Date: 06/07/10 05:39 am Title: Chapter 5
ihhh love this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're loving it! Thank you, sweetie. =)
Date: 06/07/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
OH MY FRIGGIN
that was so cool
I can't wait for the next 1.
oh and I'm a fan of Hip Hop
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you've enjoyed it. I'm a hip hop fan, too. ;)
Date: 06/07/10 04:18 am Title: Chapter 5
I've only started reading this yesterday, and I couldn't remove this stupid grin on my face on every chapter. I love the way how Tom communicates with Bill through the music he plays...XD AWESOME...
And THIS. THIS is ONE HOT CHAPTER!! GAAAAAAAHHHDD Hahahahaha..XD And I can't wait for the next update!!XD
Author's Response: And now I have a big grin as well! =DDDD I'm so glad that you're enjoying this so much. Thank you, love!
Date: 06/07/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, that was definitely worth staying up for. I'm very much looking forward to more of this!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're enjoying this, and that you found it to be worth it! :3 Thank you so much!
Date: 06/07/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 4
I should have been asleep an hour ago. I have to be up in less than four hours but I can't stop reading this.
And no, I don't think the kissing was too soon. Or I don't know, maybe it is? Don't care, though; it was damn hot! xD
Author's Response: Oh! Get your rest! <3
But on the other hand, I'm so flattered that you're enjoying this so much that you're sacrificing your sleep to read this. That's a huge compliment. =)
I'm relieved that you thought it wasn't, and tickled that you kind of think it was. XD Haha, regardless of whether it was or wasn't, I'm so glad that you thought it was hot! Thank you!
Date: 06/07/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 3
You write one hell of an intense scene. And Tom is such an enigma. Wonderfully done!
Author's Response: It's something I'm still getting used to doing, so I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. =)
Hehe, Tomás the silent DJ.
Thank you so much! I can't say enough how thrilled I am that you like it. :3
Date: 06/07/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh dear GOD, that was sexy! *_*
Author's Response: Thank you! I noticed that you've left me a review for every chapter, so I just want to thank you for those as well. I'm glad that you're enjoying this, and I'm honored, I really am. Thank you so much, for reading, and for every single review. ♥
Date: 06/07/10 01:43 am Title: Chapter 5
god! im loving this story... :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that. Thank you, love! =)
Date: 06/07/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 5
once again: AWESOME! :D i love this storyy!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this! ♥
Date: 06/07/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 5
PWOAH this is amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you~~ =D
Date: 06/07/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 5
o_o Hot stuff!!!!!! I feel dirty. Lol. In a good way XD
Author's Response: *offers shower* Feel free to borrow a towel, and the shampoo is in the cabinet above the sink. =D ... XD
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this, dearie. Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 06/07/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5
This story is still so electric and intense and sexy, you can feel the heat and passion between them so clearly :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. =) The next chapter is bringing about a pretty dynamic shift in the atmosphere, though, so ready yourself for that. =)
P.S. I've been trying to add you on LJ, but the link on your profile won't work. D= *pout*
Date: 06/07/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 5
lol I totally thought I was getting a threesome out of this chapter because I listened to the song first.
It makes me giggle that Tom speaks to Bill through the music. I swear he'd better man up and use that phone number soon!
Author's Response: Hahaha, Tomás isn't going to let anyone else near Bill, even if it is some icky ol' girl that Bill won't take interest in. XD
Haha, it's okay that Bill hasn't manned up yet; technically, Tomás hasn't either, Mr. I-will-only-talk-through-music-and-not-my-mouth. ;P
Date: 06/07/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh honey, this chapter was very much to my liking ^_^ Just knew that any sexual contact with these two would be H*O*T...and you did not dissapoint!
Author's Response: I'm so glad. =D That was my first time writing something like that, so I'm very, very...very glad that you enjoyed it. =) Thank you!
Date: 06/07/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4
I found a small error, you had Bill think about Tomas but we've never talked about him as anything DJ Kaul. You need to have some sort of introduction even of we know it's Tom.
Good make out scene, the dry humping was a nice touch. Bill's lines during the scene were a little weak/classic girl instead of insecure boy but it's not horrible just a little ooc for this character but only by a bit.
But really this story has loads of potential, I'm holding my breath that it continues to meet my expectations because so far it's been awesome.
Author's Response: Oh, no, it's there, doll! =) In Chapter 3, when they're dancing, and Tomás asks for Bill's name, Bill also asks for his, and DJ Kaul jokingly introduces himself with his DJ name, but then says his real one. =)
I wasn't really going for insecure with that one, to be honest; Bill was just layin' down his little slice of the law. :P But his words were actually pretty in character; it's just not clear yet, because I haven't gotten into the aspects of his personality yet.
The next chapter brings things out of Kinetic a.k.a. Land of Dropped Inhibitions, haha, so their true personalities will get a chance to shine through. Some things might be surprising, and the atmosphere is definitely going to shift, but I'm hoping that people will remember that people are generally a lot more subdued outside of a nightclub than they are when they're within it. *crosses fingers*
I'm glad that you feel it has potential, and pleased that it's meeting your expectations up to this point, and I hope that it continues to do so. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts; I appreciate it! ♥
Date: 06/06/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
WOOOOOHOOO!! does that express my absolute love for this chapter? what about FUCK YAH!? sooooooooooooooooooooo hottttt and its not too fast, hell, wouldnt we do the same if given the chance? id bet even sooner xD oh man, bill needs to call that man up on the phone and they need to spend some quality time chatting, then of course end up in bed if i have my way :P
Author's Response: I think those'll do it, haha! Thank you so much, doll, I'm so glad that you're enjoying this! I would so jump on that in a hot second, let's not even get me started on that. *cough* >_> Hehe!
Well, if that's your way, then I think you're pretty close to getting it. ;)
Date: 06/06/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
ahhhh cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is pretty tricky writing, so it may take some time, but I promise to post as soon as it's ready. =) Thank you!
Date: 06/06/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was hot hot hot!
Don't worry about the timing honey, in the world of Tom and Bill, nothing's too fast ;)
Can't wait for more!!!
XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad that you're enjoying it! =D The next chapter's a tricky one, so it'll take a bit of time, but as soon as it's done, you'll be seeing it. =)
Date: 06/06/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
damn...the scenes were hot!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 06/06/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
AMAZING!!! ((:
Author's Response: I'm so flattered that you think so. Thank you, dear! ♥