Date: 11/11/11 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I miss this story so much. :(
Hope you update again sometime soon.
Date: 09/07/11 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! you answer my review and that is enough, besides the fact that you said that you would finish this, that is all I need to hear, I don't care if it takes you 2 years to complete it, I just need to know that it will, if you understand what i mean...
I wanna apologise for the pressure I put in my first review, I let myself carry away, I was pissed and I end leaving that terrible comment where I force you to write, I'm sorry, take your time, we all have a life and I understand this is not on the top of your list, so as I said before, finish this story at your time, no pressure, ok?
take care!
P.S: any mistake in the grammar is because of the google translator, my english sometimes really sucks! [again xD]
Author's Response: Well, hopefully it won't take two years, haha! Oh my god. >_> My goal was to be done by June, ironically enough, but I'm really shooting for December, now. ;) So, we'll see.
Oh no, you know, I definitely understand how you were feeling, though; I've found a ton of excellent fics that were left incomplete, and I agree, it is frustrating. I'd hate to do that, and I promise it'll be finished! ♥ But I really do appreciate that you're enjoying it; this fic is my baby, so it means so much to me to know that you like it. Thanks so much for being so understanding; you're wonderful, bb. ♥
And guuuuurl, your English is fine, I promise. =)
Date: 09/03/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is the very first story i have deemed worthy to enter my favorites and i have read A LOT of amazingly well written stories. and its never to early for a good make-out secion ;)
Author's Response: Oh wow, that's such an honor! Thank you, my dear! I'm so pleased to know you're enjoying it. =)
Haha, Tomas was pretty much thinking along the same lines. ;)
Date: 08/20/11 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ok, I need to tell you this beacuse this is like the 5th story that I read that is not completed & I'm pist, I hate when somebody starts a story and never finishes it, I don't wanna get mad at you, because you updated this like a 2 months ago, isn't too much time and... I'm rambling now...what I am saying is that it is a very good story and I don't want you to leave it aside, because I fond with it and if you do it'll bother me a lot.
Besides all this, I loved the story, how they became shy when they started dating, but before they had done more serious things than just kissing...I love the direction this is taking, and the second or third time I say this, be sure to write this story, yes? do it for me? [puppy dog eyes]
Take care :D
P.S: any mistake in the grammar is because of the google translator, my english sometimes really sucks! :)
Author's Response: I'm so, so glad that you're enjoying the story--and thank you so much for that, because it means a lot to me, it really does--but frankly, I don't know what to say.
I'm sorry if the slow updates are upsetting you, but please be aware that I'm doing the best I can. I'm very busy in real life, and as much as I love working on my fics, they're not my first priority; they're something that I do for enjoyment because I love to write.
I'm sorry that this is the 5th incomplete fic you've stumbled upon, but there's not much that I can do about that; I do have the Work In Progress warning up for that reason. If it's leaving you pissed that this story is not complete, then the option of waiting until it is, is ever standing. You'll know via the indicator at the bottom of the Table of Contents box.
That said, I don't make promises that I don't intend to keep. I've said that I will finish this story--I've promised to finish this story--and I meant it. It will, however, take time, and if you're willing to give it to me, I'll greatly appreciate your patience. Thank you! <3
Date: 08/17/11 03:33 am Title: Chapter 9
I was grinning like an idiot that whole time... They're so adorable!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Tomas and Bill are so gone for each other!
Date: 07/05/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always happy to hear it. =)
Date: 06/25/11 03:01 am Title: Chapter 9
JODER is one of my favorite words! I learned that one from my best friend who spent three semesters in Spain.
Author's Response: LOL! It's quite fun, isn't it?
Date: 06/23/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 9
Ok, so I just decided to read this fic, and I must say it is fantastic. But, you did seem to make a small error, I'm not sure any one else will even put it together, but I did, so I will point it out. Here in this last chapter when Tom was talking to those skanks who were distracting him from Bill you mentioned that Bill only knew english he learned in school which had been mostly forgotten, and yet he seems to know all of these english lyricsthat Tom trows out for him. Odd. Yea, I just thought I would point it out. Its still an amazingly awesome fic. I love it so far and can't wait to see what comes next!
ps Loved the Emmy Winehoue thing. You deserve a cookie
Author's Response: Ay, thanks for pointing that out! I'll fix that as soon as I figure out how.
Hahaha, nah, they aren't skanks, just fans eager to meet the DJ they adore!
An any case, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and the Emmy Winehouse pun! (I'm still so ridiculously proud of that >_>) Thank you!
Date: 06/22/11 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
love ittt!!! cant wait for next updatee
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! More to come as soon as I churn it out.
Date: 06/22/11 01:27 am Title: Chapter 9
Absolutely loved this chapter and really looking forward to the next one, keep up the excellent work my friend!! chazza
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Chazza! I'm hoping to turn out the next chapter pretty soon, so keep your eyes peeled!
Date: 06/21/11 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG girl I just have read it all in one day I couldnt stop!!! YOU WRITE absolutely fucking amazing *-* I like how this started all sexy and sensual and then all romantic and sweet and OMG !!!! by the way do you speak spanish???? (: well I gotta go take care darling. hope to read the next chapter soon. Adios y saludos desde México ;)
Author's Response: Oh my wow, I honestly don't know what to say. Thank you! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. This fic was intended to only be a eensy little 5 chapter fic just to test my writing limits, but it ended up turning into my baby that I love and hold near to my heart. It means so much that you think so highly of it, that's such an amazing compliment.
Haha, no, I don't. Well, I took about 5 years of it in school, but sadly, don't remember much. I'm better with comprehension than actually speaking Spanish, lol. Thywillbedone and Dusty273 are both wonderful; they speak Spanish, and have been helping me with translations and proper context.
But for the record, I TOTALLY UNDERSTOOD WHAT YOU SAID THERE. :B So I'm feeling quite proud of myself. And thank you so much, once again! You're amazing. ♥
Date: 06/21/11 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ooh, things just keep heating up! :D
Author's Response: Indeed! And it's not quite over yet ;)
Date: 06/20/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Updateeeee. I am ADDICTED! And excited for hopeful sexytiem.
Author's Response: Update will come as soon as the next chapter is written. I'm glad you like it; thank you for your enthusiasm! It keeps me going. <3
Date: 06/20/11 08:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Holy sh- I'm just a pile of melted goo on the floor. I mean...my god, Tomás is just....just...I'm speechless *-*
Author's Response: Hehe! I'm glad you enjoyed! <3
Date: 06/20/11 01:31 am Title: Chapter 9
oooooooh lovely lovely chapter! very cute song reference, it's amazingly well suited! Tom is so cute...acts all cool and sexy, but he's a softie...mmm Spanish Tom, that's hot...Spaniards are so sensual
Author's Response: Regarding sensuality... hehe, that's what they say! And it only goes uphill from here. ;)I'm so glad you're enjoying it though. Thanks!
Date: 06/19/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Lol, I can't believe I typed out a review and then forgot to click Submit -.-
What I said was that I totally thought Tom was going to purposely burn something because I took that author's note (and that endnote from a long time ago) seriously XD
Man, I would love to see Tom's beautiful Spanish house.
Author's Response: No worries, I've done that before. :P You know, I hadn't even thought of having Tom burn something on purpose, but man, that would've been interesting, haha! But I hope that you liked his little bout of accidental arson. =)
Date: 06/19/11 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
i just started reading this and oh my god i love it and LOL reno from FF, i fucking love him!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're finding it to your liking thus far. =D Haha, Reno was just... guh, there are no words for his awesome! I'm such a sucker for that movie ^_^
Date: 06/19/11 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
I was so excited to see this updated honey, I literally squeaked.
N'awwww they're finally a couple, I loved the Avril lyric, very cute. Tom almost burning the kitchen down was rather funny, poor man. I can't wait to see what comes next. Thank you honey *snuggles you in a warm blankie*
Author's Response: Not gonna lie, that's pretty awesome! That's really flattering, actually. I'm glad you like it that much!
Thank you! To be honest, I was a bit hesitant to use "Girlfriend" in this chapter because I'm trying to stick to certain musical genres for different locations, but... that line was perfect, and I couldn't resist the chance to have Bill teasingly call Tom his girlfriend, I just couldn't, my resolve is weak. >_> I am but a human. u_u It was more fun than I thought it'd be, having Tom burn the pasta to the point where it spontaneously combusted on the stove, hehe!
I do love your reviews, and I thank you so much for this one, Alli! ♥
Date: 06/19/11 03:18 am Title: Chapter 9
Ohhhhh I don't have words. I was melting at the beginning with Tomas being excited that Bill greeted him back in Spanish... and melting at the end when they finally made things official! This was a really great chapter, well worth the wait. You never fail to amaze me with your descriptions and the emotions that you inject into your words. Everything is so believable and easy to visualize, it's really amazing. Emmy always cracks me up; I have a lesbian friend who says the same thing about 'still being able to admire hot guys' XD Gotta love it.
I'm absolutely entranced by this and will be anticipating more, as always. You're so good. :'D
Author's Response: Three cheers for melting! =D HAha, but really, I'm so glad that you liked it, and fdjsalfja, I just don't know what to say except for thank you! You have me grinning like a damn fool over here, looking like a maniac as I type this up, haha! And that line was actually inspired by a friend of mine! ^_^ But I'm so glad you like her; Emmy has become one of my favorite characters in the story! I dunno what I'm going to do when Stereo ends D: rn
Eeek, your reviews never fail to make me smile. Thank you so much; it's always a pleasure hearing from you, darling! <3
Date: 06/18/11 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
haha, man, i love this story... the long waits are SO WORTH IT!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm happy to hear that, haha! Thanks so much! It's summer, so I'm hoping the waits won't be as long as before. I'm letting this be a lesson to me; from now on, no more posting fics until I'm at least 3/4 of the way finished writing them. >_> But thank you! =)