not having many coherent thoughts right
now...except hot HOT *drools*
i love how you can build up things up to the point of almost exploding ;) resulting in an extremely well written hot sexy scene XD
can't wait for your next update

Author's Response: That's quite the compliment! THank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying it, dear! ♥

I've been seeing this story and I've been too lazy to read it... but now that I have I'm dying for the next chappie!!!

AGHHH!
Update soon... bitte?
*holds out glass of Long Island Iced Tea*
I'll tell you who bought you this drink... *wink wink*

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! I'm glad that you gave it a chance, and that you're enjoying it so much. =D I promise that I'll update as soon as I finish up writing and fixing it; it's a tricky one, but it'll be up! =) Ooh, I wonder who could've gotten that drink? Careful, don't let Bill find out; he might not be too happy with you. ;P

A wonderful story. I absolutely loved it. I was sexy and romantic at the same time. I don't know what else to say except danke for sharing this little gem with the rest of us.

Author's Response: I'm pleased that you're enjoying it. It's an absolute pleasure to write. =) Thank you for such a lovely review!

Another awesome chapter. I'm panting waiting for them to actually do the dirty. This is a fantastic story and I am really loving it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're loving it! =D Thank you so, so much, love! ♥

By the way if you remember my name and my comments and you think I'm being mean, that is NOT my intention. I like this story and I see a lot of potential in it and I want to make sure you are getting lots of honest feed back so it can live up to its and your potential.

Author's Response: I remember your name, but I don't think you're being mean, not by a long shot! I really do appreciate your honesty and constructive criticism. I do take it into account, so I hope I didn't come off as argumentive in my explanation of why Bill and DJ Kaul went for mutual masturbation rather than sex. =)

The mutual masterbation went on perhaps a little too long, I started to get a little bored. Additionaly why are they still rubbing up against one another at this point they are grown ups and grown ups have real sex they don't just dry hump each other to death.

Author's Response: I was a tad worried about that; I'm sorry it bored you! Yeah, they're adults, but adults don't *only* have sex. :p There are more ways to get an orgasm than just through sex, and while they're both aroused, Bill isn't going to go all out and have sex with him yet; they barely know each other at this point, and the whole frottage thing was just Bill letting loose his inhibitions.

And if they had sex at this point, it'd be out of character--I know that sounds strange, and probably really stupid, haha, but trust me on that (Hell, look at Bill! Even while they were rubbing, he was in shock of his own actions, lol). As their characters develop outside of the club, and you see how they are without the music, and without the adrenaline and lack of inhibitions, you'll get what I mean. =)

I really appreciate you being honest with me. Can't really know what I need to improve on if I'm not getting constructive criticism, so thank you. =D

haha silly bill threw the number away!!!nooooo D

Author's Response: Haha, nope, he still has it. It's sitting on his night stand, in the same place that he left it when it was given to him. Although he needs to put it in his phone, the silly boy. :p

tom has a french name?! Wassss??? But finally he has spoken :DD

Author's Response: You're very close! Well, actually, you're right; Tomás is a French name. However, it's also a name that's used in a few other countries. Go a little further south, and you'll have it. ;)

Haha, yes, the man of silence spoken! =)

Loved it :D
It was so hot~

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it. =D

ohhh GOD u really are going to kill me one day...
that was sooooooo fucking amazingly hot

so Tom's accent...can i guess again? i have a feeling that it's french...only u can tell me

O_O so the hotness continues ,please Bill call Tomás
they'll meet outside the club *gulps* i think that i'm going to faint

fuck *_*

i found a song that has almost the same name as the story, it's not Tom's genre but...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p-Z3YrHJ1sU


i know the song used in this chapter ,i heard it in Step up 2.love it
it's so Tomás...without the threesome of course,Bill belongs only with his Tomás


so don't make me wait too long for the next chapter

hugs

Author's Response: Thank you so much! But nooo, stay alive! Stay aliiive! XD

You may guess as many times as you like. =) You're very close! Try moving a little further south, and you'll be right on. ;) And yep, they're going to be outside of the club~~. The dynamic is definitely going to shift some, but I hope that you enjoy it just as much as you have beeen! <3

Thank you so, so much for linking me to that song! That was so sweet of you, and I've been listening to it on repeat ever since you showed it to me. It's fabulous! *_*

Yep, you're definitely right! The song was in Step Up 2. I've been trying to find that version, but it turns out that they simply incorporated it into a mix for that entire dance-off scene. Hehe, that song is definitely fitting for Tomás, but I think Bill would set him straightt if he ever even thought of asking for a threesome. But of course, he wouldn't think of asking for that. :p

I'll try not to make the wait too long, but I'm a little stuck on how to make this next chapter work, so it's going to take a little time. But as soon as I have things down, it'll be up for you, I promise! =)

Your review really made me smile; I'm grinning like an idiot. Thank you so much for your kind words, your feedback, and of course, that awesome song! I've been listening to it since yesterday, and am still jamming to it right now! =D