Date: 03/30/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 8
I noticed that, LOL. But it's cool.
I'm going to need you to not take a bunch of time to update this, because I am absolutely addicted to this story. It's taken me three days to read it. I've read it at home, in school, before bed, everything, and I'm disappointed this is the last chapter. SO UPDATE IT SOON! : D
Author's Response: Bahahaha! It will all be explained, so don't worry about it too much. But if you figure out how he's doing this before I say it, then DUDE. I'll be so amazed lol.
Eep, I think I already kind of broke that hope? ._. I had the chapter ready to post, but then my hard drive corrupted, and my laptop flat out died. .______. I just have bad luck with computers, I think. But I promise, an update will be coming as soon as I rewrite it. Also, thank you so much before your kind words! They mean a lot to me, and are so very encouraging, especially now. An update will be coming as soon as I churn it out! I'll try not to take another eternity.
Date: 03/30/11 03:14 am Title: Chapter 8
oh man, what an update. like...the utter DESCRIPTIVENESS of their heated dance floor moments...made me dizzy and hot, to be honest. so so SO vivid, i was THERE. omg, like, i'm not gonna rush you, but when they finally get to the horizontal tango, I might pass out. in a good way. super love for this, thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Wow! I'm so glad that it did so much for you. It's very encouraging to hear that you think it's so vivid, because that's what I aim for, and I'm never sure whether I'm hitting my target or not. So thanks! LOL, it's going to be quite a while before they actually get to that point, but I promise not to draw it out any longer than necessary. =)
Date: 03/30/11 12:52 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh oh! And I forgot to put this in my last review: How DOES Tom communicate through the music even when he's not DJ-ing?! It's alllll a plan I say. Or he messes with G-man's laptop :P
Author's Response: Haha, no way am I just going to tell you! :P But I will say that you're kind of on to something, though. ;) You're definitely looking in the right direction.
Date: 03/30/11 12:46 am Title: Chapter 8
I didn't even notice that part of the song xD I just started reading this story 2 days ago and I have been hooked since the first chapter. It's so addicting. I can feel the tension filled attraction between Tomás and Bill and it's so addictive! Everything is so hot and so pleasantly fluffy at the same time! I love it. Keep it up :D
Author's Response: GOOD! If it were up to me, I'd tear that line out, it's just so awkward! >_> Hahaha. I'm so happy you're enjoying it! That makes me smile so large, you have no idea. <3 More coming soon! Thank you so much for the lovely review, darling. =)
Date: 03/29/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
omg more, sooooooooo hot
Author's Response: Thank you. More to come as soon as I can manage, I promise! I won't make you wait too long. <3
Date: 03/29/11 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved this update. I love the song so it was playing as I read it. I just really liked everything about it, and omg, the way you describe Tom, he's just extremely sexy to me in this story.
I'm looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Awesome! I was hoping that everyone would listen to the music as they read, but I know that's not everyone's cup of tea. I'm glad it worked for you, though. =) Ohhh, gurl, me too. u_u If I could pull a person out of a story and have them be a real person... >_> Thank you so much, though, and more is coming as soon as I can manage it. =)
Date: 03/29/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
so i'm guessing georg was tom's apprentice?? lol! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER! i love it when they flirt over the music. it makes everything exciting and interesting! XD and also the last part really made up for the lack of smut. LOL! kidding. XD but i did love the last part, I wonder if she knows I’m hard right now. HAHAHAHA! suave tomi, very suave. i was glad to see this wasn't on hiatus anymore! HUGS!!
Author's Response: You laugh, but you may be onto something there. ;)
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Tomas flirting with Bill through the music has become such an integral part of the story, and you know what? It actually was intended to be a one time thing! Funny how that works. Hahaha, I couldn't resist throwing that song line in there. The song itself, is really good; an old song, but a good one, but I never realized until I got older that the song is all about a guy having an erection while dancing with someone. >_> It's here if you want to hear it for yourself, lol!
I'm so happy to have it off of hiatus! I'm trying not to take forever with updates, but kind of failing. ._. But still. Next chapter will be up pretty soon!
Date: 03/29/11 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8
*waves hai* I'm not scarred!! I'm totally glad to have you and one of my all time FAVORITE stories back!!!!! Keep the updates coming please :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear you haven't been scarred for life, haha! And oh wow! Favorite? That's... wow. Wow! Thank you so much. ;_; That means a lot to me. <3 More coming pretty soon. I had the last chapter ready to post, and then my hard drive corrupted, and my laptop died. So, I have to rewrite. But as soon as I do, you'd better believe you'll see it! <3
Date: 03/29/11 12:11 am Title: Chapter 8
*FLAILS* I was so excited to see this updated!!
Yay for Bill going back to the club. The shyness between them is adorable, it's sweet that now that they mean something more to each other than a fling they have respect for the others feelings and yet they still got hot and heavy on the dance floor.
Tomas communicating via the music even when he's not at the tables is confusing me. I noticed it in chapter three when Tomas met Bill on the dance floor, and G-man was at the turntables. You have me very curious.
Author's Response: I'm excited that you're excited! =D Yep, Bill has finally returned. And you picked up on every single thing that I wanted to get across in that chapter, so now, I'm grinning like an idiot; I actually broke into a loud round of applause in real life, haha! But you're exactly right; they mean something to each other, and want to make sure that they don't cross any boundaries, because now that they know each other, the game has changed quite a bit. In the words of Bill, "Yoohoo! Party!"
You're very observant. The answer will be revealed in due time, I promise. Thank you so much for the enthusiastic review. <3
Date: 03/28/11 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I'm happy to see this was updated again. Tom is written so sexily in this fic *__*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Tom is a joy to write, so I'm glad that he's being so well received. More to come soon!
Date: 03/28/11 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
pfft hahahahahahahahahahahaa ok, that last bit between tom and bill was HILARIOUS!!!!!!!! fantastic job, and i hope to see more of this asap!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad it made you laugh. =) Tomas, while he's shy at first, is a bit of a jokester too, and I couldn't resist having him play a joke on Bill, even if it meant revealing himself in the process, bahaha. He's just lucky no one else realizes he's communicating with Bill via music, or else the entire club would know about his... ehm... situation down south. ;)
More coming soon, promise!
Date: 03/28/11 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am so excited to have another piece of these characters. I was really curious as to what would happen the next time Bill went to Kinetic :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad, bby! You're a huge part of what keeps me going with this story when I'm losing motivation <3 I miss texting you! D: More's coming fairly soon, so keep your eyes peeled. =)
Date: 03/28/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
ok, for some reason, the idea of tom speaking spanish is incredibly sexy...... no clue why..... :D
Author's Response: Sexy man speaking a sexy language? ;D
I'm glad you're enjoying Tomás!
Date: 03/28/11 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG WTF you updated??? As in like YOU UPDATED?? Girl I thought this story had died long ago. I'm so very glad that you have decided to continue with it
Author's Response: Oh, it's definitely not dead! I would never just drop a fic, especially without warning, I promise! <3 I just hit a nasty round of writer's block is all (I say that as if I haven't not updated in a good 6 months >_>) I do apologize for the delay, but I'm very glad that you're glad! =D
Date: 03/28/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Not scarred for life, that song is amazing. I can't help but love it, perfect for dancing.
Author's Response: Good, good. Ahh, I know, right? That song is fantastic; I really hope to choreograph for that song one year *______* Thank you for reviewing, dear. =)
Date: 03/28/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 8
I almost had a heart attack when I saw the update!!
I love this fic, its very unique to me!
Thank you so much for finding the time to place another chapter!!
We will be waiting as long as it takes for more!!lol
Author's Response: Ah! Don't do that! I like you alive, tyvm. =) Thank you so much, it makes me smile to know that you're enjoying this so much. Also, your patience really means a lot to me, so thank you for being so willing to be patient! I wish I could update a lot more frequently, and I'm definitely going to try! <3
Date: 03/28/11 07:26 am Title: Chapter 8
a.m.a.z.i.n.g
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 03/28/11 06:45 am Title: Chapter 8
This is absolutly worth waiting for dear! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me in so many different ways. I appreciate it. More coming soon! <3
Date: 03/28/11 05:56 am Title: Chapter 8
AHAHA :DD LOVE EEEET
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: 03/28/11 05:31 am Title: Chapter 8
glad to see an update. I loved Tom's last lyric to Bill. Too funny. =)
Author's Response: Strangely enough, I think that was my favorite part of that entire chapter, haha! Thanks so much, dear.