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Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/11 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 2- "Bite me blondie."

My first review for this chapter didn't come through, for some reason. Anyway.. Bill is a bit of a brat, but .. he is amusing too :) So in a way, I like him. :D

Author's Response: He'll get more likable...eventually :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 3- "More than one can play at his little game..."

I like Tom's personality in this one :D I laughed when he asked if Bill was hot. Typical Tom! ^^ omg.. worst part is that I actually believed Bill. I mean, I knew that there would still be some drama, but I fucking believed him! Wow! He really is spoiled... wow.. BUT! I'm still so excited to see where this goes. :D Oh and of course, I can't wait for Tom and Bill to meet. :D

Author's Response: Yes, we couldn't have Bill changes his ways quite yet ;)

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/11 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1- "You ruined my life!"

“Oh my god you’re pregnant!” Andreas shouted, horrified. Okay, haha, that one cracked me up. :D as for Bill... wow, he's being overdramatic.. Gordon didn't ruin his life... Can't he understand that he just wants to be happy for once? Gordon can't make Bill happy if that means he has to make himself unhappy.. *sighs* Poor Gordon *hugs him* I hope bill comes around!Gahh, this is already sooo awesome!

Author's Response: Yes, Bill is quite the drama queen XD Thanks for reviewing!! <3

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/11 07:29 pm Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”

What a great start! :D I love the love between Simone and Gordon! And well.. andreas and natalie sounds nice. :D ooh, bill's gonna be a bit of a problem? well bring it on baby, im excited to "meet" Bill.. :D even though im sure he wont like simone.. but yeah.. on to the next chapter :P

Author's Response: I was surprised when I saw all the new reviews for this story XD I'm very flattered that your reading my story and that you like it so far <3

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 14- "Thank you for making me feel loved..."

i read the both of them and i definitely like this one better...and what a way to find your baby boy...moving on...



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: KussMichJetzt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 4- "It’s not my fault you dyed your hair purple."

I just started reading this story, and I'm loving it so far. I love the tension between Bill and Andreas, and of course the sexual tension between Bill and Tom. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that you are reading and liking my story so far. I'm very flattered and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :D <3

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/11 12:52 pm Title: Epilogue- “No problem...what are brother’s for?”

Ohmygod I love you! AHHHHHHH!!!!! *runs around screaming like a psycho* I just sat down and read this all the way through, and I am SO happy! I loved it! Way to go!

Author's Response: I'm very flattered you took the time to read this at all, especially all the way through in one go. Thank you so much! <3

Reviewer: Teresee Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 12:17 pm Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”

awwww, beautiful ending.. :3 great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 14- "Thank you for making me feel loved..."

good god what a shocker , love it thought.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."

nice.greate written.

Author's Response: Once again, thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 12- "Thanks mom, you always did know what to say... "

conforntation .

Author's Response: 0_0

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 11- “What have I done...”

aww this is really killing him. awesome update.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 9- "...then maybe this was a mistake."

wowey he was pmsing big time , greate update .

Author's Response: lol, i`d say. XD

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 8- "The way I shop, it should be considered a sport!"

ooh conflex . greate written.

Author's Response: Thanks! XD

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 7- “Have I told you how much of an asshole you are lately?”

nice timeng 2in 1 . kick ass chap . i knew their was something fishing with idoit group , i so dont think that britney ass chick is going to get something on bill.

Author's Response: Huh...I just messed my keyboard up somehow...I was trying to make the less than three sign (aka the `heart`) and it won`t work...What the heck did I do(I can`t even make the question mark, lol) I`ll have to randomly press keys until I figure it out. Anyway...thanks for the review! lol

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 5- "I can’t believe I’m stuck here with you two all day.”

eye for eye as they say , well done .

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 5- "I can’t believe I’m stuck here with you two all day.”

eye for eye as they say , well done .

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5- "I can’t believe I’m stuck here with you two all day.”

eye for eye as they say , well done .

Author's Response: THANKS! XD

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 4- "It’s not my fault you dyed your hair purple."

oh my my bill , this is awesome written.

Author's Response: Thank you X 10000000!

Reviewer: darkangle102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 3- "More than one can play at his little game..."

oooh let the games begin. this is awesome.

Author's Response: When I checked my email this morning and saw that I had so many new reviews, I assumed it was for my current story that I'm writing, I am so very happy to know that people are still readingand reviewing this story! Thanks! XD

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