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Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

no, dontt makee him struggle anymoree,,make himm happyyy

Author's Response: Half of the reviewers want him to struggle, half want him to pull it together *runs and hides* lol. Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Let bill struggle with himself!!! :D

Author's Response: So many people had a different opinion! I don't know what to do! lol. Hopefully everyone is okay with what happens. Thanks for the review!! =)

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

oh noooooooes!!! *sniffles*

horrible! )= so sad!!!

i need to read more *cries*

Author's Response: There will be more to read probably by sunday evening, lastest maybe monday morning. =)

Reviewer: xraindropss Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

I think Tom should man the fuck up an be a little pissed. I really prefer him as a... Well, a confident person.

But other than that, this is a freaking fantastic fiction! Nice work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Maybe I will have Tom man up, I will take this into consideration.=)

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

awww poor Bill :'(

Author's Response: Yes, poor Billa! =(

Reviewer: tokiohotelds2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

:'( i cried!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh no! I sorry! =(

Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Awww Bill need Tom as his knight in shining armour somehow D:

Author's Response: I think you may be right! =)

Reviewer: RetteMichGegenMeinenWillen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

yay hate on bushido time... fuck you bu!! really shit of him getting bill drunk like that.

Author's Response: I agree! Lets all hate on Bushido! =)

Reviewer: mariawh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Oh my God, I love the last part, when Bill goes to his mom's grave.. I love the whole thing, please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much!! =)

Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Make him man up and get his crap together.

Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

tell his dad bu drugged him and the raped him! and hurry and do it so they can prove it

Author's Response: I shall think about that. Thanks for the review!! =)

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

I love how you describe David as "the flamboyantly gay bartender". XD That made me laugh!

And I feel so bad that Bill was raped twice by Bushido! Ah! Will he find out that he was drugged or not? I really hope he does...!!

Author's Response: Yeah, at first I had the bartener as an OMC, but then I thought, I'll just make him David, lol. Andwe will have to wait and see if Bill find out or not =) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Chiklpr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Omg poor billi please update soon!
XoxoH

Author's Response: I will most likely be updating sunday evening =)

Reviewer: BabyBird89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Okay so I just sat a read the story in one go and first off it's amazing. Okay now I have problems with Bills dad and Alexia, not to excuse Bill for his behavior at all, but they both f'ed up. By bringing Simone in and never telling Bill about her, he ruined a fragile trust that Bill had in him and then Alexia does the samething with her lie. The Andreas verbally abuses someone with an eating disorder. Wow Alexia great guy. All in all I love the story but I just had to get that off my chest..Can't wait for your next update!!!!

Author's Response: You are totally right! Andreas should have stayed out of Bill and Tom's business! Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: bambs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

awhh :'( this is so heartbreaking!

Author's Response: yeah, poor Bill! =(

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

Pull it together.....some what. Maybe admit that he needs help or tell tom and his dad sorry. UpdAte soon! :)

Author's Response: I will consider that. Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: alumit Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 08:38 am Title: Chapter 10- “You don’t mean that...”

oh oh oh this story turns better in every chapter!!! i so wanna read what´s next bows on u...

i love this Bill by the way xD

Author's Response: Thanks! =)

Reviewer: alumit Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 08:38 am Title: Chapter 10- “You don’t mean that...”

oh oh oh this story turns better in every chapter!!! i so wanna read what´s next bows on u...

i love this Bill by the way xD

Author's Response: Thank u so much =)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 10- “You don’t mean that...”

bill needs a revelation. thanks for the update! keep up the great work, i love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =)

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 10- “You don’t mean that...”

ughnnn.. (just waits for you to update to say anything, not caring for this chapter)

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