Date: 06/05/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
i loveith this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: 06/05/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic is hot! I'm so addicted now :D
I love how you write. Can't wait to see more (:
Author's Response: Thank you, on both counts! I just posted an update, so that's up for grabs for ya! =)
Date: 06/05/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!!!!! I love it! I want to read more! More I tell you! Its like a drug! I'm so addicted.
Author's Response: Hahaha, just like Bill's newfound addiction to adrenaline? ;D Thanks so much for the compliment, darling! I just posted chapter 5, so whenever you're ready, it's there, waiting for you like DJ Kaul waits for Bill to arrive at Kinetic. :p
Date: 06/05/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 06/05/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely love this story so far, it's awesome.
One tiny thing though. Check your paragraph on Emmy's appearence. It's said she tucks a blonde strand on hair behind her ears, than after it says she's a brunette. I'm a little confuzzled. xP
I'm off to read the next chapter! =]
Author's Response: Eep, thank you so much for pointing that out! I figured that'd happen at some point; I was torn between making Emmy a brunette and a blonde, and can never remember which one I've made her, so I always have to go back and reread everything I've written, haha! I'm so glad you're liking this! Thanks, dear! <3
Date: 06/05/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
O.O OMFG!!!
It is the story that's going to be the end of me...one sexy..hot..f**** brilliant end ;)
update soon!!!!
Author's Response: No, don't let it be the end of you! I like you alive! *pout* :p Thank you so much! I've just posted the next chapter. =)
Date: 06/05/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
eek! i'm excited whether or not it's updated today or tomorrow :]v26;
this story is just awesome!! v26;
i swear, i'd kill for your writing skills xD
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you don't mind, because, I didn't get to update yesterday :3 Hehehe. But I've just posted the next chapter! =D
Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. And that's such a compliment! :3 Thank you, thank you, a thousand times, thank you!
Date: 06/05/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
HELLO! ;D it's 'ShesAnAirhead' off of formspring, i want to congratulate you on being featured :] i knew you'd make it lool i cant wait till the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Oh, hay der! :3 Thank you so much! It's such an honor; I really don't know what to say, haha!
I was thinking it'd be updated tomorrow because I'd hit a bit of a roadblock, but it's been worked out, so that update may be up today! =)
Date: 06/05/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww! ^_^ Congratulations on getting featured!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! *___*I'm honored, I really am!
Date: 06/05/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
So brilliant and unique! Love it!! ;-)
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =D I may be able to update it today, so keep your eyes peeled ;)
Date: 06/05/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
*takes a bow*
u're a goddess
gracias,thanks,grazie,danke,merci,obrigada
this story is addictive
Author's Response: Aldafjlawa you're fixing to make my head grow, haha! :p Thank you so much! You're too kind. *blushes* Thank you,! ♥
Date: 06/05/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a good first chapter ! Definitely makes me wanna continue reading this right away! I really like how Tom was ``talking`` to Bill with his music! Awesome fic!
Author's Response: Hehe, Tomas is a sly cat, for sure. :3 Thank you! I'm so glad that it's caught your interest. =D
Date: 06/05/10 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story so much right now; I think it may be a summer favorite for me! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you! =D
Date: 06/05/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
nope,not too soon
i was on the edge...so the tension cooled a bit..only a bit
ohhh i can really want to see them naked on a bed or any surface...God,what are u doing to me?
this is a HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT fic
i like the music,the 1st song is good
and is really Tom's genre
his name with that accent is sending chills on my back
i can imagine Bill calling him Tomás,sexyyyy
please have mercy and post as soon as u can
Author's Response: I'm relieved about that! =) Hahaha, never fear, their bottoms will be bared!
Thank you! I was hoping that people would like the music that I posted with the chapters. :3 I can see Tom listening to this in real life. Or at least tapping his foot to it if he ever heard it, haha.
I'm glad that you noticed that his name is a bit different than it usually is. That's actually a fairly important point to the story. ;)
I'll update as soon as the chapter's ready, I promise! I'm aiming for today, but if not, then tomorrow. <3
Date: 06/05/10 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
they finally spoke
i started to wonder if Tom's mute...
maybe more interaction in the next chapters cuz this tension is killing me
so Emmy is his sister,i kinda guessed it
Author's Response: Hahaha, I died a little while writing that, actually; I was very much enjoying keeping him silent. But I knew he had to talk at some point; it's hard to stay quiet when you have someone like Bill flirting with you! x]
You're very intuitive! Points for youfor figuring it out! =D And thank you so much for your lovely reviews! <3
Date: 06/05/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohhhh poor Bill
Tom's a cocky bastard
now i'm horny too
God ,this is wicked
keep it up
Author's Response: Hahaha, nah, Bill doesn't really mind it. ;) Hehe, I was't expecting it to garner that sort of effect, haha, but I'll take it as a compliment! ;)
Thank you so much! I'm ecstatic that you're enjoying it!
Date: 06/05/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fuck! this is awesome dude
are u for real?
my heart is beating like mad,i can feel the beat,the electricity ...the music...it's like i am in that club
the tension between them set me on fire
God this really deserves to be featured
Author's Response: Akafjla thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, a millilon, gazillion times, thank you!
Date: 06/04/10 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved this story from the beginning and I still think it's great. I love Bill and Tom's interactions and I can't wait for them to meet outside of their regular club environment.
Author's Response: It's a lot of fun writing their interactions, and I'm pretty excited to pull them out of the club for a little bit too, hehe! I'm glad that you're loving it; thank you so much, darling! =D
Date: 06/02/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
luv it!!!! plz update soon and thank you for the new chap! XD
Author's Response: Hehe, you're very welcome. Thank YOU for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 06/02/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
luv it!!!! plz update soon and thank you for the new chap! XD
Author's Response: Hehe, you're very welcome. Thank YOU for reading and reviewing! <3