Date: 05/11/10 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just read something in this chapter that i'm curious about....Is Bill gay in here???? Or is Tom teasing Bill and Bill is just going along with it? Or is it lyke saying his "happy"??? Well either way interesting story!! Good work!
Author's Response: Oh, I thought the dialogue made it clear, but yes, Bill is gay in this story (not that it makes any difference for characterization). Hope that clears it up. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/11/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awwwww! :( I feel so bad for tom! But i totally understand why she is so mad.
Author's Response: Yeah, he did do some pretty stupid things. But maybe he can fix some of them :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/11/10 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh noes! That didn't go well at all!
Tom should spray paint her gate! And blast that song for her for the whole neighborhood to hear!
Oh if only he hadn't kissed her! But then again, I don't think he'd want to keep such a secret from her.
Excellent! More soon!
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked this. Hope you'll enjoy the next one!
Date: 05/11/10 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh god....poor tom.
Author's Response: Well, he had it coming... ;)
Date: 05/11/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 9
0_0....Erika, Tomi's sorry. Get over it!!!!!!!!
Wow I can't wait for the next update! :) Soo excited!!
Author's Response: Well, it's only natural it'd take her a while to come around ;) But maybe she will. Hope you'll enjoy the new chapter, thanks for reading!
Date: 05/11/10 10:53 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG he was about to say her he loves her !! I really feel for Erika as well, but damn it was stupid of her to go all dramatic by saying "goodbye". And that witch friend of her got on my nerves. And I hate hate those stupid fans !!
He was really heartbroken in the begining, but I thought he's going to be okay after he talked to her. Maybe she wouldn't forgive him that soon, but still. And now ! He's even more broken:(
Bill is the best brother and the Gs are the most awesome friends ever.
Love it, update :)
Author's Response: There had to be some repercussions though, no? The girl deserves her moments of rage :) Thank you for reading and always leaving lovely reviews, I appreciate it!
Date: 05/10/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tom totally deserves all of this, but I want her to forgiiiiiiiiiiiiive him. ;_; And Bill is the best brother ever, btw. I love this. :)
Author's Response: Heh, patience! ;) I'm so thrilled you're enjoying this! Thank you!
Date: 05/10/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Things have to work out! They just have to!
I hate seeing Tom like this =/
Author's Response: Things are getting there, no worries :) But it might take a while. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/10/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh! The shit finally hit the fan, but I know she likes him... FIX THIS, TOMI! :D
Date: 05/10/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Tom!!! Argghh, this was so hard to watch play out, even though I knew it was coming. I still didn't think it would be so rough, poor baby. *pets Tom* I trust you to make this better, you know. *gives a stern glare*
Author's Response: *fidgets* I'm trying, I'm trying! Things had to get worse before they could get better! :) Thank you for reading! I'm so thrilled you're still enjoying it!
Date: 05/10/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh...oh dear :( but i guess since this is pretty much rock bottom, it can only go up from here...right? right? D: update soon please!
Author's Response: Well, we'll see. Hope you'll like the next chapter! :)
Date: 05/10/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think you touched base on how both of them are feeling splendidly. I'm heart broken for them both! I've only ever been on Erika's side of the ordeal but I know it's never easy on either person when these things happen. I'm dying for the next chapter, dollface!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad both their feelings are plausible and real. That's a lovely thing to hear! I'm happy you're enjoying this, and I hope you'll like the rest!
Date: 05/10/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
I was so excited when I saw you updated.
I feel really bad for him.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
Date: 05/10/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Tom ;_;
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 05/10/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
It shows you in recent updates, but there isn't a new chapter?
Author's Response: It's fixed now, sorry :)
Date: 05/10/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 8
Aaahh, poor Tom!! I hope Georg can fix him...
Date: 05/09/10 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude! This idea's worth millions xD I love it how the girl likes Bill and that drives Tom crazy... and it's even more hilarious how Bill doesn't seem to give a fuck lol. Tom wearing Bill's tight jeans and his glittery eyeshadows? Priceless, absolutely priceless xD I'm looking fwds to read the next chapter :D
Date: 05/09/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!! Really well written and very funny :)))
Date: 05/09/10 09:22 am Title: Chapter 8
aaaaaahhhh! omg i need to know what happens next! poor poor tom. i feel so bad for him, how can he possibly get her to like him again??
Date: 05/09/10 06:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Hooo boy. I just read chapters one through eight tonight, and I really loved every one of them. :) The way you write the relationship between Bill and Tom is so realistic and very believable, and it's been a ridiculous roller coaster of emotions coming from Tom. This story is honestly fabulous. :)
I didn't think Erika would find out the truth quite like that! Tom didn't even get to tell her himself. It probably serves him right, though. Poor guy. =/