Date: 05/04/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, this is simply cute! i love how Tom is so...sweet! I could never imagine the real Tom being this way, but it's sure nice to dream!
I hope that Jessica and her creepy friends will just leave! I don't like her, she's so...demanding!
You write so well, it's very good. Just a few minor errors, but hey, who cares?
Update soon!!! :D Please?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D I haven't updated in a while but the next update should be up in a couple of hours hopefully :) I like writing my Tom's differently from the way the would usually act :P. rnrnAs for the errors i have the best beta so they shouldn't be any but if there is there only small or minor. rn
Date: 04/28/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Seriously, I can't ever imagine the REAL Tom being THAT interested in Romeo and Juliet..but YOUR Tom certainly seems caught up in the story..and it's so unbeliavably cute! XD And of course Bill teams up with Tom to make a love story fro the summer show..it's probably gonna be the best (not to mention the most REAL) one of them all! Nothing like using your own lovelife for inspiration, right? *wiggles eyebrows*
But you know, sometimes I get really confused when reading this story, 'cause there are times when you write it like Tom actually can see, or he respond to thing as if he could. Or like in the last part here, when you wrote that Bill couldn't make eye contact with Tom..why would that matter at all if Tom can't see him, or know how or where to focus his eyes anyway? Just a little thing that's been puzzling me.. Is it unintentional, or is it perhaps relevant for the continuation of the story?
Oh, and I just LOVED how Tom KNEW that Bill was crying and needed to be comforted at the end! And how Bill feels at home and wanted in Toms embrace...sweet! ;)
Author's Response: wow thanks for the very long review! Well I am glad that u like the romeo and Juliet part i love the story of course and I like to make Normal Tom and Bill completly differnt i like to make them my verisons of tom and bill haha :P rnrnAs for the confusing I am very sorry if sometimes it seems like i have written as if Tom can see or react but It is very hard to write a blind person xP but i try my hardest as for the Bill couldn't make contact even tho Tom is Blind Bill still feels akward thats the feeling I was getting across. Hope that Cleared it up :) rnrnWell Tom Knows everything as he loves Bill very much he dont like Bill sad :) rnrnGlad u like the story so much makes me very happy :) thanks again for the review :)
Date: 04/28/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww...so sweet. I hate Jessica though...Bill needs to put the bitch in her place...
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review and Ya Bill should Punch Jessica ;)
Date: 04/27/10 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
*rolls eyes at that jessica girl and her bitchy friends*
bahh. i have a bad feeling she is going to cause some trouble :O
Finally Now Bill Knows why tom was scared of the dark. & it was cleared up for me why Tom was scared, even though he is blind. I didnt really think about the trauma it might have caused
[and he lost his family? *sniffle* poor sweet Tomi]
the end of this chapter deserves and 'awww'
so:
awwwwww (: teehee.
It was just too cute-sy ^^
---Samantha
Author's Response: Thank you for the awwwww :) well jessica she a bitch and bitches stay bitches :O As for Tomi He's going to be ok :) Thanks for the review :D
Date: 04/25/10 09:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, this was such a wonderful way to start my day! So sweet! *sigh* I'm totally lost in the moment myself.. I'll try to snap out of it before the next chapter's up :p
Author's Response: I am glad ur day started nice! :D That makes me happy I promise that the next chapter should be up soon XD Thanks for the review :D
Date: 04/25/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 7
it's sooo cute!! and sweet!! hope you update it soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Update shall be as soon as possible :)
Date: 04/25/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 7
how sweet
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 04/25/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 7
They are sooooo cute!!!!! please continue!!! ^^love this story!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review More coming soon :D
Date: 04/25/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw...poor Tom...Bill better take care of him...
Author's Response: I will make sure he does :) thanks for the review XD
Date: 04/24/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
I just read all 7 chapter's-LOVE IT! Cannot wait for an update.
Author's Response: Glad u love it XD update soon depends on school I will try my best :D Thanks for the reivew
Date: 04/24/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
OH. So, the plane incident helps
explain why Tom was crying in the
previous chapter, afraid of the
dark, and saying 'i dont want to die'
awww, i almost melted when i read the line saying:
-"he was caught in the moment and his
heart was caught between Tom's smooth
grasp"-
and who called "Bill, Tom." was that one of the G's?
i really like this chapter.
love is present, teehee
(:
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Glad u like the chapter I like this chapter the most as i had to re-write it but who doesn't love some fluff and romance and chesee :D Thanks for the review update should be soon depends on school -___- but I will keep writing :)
Date: 04/23/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
aww so cute :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 04/23/10 11:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Why would a blind person be afraid of the dark? I'm confused, lol. But I stay that way generally.
Author's Response: Um well it kinda plot and without giving away what i am planning to write i cant tell u but its fiction anything can happen :/
Date: 04/23/10 12:37 am Title: Chapter 6
that was a yummy chapter. update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Update coming as soon as possible :D
Date: 04/23/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 6
Um...great chapter, but what was up with Tom?
Author's Response: U'll have to wait and seeeeeee ;) thanks for the review :D
Date: 04/22/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww, the part where Bill and Tom were hiding in the shower...will it be explained later on the exact reason why he was so shaken up? i would think there would have been something previous in his life, that made him feel such a way when in the dark. [or maybe, thats just how he is?]
ahhh, bill gave him a little smoochie
(:
I can't wait to read more of Bill and Tomi in love.
Xx Really good chapter ^-^
---Samantha.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review as always :) It will be explained and are u snooppping on my stories can u read my mind cozz ur guessing this story very well :S lol Update coming as i soon as i can post XD
Date: 04/18/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love This!!!!!!!!! XD You have to continue!!!!!!! ^^
I love this story!!!!
:)