Date: 06/08/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG!!!! that was so HOT!!! wow i absolutely LOVED IT!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that. =D
Date: 06/08/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tomąs is a huge tease. I don't think it's too soon, just most logical next step form what happened last time.
Author's Response: Indeed, he is! I'm glad that you don't feel it was rushed. Thank you, darling! <3
Date: 06/08/10 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill is a little bit slow, i knew since the last chapter that DJ Kaul was Emmy's brother.
Author's Response: Hehe, yep, he definitely is. You're very intuitive! Good job on figuring things out. =)
Date: 06/08/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was hot.
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 06/08/10 11:46 am Title: Chapter 5
omg that was HOT, more pleaseee *begs*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hehe, the next chapter will be posted the second I'm finished. =D
Date: 06/08/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I wonder if Tom think Bill is a girl.
Author's Response: Haha! It's funny you asked that after reading chapter 1, because you'll actually find an answer to that one in chapter two. Good timing, there! ;D <3
Date: 06/08/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 5
ahh ahh im so excited for tom to leave the club! how tempting. you're such a good writer! throughout the entire story i feel like i can hear the club beat pulsing in my head or something.. and of course im all hot and sweaty after that scene :| christ that was lovely. eep looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: I'm pretty excited for it, too! :3 It's exciting for me to know that it had that kind of effect on you! Maybe if I try hard enough, I can transport you there next time. ;) Hehe, all joking aside, though, thank you so much. That's such a complient, and I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it. Thank you! ♥
Date: 06/08/10 03:43 am Title: Chapter 5
woah, they are fast o.o!!! I wonder where these two are gonnna end up ;-)
Author's Response: Hehe, not too fast, I hope! ;) Don'tw orry, once they're outside of the club atmosphere, they'll hold to their inhibitions a little bit more. But I guess you'll just have to wait and see to have that question answered ;) ♥ ♥
Date: 06/07/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE?!!! I love this story *fans face* very um well written! Fantastic job! And I mean your writing not um *blush* ya know, haha
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Hehe, I'm working hard on this next update, and I'll have it posted as soon as I can! And I understand what you mean just fine, dear ;) Thank you so much!
Date: 06/07/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. This is a truly addicting piece of writing. This is the first story I look at to see if it's updated every day when I get on here. Amazing. I love it. All I want is more. : )
Author's Response: I'm flattered that you enjoy this enough to do that. You have me grinning like a fool! =D I'm so happy that you're enjoying it. Thank you so much, dear! <3 The next chapter's a tough one, but I'll have it posted as soon as I can. =)
Date: 06/07/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! I been reading everynight 4 almost a week. I wanted them 2 get down & nasty but u left everything up 2 1's imagination. Keep up the good work!
Nicki
Author's Response: Oh, wow! That's a huge compliment! I'm glad that you like it so much!
Hehe, yeah, the time wasn't right for sex just yet, you know?
I'm so pleased that you're enjoying this, and when the next chapter's posted, I hope you enjoy that just as much. =)
Date: 06/07/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
oooweee ! we get 2 see tom outsidee of the clubb. niceeeeeee .cant wait 4 the next chapter ! =]
Author's Response: It's going to be a definite change of pace, so I'm admittedly pretty nervous about it, but very excited at the same time! You'll get lots more insight into both of their characters. But I'm glad that you're excited about it! I sincerely hope that you enjoy it when it gets posted! Thanks so much, dear. ♥
Date: 06/07/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
OOOOOOOOO! LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THERE'S MORE! =) GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! I'm always happy to hear that. =) The next chapter is a tricky one for me, but I'll have it posted as soon as I can, I promise! ♥
Date: 06/07/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
I failed at leaving a review a second ago, and I'm going to blame it on the fact that my brain was left as a useless puddle after this chapter! Gah, I love this fic, and this part was incredibly hot. You're amazing at conveying the atmosphere in the club, not to mention the raw attraction between Bill and Tomįs. Absolutely gorgeous, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Congratulations on the feature, by the way. It's very much deserved!
Author's Response: I've spent a considerable amount of time trying to think up something clever to say, but I'm going to have to resign to the fact that the only thing I'll be able to say is thank you. That's such high praise, and... thank you!
There's definitely going to be a change in the atmosphere, since the next chapter takes place outside of the club, and for that, I'm nervous, but also very excited! I hope that you enjoy it just as much as you've enjoyed the previous chapters. =)
And thank you so much! The feature is such an honor. Everytime I think about it, it blows my mind all over again.
&heart;
Date: 06/07/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hot Hot Hot ! God how can you write such sexy scene, I'm truly impress by your writing skills ! I really can't wait to read about Tom outside of his natural habitat, it's gonna be interesting for sure !
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's such a compliment, and I'm beaming at the fact that you like my writing so much. =)
There's definitely going to be a shift in their dynamic once they're outside of the land of lost inhibitions, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you'll enjoy it every bit as much as you've seemed to enjoy the last chapters. =)
Date: 06/07/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
ahhhhh!!! :D this was an AWESOME chapter :D i hope there are more chapters like this in the future :) (but it's your story lol you can do what you want :P)
Author's Response: Thank you! We'll see. ;) The next chapter takes place outside of the club, some some dynamics will change, but as for more sexytimes... I'm sure Bill and his DJ wouldn't mind that. ;)
Date: 06/07/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg~ I think i love you right now~ :DDD I just need a break from writing my term paper and this is the perfect break~ omg~
My brain has turned into jelly.. i am so happy that they are are going to see each other again.. :DDD this is just a fun fic~ I can't wait to see more~ :DD
Author's Response: I'm glad that this helped you to destress for a little bit! I know how those term papers go. o_0 I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it! Thank you, darling. <3
Date: 06/07/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved the sister btw because 1. it makes bill less alone and the whole scene develops better (i used to have a boyfriend working in a club so this insiderthing is really nice and easy to relate to for me) and 2. makes tom a nice person who is 'silent' and strong and takes care of people/his sister
Author's Response: Emmy is so much fun to write; she's so blunt and outgoing, and I'm pleased that you've taken a liking to her! I was feeling sort of iffy about writing an OFC in there, but after she took on Johnson, I knew I had to keep her. XD And DJ Kaul wouldn't ever be able to say no to his precious baby sister, even if it does mean she's running up his tab and draining his wallet. :p Thank you so much for the feedback, sweetie!
Date: 06/07/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is my FAVORITE chapter so far. For reasons...that you may know xD And I say "so far" because I'm sure there it's gonna get better (not that it's not already good). Can't wait for the next chappy!! ^__^
Author's Response: I can take a stab in the dark as to why. ;) Oh, thank you so much for the vote of confidence; I really need it for the upcoming chapters. I hope that you do end up liking the next chapters just as much as you enjoyed the previous ones, and thank you so much! ♥
Date: 06/07/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it, and love it that they didnt have sex, so you see preferences vary. In this setting it would have killed it a bit for me since then tom(as) would claim his dominance more profound and euhm its less realistic or romantic. I loved whole idea of the lyrics and the part of the sister as well. In my head Tomas en his sis are twins btw :)
Author's Response: I'm relieved! I know a lot of people were eager for them to have sex, so I was sort of worried people would be running after me with pitchforks for this one. XD This fic still has quite a ways to go, and the time isn't right for them to hop into bed yet, so I'm glad that you're pleased that they didn't hop in the sack just yet. ;)
The lyrics are so fun; DJ Kaul certainly has a way with words, even if they're not his own. :p
I'm so happy that you like Emmy! She's so much fun; I absolutely adore writing her, and she's my first OFC, so I'm glad that she's being well recieved. =) Oh, there's an idea! That's really clever! =D But I'm afraid that theory's going to be taken away in a few chapters, I'm sorry! (But that doesn't mean that you still can't pretend! =D)
You've made me smile so much. Thanks for the sweet review, love <3