Date: 06/01/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh. My. God. I am positively breathless. My heart is fricken pounding! Ah. Ma. Zing. *fans self and goes to look for her own DJ Kaul*
Author's Response: Wow, I'm pleasantly surprised that it had such an invigorating effect on you! I'm guessing that means I'm doing something right. :3 Thanks so much, love. I'm glad you're enjoying it! *helps you search*
Date: 06/01/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
WHOA delicious!! just when i thought i couldn't fall any more in love with this story, i fell deeper :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased! =D
Date: 06/01/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad you updated this it made my night
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad that it made your night! Thanks so much for that, I'm grinning like a madwoman, haha! ♥
Date: 06/01/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow - this is one hot story. I'd certainly pay 30 euros for the chance to be DJ'd like that!
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, so would I! Especially if Tom was the one doing the DJ-ing. @__@
Date: 06/01/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
o_o Um...*coughs* the ending it was...*melts into a puddle*
Author's Response: Whoops! *collects you into a bowl and looks around helplessly* Hehe, I'm glad that you liked it. =D
Date: 06/01/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Holy crap-get those two together already...PLEASE *on knee's begging*
Cannot wait to read the explosive sex if and when they do "do it'!
Author's Response: Haha, I don't think Bill and DJ Kaul would oppose to that too much ;)
Date: 06/01/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a unique idea. I love the way the lyrics to the songs blend in with the story, and the fact that Tom uses music to convey what he's thinking to Bill. Very original and neat.
Author's Response: Oh, wow! I'm not even sure what to say to that. :3 Thank you, dear. Thank you a million times over! =D
Date: 06/01/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
That. Was. So. Hot! Tom is such a flippin' tease! Just get on with it already!! LOL. This was amazing V, I don't know what you were worried about. Thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank yoooou! :3 Hahaha, Tomás is definitely a tease. He knows that he's got swagger, and he's not afraid to show it, either, haha!
It means so much coming from you, love. Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 06/01/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nope, not too soon at all, and damn, if that was just kissing, I can't wait to find out how they're going to scorch up the screen with something more! Fantastic chapter! I love how Tomás made Bill's week a whole lot better. ;) I adore Em and Johnson!
Author's Response: I was really worried about the timing on this one, so I'm glad that the general consensus seems to be that it didn't come off as rushed. *wipes forehead in relief* Hehehe, when the time comes, I hope that they will scorch up the screen! *__*
Making Bill perk up is what Tomás lives for! ;)
And I have to say; you're the only one who actually called DJ Kaul Tomás rather than Tom. You're just scoring brownie points all over the place, bb! ;D Anyway, thanks so much! Coming from you, this means so much. <33333
Date: 06/01/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
*j a w c o m p l e t e l y h i t s t h e f l o o r*
I was so excited when I was emailed that this fic was updated (:
[hopefully from my last review of this I made it quite evident that my interest has found its way to the story of DJ Kaul & Bill. Sexy, Sexy DJ Kaul & Bill *hehe*]
You said you were venturing away from your original outline of this fic, & I most definitely D O N O T think it was too soon for all the wonderful smooching. *shakes head* Perfect Timing Indeed (:
I've noticed that just from what I've read out of these four chapters, & that one chapter from your other story, "Life as they knew it," you have quite an impeccable talent with writing scenes, and capturing the aura and feeling to them. Descriptive writing is your jackpot (:
[and who doesn't love jackpots? except for the jackpots gaurded by leprechauns. it always makes me think of that evil leprechaun movie, & since watching it, i was officially scared from little guys in green *bahaha*]
Now, If I can stop rambling and actually get to reviewing this chapter XD
Bah. Leave it up to DJ Kaul to help relieve Bill of his weekly build up of grumpiness and frustration (:
& As for another drink scene, O M T H :O
Bill totally had some balls to lick the DJ's hand for the salt rather than his own, & I was quite proud of him. I mean he wasn't even drunk like last time, But he still managed to be a flirt (:
"You think I give my number out for shits and giggles?"
L M A O XD
If only Tom would say that in his accent in a real interview, oh gosh. I think I'd melt haha.
Btw, Just curious, Bill pointed out that Tom had an accent.
In any of the previous chapters [if i've missed it] has it been mentioned of Emmy having one as well?
Oh golly-gee. I just hope Bill actually musters up the courage to call DJ Kaul. I think they would have a wonderful date away from the Kinetic club. Not to mention, if Tom didnt have a shift to attend to, they would have got it on
*g i g g l e s* :D
A Fantastic Chapter (:
[and the booth scene. fulfilled my fanfic craving for the day ^^]
-----Samantha
Author's Response: I'm so glad and flattered that you like this fic so much!
I was really concerned about the timing, so I'm glad that you don't think that it was too soon. I figured that Bill deserved a little DJ smoochin' as compensation for the crappy week he'd had. ;)
I'm speechless! I really don't know what to say. Thank you so much! I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing style and descriptions! Haha, you gotta keep an eye out for those leprechauns, though. They'll jack you up, I'm telling you @_@
Bill was flat out determined to flirt with his DJ even though he hadn't had any liquid courage, and he did it, for sure! ;) And hehe, I'd love for him to say that in real life!
You're so observant! You're very right on that; DJ Kaul has an accent, but nope, there's nothing about Emmy having one. ;) But the truth is all in the names; look at DJ Kaul's real name, and look at his sister's. ;)
I think Bill will find the courage to one day. ;) And hey, technically, Tomás is an employee, which means his boss is obligated to give him vacation days ;D
You always make me smile with your comments and thoughts, and I'm just grinning away over here right now. Thank you so much! Brb, gonna go glow for the rest of the night. :p
Date: 06/01/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG!
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If he's gonna be the death of Bill, he's certainly going to be the death of ME as well!
OH MY LORD, WOW.
NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH, I'm telling you, it just sizzles with each new chapter and this made me adjust a bulge that isn't even there!
THE SHOTS SCENE JUST BLEW MY BRAIN. LICKING LICKING LICKING LICKING LICKING OMG OMG OMG *salivates at the mere thought of the licking*
I FEEL YOU TOM, I KNOW. HE BLEW MY MIND TOO!
DAMMIT, everything else after that just...melted my brain and my screen and I have no more coherent thoughts about this except I came back down to earth same time as Bill and I was truly disappointed that their make out scene couldn't last longer because duty called.
*Curses*
BUT, I feel you Bill. I'd have been wanking in the bathroom too!
YOU'RE MELTING MY BRAIN HERE! XD
Author's Response: I'm sure DJ Kaul has a sexy twin brother somewhere who wouldn't mind helping you get rid of that non exsistent bulge. ;) We're already working on getting Oprah to find a DJ Kaul for all of us, haha!
Yes, licking, haha! Tomás had been teasing him and teasing him, and Bill's poor libido just couldn't handle anymore.
Funny you should say that, because I was actually wondering whether or not I'd made their makeout scene too extensive, haha!
YOUR REVIEW HAS ME SMILING SO HARD THAT I LITERALLY SQUEALED OUT LOUD *_* And omg, you know how much I love that word "sizzle" as a description *__________________* I love you, thank you ;_;
Date: 06/01/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
*pants* ummm, uhhhh, yeah. that. holy shit. that was hooootttttt.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you think so! Thanks so much. <333
Date: 06/01/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
No the timing was great. I think after too many weeks have gone by that Bill hasn't called him, Tomas had to make sure he was really interested in him. I love the story.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so, darling! Haha, Tomás definitely wanted to make sure. But it's not that Bill's not interested; he's just a shy little pudding pop is all. :3 I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much, doll, and thank you for the feedback! =D
Date: 05/29/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn. This is....wow
Author's Response: That's a good thing, right? :p
Date: 05/26/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm not sure what chapter you were referring to, but this chapter was great.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really concerned that I'd fallen out of the swing of things, so I'm glad to know that you feel I haven't. =)
Date: 05/26/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Sexy start. Who wouldn't want Tom to be...well...anywhere really, but Tom as a dj is pretty hot. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: I wouldn't mind it, haha! I've always thought he'd make a good DJ (or at least a really, really attractive one, haha). I'm glad that you're enjoying this so much. Thank you! ♥
Date: 05/24/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
aah yes, lovely finals and then the wait...well this chap was definitely good enough in my book :) the only major problem im seeing is that its over ahahaa. love this story, want moreeeee! good luck with ur grades!! i know the feeling of crying over college finals...lol
Author's Response: Ugh, finals. Three more years of them to go. ._. Even more, if I decide to go to graduate school afterwards. .___________________. But enough of my dramatics, haha.
I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it! And if the only problem is that it's over, then that can be easily remedied! ;)
Thank you for reading, for the review, and for the well wishes! I truly appreciate them all. ♥
Date: 05/24/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
hot. as. all. hell, girl. yayyyyaahhh love this xD
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: 05/24/10 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
woooo hotness! i sense some steamyness coming, this is great! you must really know your hip hop to have all those lyrics at ur disposal, i generally don't know up from down with hip hop....but i do know calle ocho! my dad likes that song ahha
Author's Response: Your steamy sense is spot on, haha! I just really enjoy listening to music! Actually, not *all* of the lyrics are hiphop, but most of them are. ;) Haha, Calle Ocho is a great song, for sure! I've yet to meet anyone who doesn't like it. Everytime I think about it, the song gets stuck for hours, and I have to listen to it on repeat for a while. XD
Thanks so much for reviewing; it's a pleasure to know that you're enjoying it so much, darling! =D
Date: 05/20/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
You know? You describe pure seduction. I'm in love with the way you describe things. Keep going!
Author's Response: You know, I always wonder whether or not I'm being too over-the-top with my descriptions, haha! So I'm glad that you enjoy them. Thank you! ♥