Date: 07/02/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks :D
Author's Response: No prob, home dawg! (Sorry, that's been my favorite phrase for the past month. XD )
Date: 07/02/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
chances are I've just missed it, but what's the age difference between Tom and his sister?
Author's Response: Nope, you didn't miss it! I never really had any plans to mention it, but Tomás is twenty-six, and Emmy is twenty-two. =)
Date: 06/30/10 11:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Hasta luego y no mas? Me atraes, Bill hubiese sido perfecto :P
Anyway, I do enjoy your story so much :) Take care!
Author's Response: Si, no mas... por ahora. ;) Ack, my Spanish is crap, sorry (My cousins would be so ashamed if they knew). XD
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this. Thank you so much! =D
Date: 06/30/10 10:59 am Title: Chapter 6
I love it. :D I love how Bill's kinda like us girls when we're out on date with someone we really like. Not saying that he's a girl of course! XD and when the wild Tomas is out of his natural habitat, he is absolutely adorable, I want to hug him. XD Lol. Love love love!
Author's Response: Hehe, no, I see what you're saying. =)
Tomás is so fun to write! But if you want to hug him, you might have to ask Bill for permission, haha. ;)
Date: 06/29/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 6
Honestly, i like this chapter and you putr it at the right place. It's make a beautiful contrast with the heavy and fast atmosphere of the club. Are you German? I ask that because Bill ordered tap water and i read somewhere that you have to ask for flat water when you order water in Germany however they will get you gazed water.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm really enjoying exploring the other aspects of their personality, such as how they act when they're not in a club.
Nope, I'm not German; American. But if you thought I was German, then I'm guessing that I'm doing something right? ;)
Date: 06/29/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Dude this is just beyond wicked! I wish I could go to a club like that.
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, maybe I'll open a club like that one day, and hire Tom. ;)
Date: 06/28/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
you could just mark it differently and write it in english if you want him to have a longer conversation in spanish, but I understand if that would ruin the feeling of him actually speaking spanish :/ I'm hoping there will be more though :D
Author's Response: Now, there's an idea! Thanks for the suggestion, I'll definitely keep it in mind. =) And, oh, trust me. There will definitely be more. ;)
Date: 06/27/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
>.< So cute! I am very glad that you updated again, it was very fun to read. Please update again soon
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun to write, so I'm glad you had fun reading. I'm hoping to update within a week. =)
Date: 06/27/10 10:22 am Title: Chapter 6
YES!!! I was so hoping Tom...Tomás would be Spanish xD I've been waiting for Bill to ask about the accent for ages xD And just like Bill, I've been waiting for Tom(ás) to say something in Spanish :D I can totally imagine it :D More soon?
Author's Response: You got your wish, then! =D A lot of people thought he was going to be French, hehe. Having Tomás speak Spanish is going to be fun, but I don't want to overdo it; not everyone speaks Spanish, and I know how frustrating it is to read through an unfamiliar language and have to scroll all the way to the bottom just to see what it means. So I'm trying to figure out a way to have the best of both worlds without it being confusing. ;) Hoping to update within a week! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks!
Date: 06/26/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 6
:)) cant wait for the next chapter :)))
Author's Response: Next chapter coming fairly soon! =)
Date: 06/25/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was absolutely WONDERFUL! I couldn't have asked for anything better! I am officially addicted to this story! I love love LOVE all you characters- especially Tom. ;) The song TOTALLY captured the mood of the chapter. It makes me feel all spanishy! :) I'm definetly a fan of it! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! It's so much fun creating their personalities, so I'm glad that you're enjoying them. Hehe, between you and me, the song is actually Romanian ;) But I'm glad that you enjoyed it; I thought it'd work really well with the chapter.
I'm so glad that you like it, darling. Thanks so much!
Date: 06/25/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
awe!
so cute! :D
Author's Response: Hehe, they're adorable when they want to be. Thank you! =)
Date: 06/25/10 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
love it. I was so looking forward to this outside the club chapter and it definitely topped my expectatios. love how shy tomas is outside his territory :) Love the little misunderstandings (like the bratwurst thing and the conversationdominance thing) which make it so much more realistic. I always like it when "dominance" is not stable but shifts between the two. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: That's so flattering! I'm glad that it was more than you were hoping it would be. I wanted to get the point across that people act differently when they're in a club than when they do when they're not, and there's a reason for everything, so... ;)
I was trying to be as realistic as possible, so I'm glad that you felt it was realistic. Seriously, that's the ultimate compliment. Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm hoping to update within the week, so we'll see!
Date: 06/25/10 07:00 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww, so sweet! :D It was different from the rest, but just as great :) I loved it
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it as much as the previous chapters. <3
Date: 06/24/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
OHEMGEE i read all the chapters in one go, and im already absolutely addicted. The chapters where they are in the club are beyond fantastic, it evoked such emotions from me, and they were so hot, just wow. I love toms charachter the way hes so seductive RAWWWR :DDD wicked can't wait for more
Author's Response: Oh, wow, that's such a huge compliment! I'm ecstatic that you like it, and it's flattering that you took so much time to read it! =D I'm having a blast writing it, especially Tomás. He's a lot of fun to work with.
I'm hoping to update relatively soon. Thanks again! ♥
Date: 06/24/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
YAY UPDATE! lol i love this fic so much. its such an original plot, and the portrayal of the characters is amazing. i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: YAY! =D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And I'm glad that it's original; I know that there are a ton of fics on this site already, so to do something that's yet to be done is rather exciting. I'm going to update as quickly as I possibly can, promise! Thanks so much, darling!
Date: 06/24/10 09:58 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww! This chapter was so cute and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so gald that you're enjoying it. =D
Date: 06/24/10 09:37 am Title: Chapter 6
awwwwwwww, such a sweet date. I totally loved Bill's thought process while he was on the phone with Tom. Because I'd SO do the same thing if I were in his shoes. Looking forward to more!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, Bill's thought process was really amusing for me. I second that; I'd be doing the same thing, too, haha!
It pleases me so much that you like this! I'm going to update as soon as I can. Thanks so much! <3
Date: 06/24/10 08:44 am Title: Chapter 6
ahhhh!!! I have to say I really do love this story! you have a great writing style and with every chapter i get more and more into the story lol xD
Author's Response: Awww, I'm grinning from ear to ear now. Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you like my writing style, and that every chapter is pulling you in. It's a ton of fun to write, so it's always great to know that it's fun for you to read! ♥
Date: 06/24/10 08:43 am Title: Chapter 6
*squeally flailing* I love this story...please update!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! So much! I promise to update as quickly as I can. I'm in a mini-rut at the moment, but I'm going to work it out!