMAZING. I need to go fangirl now before I embarass myself with a long and incoherent review of how fantastic you are.
Date: 05/06/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
I knew it was going to suck when the truth finally came out but eeesh. Poor Tom. Poor Erika. :( I'm very curious about what happens next.