Date: 05/18/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
Awwww!
This chapter was sooo cute and good and beautiful!
I cant wait for you to update! Hope it happens soon!
XoXo
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)
Date: 05/18/10 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
I enjoyed the chapter, but I did catch myself feeling weezy from the fluffiness. jk lol Cant wait for the updated chapter
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review! =)
Date: 05/18/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
awwww soooo sweet!!! now lets see some sexy time! lol
Author's Response: Sexy time is a must for every story involving Bill and Tom! lol
Date: 05/18/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
okay... im not gonna lie... this was a little bit too jumpy for me. not that im saying it's not good because it is GOOD... but you couldve dragged it out a bit more so that it would be kinda smooth.
NEwho... MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: More is on its way =)
Date: 05/18/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
LIAR! You liar liar liar!!
....
well maybe not...
But you are absolutely amazing!! I couldn't believe this is your first fan fic ever!! It seems that you've been writing for so long! This story is amazing! The plot is magical... everything is absolutely wonderful. I see everything play right in front of my eyes. I can feel my heart jump when there is an exchange of anger and love and sadness. I can feel the pain and the sorrow that Bill is going through. That, my friend, is a talent. A talent to truly sync your character's emotion straight to the reader. I love each character's role and personalities.
I started to read this as a time-killer when I ride the train in the morning (I save the webpage on my iPod) and you can just ask my friends and they'll tell you how I was squealing and laughing and gasping for air. They'd look at me like I'm crazy but the real lunatic is you, You're a writing maniac!! (in a good way):3
Continue writing please and update update update!! I'll definitely be waiting for the update and more stories from you!! woot! (BTW dont forget about Natalie.. I wanna see how the date went)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! You just doubled the size of my ego, lol. I'm very flattered, and so happy you are enjoying the story! =)
Date: 05/18/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
O.O
Aww! They're in love!
I'm glad bill finally opened up to tom and apologized to everyone
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! =)
Date: 05/18/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
This was really AMAZING!!! I actually enjoyed the fluff!!! :D ... Tom was soo sweet!!! I loved this chapter my new favorite now!!! Update soon please!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)
Date: 05/18/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
Aww fluff is cute XD
OHHHHHH i hope Bill and Tomi sexy time happens XDDD
I love your amazing writing, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =)
Date: 05/18/10 02:07 pm Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”
nice work, keep going! honey~~
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =)
Date: 05/18/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
this chapter was fucking INCREDIBLE!!!!! do you even understand how in love i am with this right now? it's insane
i'm glad Bill told Tom everything, it was a good start for their relationship
awwwwwwwwww they're in love, i'm so happy
amazing chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! =)
Date: 05/18/10 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
i want Tom/Bill sexy time!!!!! i loved this sugar~ you are such a wonderful writer~~~xoxoxoxo
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)
Date: 05/18/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
I want you to make love to me! WHAT THE F*CK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!
YEs tom was nice and took im back!! awww
Author's Response: lol. Thanks for the review! =)
Date: 05/18/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
I'm happy. I wish you'd seen my smile while I was reading. I liked this chapter. :D
Author's Response: I wish I saw your smile too!! lol. I'm glad you like it =)
Date: 05/18/10 11:28 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
woah yeah baby
Author's Response: XD
Date: 05/18/10 11:12 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
nooo!! u didn't make me sick with all the fluff!! i think it was needed ^^ bill needed some fluff in his life ^^
absolutely loved this chap ^^ yay for tom!! though i hope he's not gonna fuck bill before the doctors get to do a rape-test on him... i really hope he's got brains enough to take bill to the doctor... don't let bushido get away with it again =0
update soon?(A)
Author's Response: Thanks so much about the review! And you maybe right about a few things. More is on its way! =)
Date: 05/18/10 10:47 am Title: Prologue- “Umm...yeah, he might be a bit of a problem.”
~blushes hard~ you are too kind, my dear. im just old fashioned, i suppose.. not that old, but yes.. im glad you enjoy my reviews, youll keep getting them~
Author's Response: =)
Date: 05/18/10 10:43 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
*gag* XXDD....fluff over dose X_x...can they BE anymore girlier...but it was cute that they are trying to work things out...Tom you girl =P...too early for sexy time cause i know it would feel weird XD...too much drama for that...well lets see what the next chapter will bring us....a confrontation with Bushido maybe? or is it gonna be with the help =B
Author's Response: You were one of the supporter of more angst, I'm sorry to overdose you with fluff, lol. And you're right...perhaps it is to soon for sexy time. And Bushido just might pop up in the next chapter. Thanks for the review! =)
Date: 05/18/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
Wow awesome :D
Author's Response: Thanks XD
Date: 05/18/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
i'm happy tom forgave him, i wasn't sure if he would
Author's Response: The story wouldn't end very happy if he didn't! =)
Date: 05/18/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 13- "I need you..."
I LOVE FLUFF.
Author's Response: Fluff is the best! =)