Date: 05/16/13 02:34 pm Title: Max tries empathy.
This is such a good story!! I hope you continue it!!
Author's Response: You know, I think I will. Keep an eye on this space! x
Date: 07/29/12 04:01 pm Title: Max tries empathy.
I wish that you could come back and finish this story. It really is a lovely story and I'm pretty sure that a lot of people--including me-- would love to see the end of this chapter :)
Author's Response: That's very kind of you, and I think I will come back to finish First Place. Head back here soon for a new chapter! xx
Date: 07/29/12 03:50 pm Title: Max goes on a non-date.
Aww, this was a very cute chapter :)
Date: 07/29/12 03:34 pm Title: Max gets new clothes.
Yay! A date :)
Date: 07/29/12 03:22 pm Title: Max falls ill.
:D
Date: 07/29/12 02:58 pm Title: Max remembers laughter.
Beautiful, beautiful, absolutely a beautiful chapter. I love this story so much and the way you write it--it makes it completely relatable, and that's the reason I love it. I'm a great fan of your writing and discovered this story after re-reading "Assisting Perfection" which was another great story. But this story--the story of Max has a special place in my "Reading Heart" lol :D
Date: 07/29/12 02:39 pm Title: Max gets writer's block.
Wonderful chapter :)
Date: 07/29/12 02:01 pm Title: Max meets Tom.
This is a great beginning; I really enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 08/28/11 06:59 am Title: Max tries empathy.
Update :((
Author's Response: Soon! x
Date: 06/21/11 11:15 pm Title: Max meets Tom.
I love this story. I'm so bummed that you lost your files. I'm sticking around though. Even if your next update isn't for another 5 years, I'll still be here waiting for it lol unless of course you come back and say you don't want to finish it for whatever reason. Love this story.
Author's Response: It means so much to me that you're willing to wait. I've been in something of a block lately, so I'm sorry. I'll try my best to get a new chapter up as soon as possible.
Date: 03/17/11 04:25 am Title: Max meets Tom.
Please update soon. I've been rooting for this story ever since.
Author's Response: I'll try to work as fast as I can, but I lost all my files, so there's been a huge setback. I'm sorry to keep you guys waiting :/
Date: 02/22/11 07:05 am Title: Max meets Tom.
I am utterly crushed to find out that you haven't updated yet. Being the idiot that I am, I've only decided to read this story today and well, finished it. I JUST THINK THAT IT IS SO AWESOME. The setting, the characters gaaah amazing. And well uh, I just reaaaaaally want to know what happens next. Just like how the other girls feel after they found out that you haven't updated for about 70 days now. Yes, I counted. I am serious about finding out. Hahaha. So, sorry for the weird and extremely long review. Hope I didn't make you think that I was a total nut job. :D
Author's Response: I LOVE long reviews, so no problem ^^ And I'm so sorry I didn't update, but I lost all my chapters when my computer crashed. It was a huge loss, and I'm trying to get back on track soon. I'm glad you liked my story, though. And I will update as soon as I can.
Date: 12/27/10 10:10 pm Title: Max tries empathy.
It just keeps getting better and better; Max is a brilliant character and I absolutely love her. Tom remains intriguing and I'm loving it as well :) I love the unpredictability of your story...is a pleasure to read and I always smile when I see a new chapter up. Keep up the amazing work,I can barely wait to read what's next.
Frankly I think your het stories are one of the best in this site, and this one surely is underated, for it deserves much more praise than those stories being constantly celebrated.In my opinion it exceeds alot of het in here, so keep writting because I greatly appreciate your work :)
Author's Response: You can't believe how much your review makes me smile. In fact, I'm pretty sure I'm going to go around with a big dopey grin the whole day :3 And I appreciate that you feel that way about this story and the others, and I sincerely hope I never disappoint ^^
Date: 12/17/10 12:31 am Title: Max tries empathy.
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for next chapter! (:
Hope you win the nomination!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I really don't expect to, but it makes me happy that you hope so :3
Date: 12/14/10 06:37 pm Title: Max tries empathy.
I loved it!! It was so good!
I would love to see how things turn out between Tom and bill and Max.
Keep up the kick ass writing and update real soon!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try not to disappoint you :]
Date: 12/14/10 01:24 pm Title: Max tries empathy.
I wonder why is Tom so upset that he is going to meet his twin... But I have to admit I am glad, that Tom shows other emotion than kindness and smile, angry Tom is sexy :-)
Author's Response: I know, right? XD I love hateful Tom, lol!
Date: 12/14/10 10:32 am Title: Max tries empathy.
Thanks for the update :) I hadn't expected that Bill would be in this story, so I can't wait to read what sort of plot you got in mind.
Author's Response: Hope its exciting enough ^^
Date: 11/26/10 09:44 pm Title: Max goes on a non-date.
This story is addicting. Of all the one I've readen this one is the one worth waiting for, the one I actually look foward the most. I love Max, she is a subtantial main character and you have done a great job when developing her throughout the story. I cannnot wait to read more...the wait is torture haha, but like I said is also worth it.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm sorry the updates are so slow, I'll try and speeden stuff up :)
Date: 11/26/10 04:13 am Title: Max goes on a non-date.
I bet a million people is still reading this... You know, the... uh... text that Max writes is really beautiful... But I just wonder, do you write that? Cuz if you do... I´m impressed. Like, really, really impressed.
Author's Response: I HOPE people are reading this XD And yup, I write everything in there, including Max's stuff, so I'm flattered :3
Date: 11/25/10 02:56 pm Title: Max goes on a non-date.
WOW! kay, I wanted to read a new kind of fic so I tried this one and I'm so happy I did that! I'm SO hooked up on this story. Max's personality is really different from the typical OFCs but very realistic and charming in her own way. Tom on the other hand is a bit confusing so I cant wait to get to know the character better. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for trying my fic, and I'm thrilled you liked it. I'll try speed up updates, and thanks once again for reviewing!