Date: 06/23/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww, this was so cute! Made me smile the whole time I was reading this. And thanks for continuing, I've been wating :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! In the last chapter, we got to know about Tomas, so it was important that we learn about Bill before we move on to the ~fun stuff~ =)
You don't have to thank me. Thank YOU, for bearing with me, and for sticking around. I really appreciate it! ♥
Date: 06/23/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved it!! It was awesome!! So sweet ^3^ Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. The next chapter has been posted, so that's there for you whenever you're ready. =)
Date: 06/23/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwww very cute chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked it. <3
Date: 06/23/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really interesting chapter, totally worth the wait ! I like reading about them outside the club! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! It was time for them to move their relationship beyond the boundaries of a nightclub. Chapter 7 is posted now. Thanks! =)
Date: 06/23/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
hahahaha ooooh. love it. ^^ :D weeeeheheheeey. please post more soon.
Author's Response: More has been posted~ =D And I'm glad that you like it. ^_^ Thank you so much!
Date: 06/23/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
LOVED IT!!!! omg cant wait for the next one!! Yes! Bill has a nipple ring!! so fucking hooooot
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you did! The wait was long, but you don't have to wait any longer; I updated tonight. =)
Date: 06/23/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
This chapter came out really well. I can understand how it was a bit hard for you to change from the energy they shared in the club to this more intimate conversation. I grinned like crazy when I saw that Tom was Spanish. I'm totally envisioning him with a super sexy accent every time he speaks now.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you understand. I was really worried that people would think that I was suddenly trying to change their personalities, when in reality, I'm just showing another aspect of it. And Tom with a Spanish accent... I really would get tased by his bodyguards >_>
Date: 06/23/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwww they are so sweet
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! ♥
Date: 06/23/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww i think it was extremely cute that they were both a bit shy with each other..and tom blushing ;) (he doesn't blush that often in stories :P...it creates a rather sweet picture in my head)
Oh..what i would give to actually listen to tom's Spanish accent..*swoons*
I'm loving this story...update soon
Author's Response: I love a blushing Tom; the mental image is just too cute! Tomás is very blushy around Bill, now that he's getting to know and like him. =)
As for the accent, I say we ship the boy off to Spain for a few years so that he can pick up on it. x]
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story; it means a lot to me, it really does! And I know that it was a long wait, and I apologize for that. The next chapter is up now. =)
Date: 06/23/10 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
It was definitely worth the wait! I loved this opportunity to see Bill and Tom outside of Kinetic, especially Tom. He's so confident when he's at the turntable, but we get a little hint of shyness here, which is adorable. I also like the fact that he's from Spain and has the accent to prove it; I can hear it so clearly in my head! Eee, this is one of my favorite fics in progress on the site, I swear, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Late reply is late. I officially suck, ma'am. >_> But I'm so glad that you're still liking it! It was a fun challenge figuring who they were outside of Kinetic. I just couldn't pass up the opportunity to make him Spanish, hehe! Tom with a Spanish accent. *_*
Really? Wow, that's such a huge compliment, it really is! I'm honored. Thank you!
Also, due to the lateness of my replying, I can happily say that the next chapter is up! =)
Date: 06/23/10 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
THEY ARE TWO LOVELY BOYS
I can't get over how shy they both were, when their time at the club almost makes me two completely different people, but I REALLY like how they interacted here and it read very very normal.
Tom being from Spain is now leaving me in such a flail, that YOU KNOW I'm gonna be like Bill and INSIST he say LOTS in Spanish now for that fantastic drop-my-panties-accent.
HER NAME IS ESMERALDA AND I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!
Tom, creo que me estoy enamorando de ti tan facil como Bill!
Eres un muchacho timido, pero me gustas mucho de esa manera!
Bill, I feel you. I definitely feel you, because he definitely needs to talk more, kiss more and say more sexy things in Spanish for you!
BUT, I am definitely intrigued by what Tom didn't really wanna say.
However, rest assured my dear, that there's that definite undercurrent of tension behind the looks they kept giving each other.
Tom is a sweetheart and he loves his sister, is very much caring about his job, but his heart lies in Spain yet for Bill, I have a feeling he would stay behind.
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!
*runs around the room flailing over the bit of Spanish*
Hasta luego INDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED. *swoons*
Author's Response: Ack, you always know just what to say to make me swoon. You have no idea how relieved and glad I am to hear you say the word "normal", because that is just what I'm aiming for; I want this to be realistic. So I'm very glad that you feel that way! =D And claro que si! We'll be hearing lots of sexy things from Mr. Tomás ;)
I LOVE THAT NAME SO MUCH >_>
Can I also say that I understood that Spanish right there, and I am now beaming with pride, because apparently, I did retain more than just claro que si. 8D You're right, he IS rather shy when he can't let the music speak for him, and there are quite a few reasons for that. On another note about the same man, you shall find out exactly what it is that Tomás didn't want to say in the next chapter. ;) And, that's very reassuring; thank you!
His heart is, and always will be in Spain, so we'll see if Bill is enough to get him to open up to a new option.
Your reviews always make me smile; always, always, always! And I appreciate them so much; thank you! The next chapter is up, and if you read, then I really hope that you enjoy it! ♥
Date: 06/23/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
LOVING the concept of SpanishTom! I bet Bill can't wait for him to whisper filthy words and phrases in his ear while he's pressed up against a wall in a dark corner of the club! Or anywhere else for that matter.
Author's Response: Spanish Tom is so much fun, and as the story progresses, we'll see a lot more of him and his culture. As for the words and phrases, oh, believe me, we're going to get there! ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/23/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awww that was sweet, the nervousness of the both of them. Tomas is obviously a lot less confidant outside of his comfort zone but that's sweet. I'm glad that they could be friends here without the desire taking control. *hugs*
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Tomás is a shy one when the music isn't there to do the talking for him, but that's alright, because Bill doesn't mind the silence. <3 *hugs you back* Thank you for the review, it really means a lot to me!
Date: 06/23/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Tom's so adorable and shy! *squeal* He's really different and innocent outside the club.
Author's Response: He's definitely a lot of fun to write, too! I'm glad that you like him! =) Thank you~
Date: 06/23/10 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
*puddle of goo* The heat between them is incredible, they just seem to meld together so perfectly. Can't wait to read the new chapter.
Author's Response: They definitely have a strong attraction to each other, physically! The next chapter has us uncovering a new facet to their relationship. =) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and thank you so very much for the review!
Date: 06/23/10 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Eeep coherent thoughts are mush. I love that I get so enthralled in this, it's one of those fics that you just lose yourself in. Brilliant.
Author's Response: That's quite the compliment. Thank you so much! I'm happy you're enjoying it, and I hope you enjoy what I have coming up next. ♥
Date: 06/23/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahh Bill's dissapointment at not find DJ Kaul at his station is palpable, seriously the energy that flows through this is awesome. I love their brief encounter, you could almost feel the sparks they both radiate. I love it.
Author's Response: I'm having an absolute blast writing this, honestly, so I'm so glad that you're enjoying reading it! Thanks so much, sweetie!
Date: 06/23/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
GAH this was so intense! The imagery of the scene at the bar, wow, lost for words.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! =D
Date: 06/23/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww...love this story!
It's awesome how every little detail fits
into the characterisation and the storys plot.
Like you said, everything's intentional therefore
the story seems really authentic and one can
get into it so easy...
I especially loved the things that were said
through the songs...I'm so into that story!!
Author's Response: My smile is too big for my face, currently, lol! Seriously, I'm absolutely blown away, knowing what you think of this story; that's such high praise, and I appreciate it so much. I tend to fuss over the little details, so I'm glad that you like that aspect of it. I'm teeming with glee, hehe. Thank you!
The songs are a lot of fun; I actually found the perfect song for this fic. I just need to figure out where to put it. >_> I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. ♥
Date: 06/23/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so rapt in this, it's so distinctive, the characters are so real. I can feel the pulse of the music as I read. It's truly amazing and I love it.
I have already read these chapters but wanted to leave you reviews, so I will be spamming your inbox.
Author's Response: I'm honored that you think so much of this! This is my baby, and I'm a natural worry wart when it comes to writing, so to know that you feel so positively about this fic means a lot to me. Thanks so much for such a lovely review. <3