Date: 06/06/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
AHHHH great chapter!!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you feel that way. Thanks so much, love! =D
Date: 06/06/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
I ah-dore your idea here. I think the song choices go so well with the words.
Your writing style like blows me away. You describe everything so well.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, a million times over! I'm glad that you're enjoying not only the story, but the songs as well!
That's such a compliment! I'm pleased that you like my writing syle. =D Thanks so much, darling!
Date: 06/06/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
great chapter!!! wow..sexy
Author's Response: Thank you! :3 ♥
Date: 06/06/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
i love this story! "Coming next: The wild Tomás ventures outside of his natural habitat. :p "
Thank goodness!! i was about to comment about that. I dont want poor bibi to feel all used and only meet up with tom in a club
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad. =)
Haha, I'm glad that you're looking forward to it. Buckle up, though, because there's going to be a huge shift in the atmosphere. =)
Date: 06/06/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow!
Author's Response: If that means that you're liking it, then thank you! =D
Date: 06/06/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was better than Quiznoes AND Campbells combined! Mm mm mm mm mm! <333
There's nothing like rutting like bunnies behind the speakers! Omnomnom
And congrats on the feature! You deserve it!
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you! I do love me some Quiznoes. :d Yumm.
The way that you say it! I literally laughed out loud at that. =) They just couldn't resist it. ;)
Thank you so much! I'm so honored to have recieved that.
Date: 06/06/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
i luved the new chap and thank you!!! your an amazing writer i look forward to your new chap lolz
Author's Response: Haha, you're welcome, but I should be thanking you, really. Thanks for reading, and for the lovely review that made me smile! <3 =D
Date: 06/06/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh wow. this is sooo sexy. i absolutley LOVE this story!! update sooooon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! :3 Hehe, I'll see what I can do ;)
Date: 06/06/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Unghh
*speechless*
Author's Response: =D
Date: 06/06/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...such an amazing chapter!! i felt like i was in the club!lol
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea I am to hear that I'm doing something right with my club descriptions. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea I am to hear that I'm doing something right with my club descriptions. =)
Date: 06/06/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
The chapter that has the shaky drink scene is in chapter 2. It isn't the drinking it's what Tom is doing to Bill that is the shaky part or the scene. I'm still not 100% as to what happened. Something like Tom poured the drink onto Bill's mouth but I not 100% as to how he poured it and what angle Bill was in and how he didn't drown or choke or whatever. It just wasn't clear.
Author's Response: Ohhh, yes, that (I thought you were referencing my description of the Tequila shot and was thinking, "Wuh-oh, did I do it wrong?" XD)! He just tipped Bill back and slowly poured it into his mouth is all. :3 I'll go back and see what I can do for revision to make it clearer. Thank you for pointing out that it wasn't clear! =) I appreciate it.
Date: 06/06/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
*gulps* Damn, that was hot, beyond hot, really. *fans self* Guh, those two together are like... dynamite. Loving this so much, sorry for not leaving you a more coherent review, but you turned my brain to mush.
Author's Response: Thank you! Bill and DJ Kaul are so much fun to write. Oh noes! *helps you gather your brain into a bowl and sticks it in the freezer to solidify*
Date: 06/06/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
i completly love it... its like perfect :)
Author's Response: Thank you! That's definitely quite the compliment! =D
Date: 06/06/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Very sexy chapter, m'friend. The speech through the songs the DJ uses never fails to amuse me, every line makes me smile goofily. Nom, n-nom-nom, Bill it is not over for you! I'm really excited to see how this develops. I have to inquire; if Tom is foreign (which is always tres hot, no squabbles there), is his sister not as well? I wasn't under the impression she was foreign, so I'm curious. Anyways, fabulous chapter, and congratulations on the feature! You deserve it, it's a very fun story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, DJ Kaul is definitely something else. And it most certainly is not over for Bill; he'll find out as soon as he stops being a chicken and picks up the phone, haha.
OH MY GOD YES!!! *throws confetti and grins like a loon while celebration bells ring* YES! You are the first person to have figured that out. Take that info and run with it, and I'm sure you'll figure out exactly what's going on. ;)
Thank you, thank you, thank you! It's such an honor to be featured, I just don't know what to do. :3
Date: 06/06/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
This story is my addiction. Good lord you write amazingly well.
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: 06/06/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
:DDD AMAZING.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it! =DD
Date: 06/06/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
BAH. I LOVE GETTING UPDATES ON THIS FIC!
& I know I already mentioned a congratulations to you once, in another chapter, but I feel you deserve to hear it again: CONGRATULATIONS (:
*adds a little extra background humming*
I seriously don't even know what I can say in this review, other than how amazing you are at writting [so no more fretting over the timing of things, alright? ^^ teehee]
And I know in one of my previous reviews, I told you about how wonderful you were at describing the club scene and the music and strobes. You never cease to do as great then as in every chapter you have posted.
I swear, whether its just my overactive imagination or just plain reality, I could feel a pulsing on my finger [which i should mentioned, was on my laptop's mouse-pad] while I was reading about the speakers thumbing and bumping and blasting music :D
Oh goshy. DJ Kaul & Bill are getting closer and closer to each other with every club meeting they have *squeaks* It started with the drinks, then drinks and a makeout session, and now full-on rubbing in a hidden area. I LOVE IT (:
[need I not mention, how great you smutty scene was. *beyond well written*]
Im so proud of Bill though. He get's so ball-sy [is that how it's spelled? i've sat here for about a minute contimplating how it looks wierd xD] I mean, moaning and grunting somewhere in public? :O DJ Kaul mesmerizes him (:
& Bill needs to use that cell phone number Tom gave him. I feel like Tom keeps hinting at it, But Bill might not be picking up? hehe. like in this chapter, he said, "That's up to you"
[perhaps, Tom was just referring to the fact that Bill knows if he wants to see Tomi, just come to the most amazing club ever :D]
[i seriously still can't wait until i can go into a club. i think you have to be 18 [which i will be soon] but since clubs have drinks, it might be the drinking age of 21. boo to the rules XD]
*sorry. my ranting is spilling out of my fingertips with the adrenaline rush i seemed to gather while reading this*
I'm still a complete fan of this. mhmm.
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so thrilled about being able to have the honor! =DDD
The fact that you like my writing style and descriptions makes me ecstatic. It's such a fun story, and I really enjoy working on it, so your enthusiasm only keeps me going. =)And I'm so glad that you liked the smutty part! Hehe, I can't help but constantly fret about timing; I like to keep things grounded in reality, or at least as realistic as they can be, so that worry will always be there, but I'll try and squish it a little. =)
I love how you pick up on all of the little things! Seriously, that thrills me to my bones. You're absolutely right, and I'm so pleased that someone caught onto that; when Tomás told him, "That's up to you," he was hinting that Bill should call him. And I'm sure that Bill will pick up the courage to do so eventually. ;) I can't wait to go to a club, either, because I've never been to one before. *cough* That'll be our secret. And I hope that you enjoy it when you finally get a chance to go!
The next chapter is going to bring about some dynamic changes in the atmosphere and the air between them, so buckle up for that!
I'm not sure if I've told you this already, but if I have, then I'll say it again: You never fail to make me smile like a loon with your reviews. They're always so encouraging and kind, and enthusiastic (and colorful and pretty :3). I appreciate every single one of them, and I can't thank you enough. For your enthusiasm, for reading, for reviewing, for everything. You have no idea how much I truly appreciate it. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 06/06/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!
*implodes from the inside out*
Yeah, this chapter just killed my brain dead. I'll be over here, in my bunk...
*wibbles*
I swear, these two in a room just make it crackle with electricity. Tom in his element is a God and Bill merely his devoted follower.
And here we all are, following right alongside and feeling just the same as Bill when our bellies swirl with want over everything that DJ does.
I can't wait to know more about Tom, because I think there may just be something more to him than what we've seen. I mean, I get he works there, but it somehow wouldn't surprise me if he ends up owning the damn place, lol.
I mean, his sister has a damn bar tap! XD
But whether I'm wrong or right, it surely doesn't matter.
The real test would be if the same fire is there outside of Kinetic, the music and the turntables.
I think these two sizzle and burn no matter where they are though and it can only grow hotter from this point on!
ONWARD! *buckles up*
Author's Response: Your reactions always make me so happy that I'm left speechless and never know what to say! =D
Ack! Am I going to have to send Bill and Tom to do CPR on you again? :p
You're definitely right about there being more to Tomás than has been revealed! Hahaha, oh, Emmy and drinks. She should get her own, but Big brother Tomás just can't say no to his baby sister. :p And as for their energy outside of the club... I guess we'll see, won't we? ;D
Thank you, again, for another wonderful review that's left me smiling so large that my face is splitting! =D ♥ *grabs the reigns* rnrn
Date: 06/06/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
o_o...O_O... O///O Yikes! That was the hottest chapter...ever! Good thing I wasn't at work when I read this, my boss was on the prowl, (Eeep!) The timing is perfect! You write what you feel you need to write, the flow of the story is not rushed. Thumbs up!!
Author's Response: Eep, the progression of those faces! XD
I'm glad that you liked it! Haha, it's a good thing you weren't at work! You and I must have that sort of a connection where we just know, haha! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this, Mags. Thank you, thank you, thank you! ♥
Date: 06/06/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
*giggles* awesome love this. Sexy silent Tom and wind swept Bill. The explaination of the drink is a little shaky in that its now well explained and long winded but the idea is in there somewhere.
Author's Response: Thank you! Which chapter are you referring to (because there are two drink scenes)? But honestly, yes, I was a bit shaky about that, seeing as I've never drank before (Okay, that's a lie, I've had a beer once in my life XD). o_0 But I'm glad that you liked it overall. ^_^ Thank you!