ahhhhhhhhhhhhh love it!!! i've waited sooo long for this!! amazinggg

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm truly happy that you're enjoying it. <3

OMG I couldn’t believe my eyes …u’re thanking me…OMG I’m blushing really bad
I’m so sorry for not replying to ur mail…I was so busy these days…*grins*
U’re such a sweetheart …I’m happy that my song helped u write…

Back to the story: Bill was so cute when he called Tomás…I understand the akward feeling perfectly
Ohhhh stupid Tomás ,u should recognize the voice cuz is Bill’s voice…ur crush
He has an accent…u did mention it in the previews chapters but now it’s more visible or audible… yay I was right ..ohhh please have him say smth in spanish in bed :DDD sexy
papacito

“I was thinking that we could meet up… um… outside of Kinetic.” Another pause. “I mean—if you want,” he quickly added. So Tomás is insecure too,cocky bastard
I like him like this but this is Bill’s job,to be shy and insecure

“Okay,” Bill said, trying his hardest not to squeal. He and Tomás were going on a date. He and Tomás were going on a date.” LOL this is exactly my Bill…all squealing and jumping with excitement .I also tend to do this when I’m happy ,repeating the same sentence and clapping hands…cute Bill


Beel. That made me laugh very hard ,when I see videos of TH in Spain,the fangirls scream Bill’s name like this…this is hilarious

“Tomás had become just as quiet as he’d been at the club, and Bill had found himself doing most of the talking while Tomás asked questions here and there. ” I like mysterious Tomas

I’m kinda dissapointed that Tom only kissed Bill’s cheek , they were humping each other at the club and now he’s suddenly shy and not even a french kiss ? DAMN TOMAS

I’ve got another nice song for u http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2jmPoUK58s&feature=related , Crystalised is not bad either
I’ve discovered them recently,good band

Author's Response: Late response is late but YOU ARE SUCH A SWEETHEART! *hugs and cuddles* I really do owe you a huge thank you! Music really inspires me, and something about the sweet melody of the song helped me figure out exactly where to take this. So, if you hadn't introduced me to the song, then this fic would probably not be headed in the direction it's headed in right now. So really, that's thanks to you, darling! ♥

If you guessed that he was Spanish, then yep, you were 100% correct. And as for the bed part... we're definitely going to get there. That part may or may not be already mapped out

See? The fangirls of the world are very important to proper pronunciation in fics. ;p And LOL! It's easy for Tomás to be brave in the club where his insecurities are hidden, and the music can do the speaking for him. But I promise you, we will get to those points in due time ;)

Ooh, gonna check it out right away! Thank you so much! You're really adding to my playlist, haha!

Yes, Bill's wearing the Arthur und Die Minimoys/OMG DOES HE HAS A NIPPLE RING?! outfit. ;)

LOL, this made me laugh! *giggles* *iz easily amused* ;)

You already know I love the chapter, but it won't hurt to say it again... I think the transition from the club was seamless and I loved to see them, especially Tomás, out of Kinetic. It somehow shifted the dynamics between them, since Tomás was the one calling the shots in the club and here, they're in a more equitative ground.

Loved that Bill was so nervious over everything, from calling Tomás, to his clothes, to the actual date. I loved that Tomás showed us another side to him, the shy, bashful boy, self-conscious over his pretty accent. ;)

I was certainly not disappointed and after this fantastic update, I can't wait to see where you'll be taking us!

*smooches*