Date: 06/17/11 01:06 am Title: Chapter 9
This chapter is full of all kinds of adorable :) From Tom burning the food, to him running after Bill to give him their first official ~couple~ kiss. Btw, you were right! I have been looking forward to them making their relationship exclusive! ^_^ It's about damn time, Tomas. *nods*
Loved it, girl! ♥
Author's Response: Thank you! I think everyone was waiting for that moment where they'd just haul their asses and get it together already, haha. And now that they're together, we can get to the really good stuff. Well, good in my opinion, anyway. :B
Exciting things are to come, so I hope you like it as much as you liked this chapter! =)
Date: 06/17/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 9
The Cielito Lindo part was really sweet! I love how they're all cutesy-wutesy outside of Kinetic.
Author's Response: Tomas has a sweet side that Bill can unlock just by existing. ^_^ I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 06/16/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
So so so excited to see an update on this amazing fic! I enjoyed every words of this long chapter (I LOVE long chapter =P)! The way you described everything is truly brilliant and I adore the characters. Bill and Tom are absolutely adorable together. This is just a brilliant fic and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Eee, I'm happy to know you enjoyed it! It's so much fun to write, so I'm pleased that you're enjoying reading about them. =) Thanks so much! More is coming as soon as the next chapter gets written, and I'm actually working on it now.
Date: 06/16/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
cielito lindo y tokio hotel? xD! interesante, nunca había pensado en esa canción aplicada en ese contexto hahaha
Author's Response: LOL! Believe me, I never thought those two would mesh, either, haha! But it's surprising what can happen. ;)
Date: 06/16/11 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
This long chapter definitely made up for the long gap between the last update and this one! Their relationship is so darn beautiful. I wish I could be there creeping on them... Yeah, I said it! I like that Tom speaks Spanish because I can understand it (I took some classes in high school) :D
I hate thunderstorms and I'm sorry you had to walk through one to get home. I hope this review adds a little bit of warmth to your day xD
I miss Tokio Hotel TV, do you?
Author's Response: I'm so glad! I honestly don't think I'd be able to write a short chapter if I tried. It's fun writing their relationship; heck, I'd be creeping right there with you, if I could, lol. Hey, same here; took Spanish in middle school and high school. =) I'll be darned if I can remember much, though. u_u
Aw, it's okay. I don't mind thunderstorms; they're very beautiful, in my opinion. It's just... walking through them with a laptop is something I don't want to risk, especially since I just got this one, lol. But your review definitely added warmth to my day, thank you! ♥ I really appreciate it, and ahh, yes, I miss THTV horribly. ;_;
Date: 06/16/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
*squeals like a fan girl* i am super duper glad you updated! I was totally going to be a little pain in the rear and give you crap for not updating... but then i read you have computer trouble... I have computer trouble too and i swear its the worst!!! So that was your freebe ;) hehe
Anywho, i love this story, i swear i think only you can make up a story, and have Tom speak spanish and it work! Very unique!
Author's Response: Haha, feel free to give me nudges whenever. They really are a help; I'm awful about updating. u_u I plan to be better with future stories; no more posting unless I have at least half of the fic already finished (....PHBT YEAH RIGHT LOL). Eugh, yeah, that laptop was dying a slow death, so it was only a matter of time. I should've known better and saved my story on a flash drive, so it was partially my fault. But thanks for the freebie! =)
Eep, that's so sweet of you! Thank you! I'm gonna go blush my face off in a corner now. <3
Date: 06/16/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG! i should be ashamed at how excited i get when i see this story has been updated!
this was brilliant, as usual. and you have every right to be proud of the emmy winehouse line!
now i'm off to imagine a sheepish, i just burned dinner expression on tom. oh, and that was a hell of a kiss!
Author's Response: Never be ashamed! Actually, I'm quite pleased to know that you're enjoying this story that much. Lol, precious Tomas, wanting to be romantic for once, and getting foiled in the process. I'm so glad to hear your thoughts on this. Thanks, darling!
Date: 06/16/11 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
This chapter was so cute. :D I loved the description of Tomas' apartment - and might I add that Tom speaking in Spanish is devastatingly hot? :D I can't wait for more! I send good vibes to your new computer. :D
Jane
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Haha, I imagine Tomas decorating his apartment in ways that speak to his Spanish roots; home is where the heart is, you know. ;) And thank you! I'll take all the good vibes I can get; no damage yet! =)
Date: 06/08/11 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: To be honest, it might be a while, but it's coming, I promise. =)
Date: 05/26/11 06:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Serious air punching was going on when I saw the new chapter was up.
I'm so happy! I love this story and this chapter was great and exactly what was needed.. (for me at least ;]) I love this side of their relationship!
Awesome, well done and KEEP UPDATING!!
;D
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you were so excited! It's a joy to write, and I'm so glad that you enjoy it. THank you! =)
Date: 05/08/11 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMT! This is amazing! I looooove this story! And, E.T. always makes me think of Bill and Tom! xD I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha, the moment I heard that song, I fell in love with it. More is to come! =)
Date: 04/18/11 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
more ASAP :) please! i love this story!!
Author's Response: More is to come! I can't promise that it'll be immediately, but it will definitely be as soon as possible. =)
Date: 04/14/11 10:26 am Title: Chapter 8
I think I'm in love with this story! and the wonderful songs! This is wonderful : ) I hope we see more very soon : )
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This story has quickly become my baby, so I'm glad that you're enjoying it as much as I am. More is to come!
Date: 04/13/11 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Last night, I read this story for the 3rd time, and it was still capable of making me falling in love even more. Girl, I'm in THF since 2008 and I've never, ever, read a story more than 1st time, so you've accomplished the impossible! :)
Author's Response: Oh wow! That's... wow, I don't know what to say, that is so awesome. Thank you so much, that's quite the compliment, and it really means a lot to me that you enjoy it so much. This story is my baby, so.... wow. Just... thank you! Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 04/09/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
It took me too long to get to the update, but I enjoyed the hell out of it. Sexy and sultry and so good. I'm so glad you updated. :)
Author's Response: Hey, no worries. =) Thank you so much, Mel, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. This story has really become my baby, so I'm ecstatic that you like it. <3
Date: 04/09/11 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Alright so a) Bill's "military themed stripper" outfit sounds INSANELY HOT, b)Tomas sounds quite lovely in his ripped jeans as well, and c) this chapter was as good as always! Your writing skill is supreme - the dancing scene was SO sexy and full of tension and amazingness and ooooh it just made me shiver. I could feel everything Bill was feeling; you know it's good writing when that happens! I love how you can transport me to a club scene without me actually having to be there! XD Haha, but really. And I was SO thrilled to see an update just now, seriously... so thrilled, haha. I couldn't ask for anything better to read right now :D
Author's Response: AHH! I took me way too long to get around to replying to reviews. u_u Sorry about that! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, though! Thank you so much for your kind words, beerbee! I think you already know I'm a huge fan of your stories, so it's a big compliment to hear you say that. =) I'm so glad you're enjoying it, though! This story is my baby, it really is. What was originally supposed to be a 5 chapter practice story turned into... this. XD So, thank you from the bottom of my heart. <3 More to come fairly soon. Some unfortunate circumstances kept me from updating sooner, but that'll all be explained.
Bill's military themed stripper outfit is hot! Have you seen it? If not, here is a picture of him wearing it. Enjoy! ;)
Date: 04/08/11 08:41 am Title: Chapter 8
I am loving this story! So adorable, and such a great idea and execution. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! Sorry it took me so long to get around to responding to this, I'm awful. >_> More is coming! =)
Date: 04/05/11 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Absolutly loved this chapter!! Keep up the good work!! chazza
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it. =) More coming!
Date: 04/03/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter 8
My brother showed me this story and now I am hooked... I love it! It makes up for the scarring by Kanye. ha ha! (I loved that you used this song though. One of my friends and I made a cover of it while dressed as Bill and Bushido, [tattoos and all]. I just haven't gotten the courage to post it to youtube yet...hehe.)
I eagerly await for more.
Author's Response: Ok, first off, can I just give your brother a high five? I have so much love and respect for guys who do TH fanfiction, because there aren't very many, and they need some lovin', too! So thank that bro of yours for me for showing you this fic, and give him a high five for being awesome in general, will you please? =) ♥
Secondly, I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! LOL omg, that line by Kanye. It's just so awkward, I just... I can't even, man. But oh my goodness, when you post that on youtube, can you please link me? XD I'd love to see it!
More is coming soon! I actually had the previous chapter ready to post, but when I wanted to get on to post it, my laptop wouldn't turn on... it died, and my hard drive corrupted, so I lost everything. >_> So. Once I rewrite it, an update will be up, I promise. Thank you so much, both to you and your brother!
Date: 03/30/11 07:58 am Title: Chapter 8
I have to say that I was utterly THRILLED to see an update for this. There's not too many stories that leave me with my jaw hanging open, drooling over my keyboard and wondering why I have the sudden need for a cold shower :) The imagery of them in the club is so vivid, I can just play the movie over and over in my head. I'm SO looking forward to more!
Author's Response: AH! Wow, that's quite a compliment. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it; seriously, I'm grinning like a fool. Thanks so much! <3