Date: 08/08/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter 7
This park trip sounds wonderful!
I absolutely LOVED this!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I am so excited for this that I might end up making myself sick; it's ridiculous, really. XD
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it; it really puts a smile on my face to know that. Thank you, dear. And more is coming soon! And not Tokio Hotel soon like the last chapter was *cough* ;)
Date: 08/07/10 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
ABSOLUTELY WORTH THE WAIT, EEEE. This date was just as adorable as the first one, and I can tell they're getting a tiny bit more relaxed with one another. Hee, I liked Tomás tricking Bill into his arms when they were first on the rollerblades. And I squealed out loud when he asked Bill if he could dance, because I just knew they'd end up dancing together! ♥ That's one of my favorite things in fic.
Oh, also, it's adorable that they're so shy and sweet despite what they already did at the club. Tomás makes such a good point, that he didn't know Bill yet and now he does. It gives them a chance to make a real relationship of this. One last point and I swear I'll stop babbling: really liked when they were talking about Bill's dreads, and Bill had to reassure Tomás that he was cool with commitment, just not when it came to his hair. Awww.
Have fun at the conference, good luck with the FQF fic, and I'll be eagerly awa
Author's Response: I'M SO GLAD, KISH! Your review made me smile so widely that when my mouth mouth finally snapped back into place, it knocked me three ways from Sunday, haha! <3
Hehe, Tomás tricking Bill like that was my favorite part of the entire chapter; he may be shy, but he's such a little trickster! As for the dancing, I'm so happy that I was able to give you one of your favorite things! =D They needed a little romantic moment. ^^
The point that Tomás makes is so important. And eep, that's my second favorite part, where Bill reassures Tomás. I'm so glad that you liked those parts! It's so fun hearing the parts that you particularly enjoyed, and what you thought of them, so thank you for sharing!
Thanks so much for the FQF and conference well wishes! I'm so excited, I just want to jump onto the bus/van/whatevere right now. x] ♥
Date: 08/07/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
*takes penny* ..... *hands thoughts* Thoughts: LOVELOVELOVE! My tummy was all fluttery and then warm and then crazed and then happy. ARSON, sweet! UHM, I mean oh look glitter *throws glitter* >_> ... I'm excited for the new chapter! XD
Author's Response: *hands penny* *takes thoughts* Thank you, ma'am! =) I'm thrilled that you liked it! Truth be told, I was iffy about this, but it's what needed to be done before we continue on. OMG I SEE WHAT YOU SAID THERE >_> I mean, I heard nothing. Hehe, I don't mean arson as in he's secretly a badass with a craving for burning things to the ground he's far too much of a softie for that but... you'll see. ;)
Date: 08/07/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
i literally gasped when i saw you'd updated! i frickin' love this story! another awesome date. i love how tomas pranked his way into bill's arms. now what's with the "potential for a career in arson" bit? i'm curious. update soon!
Author's Response: After a month without updating, I can certainly understand how it'd be surprising. XD
Tomás is such a little trickster, even though he's shy, lol. I think that was one of my favorite parts to write, honestly.
Hehe, as for that, madame, you shall see, because if I open my mouth to hint now, I won't shut up. XD An update is coming a heck of a lot sooner than this one did, and that's a promise! Thanks for bearing with me and being so patient; I really appreciate it! <3
Date: 08/07/10 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
*melts* OMG, honey, that was amazing! It was so sweet! I really, really love your Tomas, he's pretty fantastic!
I also really, really love this story, so no matter how long it takes, I'll be here waiting for it! <333
Author's Response: Underneath that exterior he puts up in the club, Tomás is such a sweetheart. And I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! Thank you so much; that means so much more to me than you'll ever know, it really does! ♥
Date: 08/07/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love that you had them skating lol I can only imagine how horrible they'd be at it in real life. All lanky limbs and flailing arms on Tom's part for sure :]
Author's Response: I couldn't resist >_> In real life, Bill would be flailing around, and big brother Tomi would be not only falling himself, but falling for Bill. You know Bill would grab onto him every time he fell, and Tom would end up hitting the ground first, and then get crushed by baby bro on top of that. x]
Date: 08/07/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love that outfit. =) I love this story, its great so far, keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait for more! =)
Author's Response: It's such a wonderful outfit, isn't it? I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. And, you have great timing, because I just added the next chapter. =)
Date: 08/05/10 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
By the by, who made your banner? :D
Author's Response: I did! ^_^ Hehe!
Date: 08/05/10 08:58 am Title: Chapter 6
Whoa, I was fully going to be all "OMG meeting OUT of the club?? I don't know how I feel about this!!", and then happened to look up at your sentence wondering about how we felt about them being outside the adrenaline of the nightclub, so then had to rethink, and what I think now, is that I LOVE the nightclub stuff, but they can't SLEEP in the club, can't casually go on a date and have a meal in the club. Things will have to happen outside of it eventually for story progression. SO, to sum up this monster review: Yes, I do enjoy a bit of 'non-club', but love the 'in-club' also. Christ, somebody get me some ice for my bleeding fingers haha.
Author's Response: *marches in with tub of ice* ;)
Hehe, I had a feeling that a lot of people wouldn't really like it; I know it's definitely bland in comparison to the nightclub scens, you know? But, it's very important that we see this aspect of their personalities, so I'm glad that you were able to see that, and that you changed your mind about it! That made me smile so big, and right when I needed it, becuase I've had an emotional past hour. This made me smile so much, so thank you. ♥
Date: 08/01/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok. So i haven't read it yet, but i wanted to say that it was cool how you put the playlist on there. I didn't know you could. I hope you don't mind if i try it.
Author's Response: Yep, it's totally possible. You can embed youtube vids, too! And haha, nah, I don't mind at all! You don't really have to ask my permission, though; I'm sure I'm not the only one who's done it. =) ♥
Date: 07/26/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon, I really miss this story
Author's Response: I know, it's been forever .______. I'm working on it, I promise! I am determined to update this week. DETERMINED! *puts on game face*
Date: 07/22/10 10:45 am Title: Chapter 6
When are you going to update next? -jaw drops- I am in love with DJ Tomas and gogo dancer Bill. XD -grins- More more more!!!
I love how they both are awkward outside the club, can't wait to see their relationship build up more... perhaps a bit of Jealous!Tom could peek in sometime? I adore jealous!Tom... so much. Anyhooters, Amazing. Love it. And I will keel you if you don't update soon. buh bai
Author's Response: I've been really stuck, and still sort of am; I have everything that happens after this chapter, right down to the end fully planned, but this chapter is sort of the bridge to get to that point, and it's killing me ;_; BUT. I am completely determined to write this, so I'm aiming to update this week, as soon as possible.
I'm so glad that you're enjoying them outside of the club as much as inside! Hehe, as for jealous Tom... I'll take that into consideration. ;) But eep, don't keel me! o_o I'll update soon, love! Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 07/21/10 06:25 am Title: Chapter 6
This is a fantastic story! I really like the smutty/sweet bond between Bill and Tom and the obvious chemistry between them. I think using this chapter was hugely important though because it is far less lust and testosterone driven than the rest and shows both characters in a more sensitive, awkward light. Not only does it make the story more balanced but I also feel I know Bill and Tom a lot better. Plus, it's just so darn adorable seeing them acting coy and shy for once. Please write more soon,
Sylvie x
Author's Response: Ack, I wish I could ust give you a great big hug right now. You've hit the nail on the head, and you definitely understand what I was trying to do with this chapter. Bill and Tomas wouldn't act in public the same way that they would act in a nightclub. I'm so pleased that you caught on to that! *hugs* And, I'm glad that you're enjoying seeing them shy. It's a lot of fun writing them that way, hehe!
Your review made me grin like a total loon. Thank you so much, love! ♥
Date: 07/19/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
really! I NEED AN UPDATE!! Going crazy HERE!!! pls dont abandon this fic!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taking so long! *hangs head in shame* I'm working on chapter 7, I really am! I was just stuck for the longest time, and then other things came up, and sdaklfjasl. But I'm working on it now, and an update is coming soon, I promise! I would never abandon this, it's my baby. Sorry again about the long wait, and thank you for being so patient, but if you could just bear with me for a little bit longer, things will be back on track soon, I promise! ♥
Date: 07/07/10 08:43 am Title: Chapter 6
awesome chappie, looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is on it's way. =)
Date: 07/07/10 05:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! You potray Tom so differently from other authors, and I must say- he's adorable XD. You write their emotions so well, really realistically I think. I'm totally in love with your story (and your writing!)b29; And by the way, I have no idea what you were so worried about with that chapter, it's perfect :D Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, our DJ is confident in the club, but not quite in the light ;)
I'm so flattered that you feel I'm writing it realistically. That means I must be doing something right! ;) And perfect? Wow, that's a huge compliment. Thank you! Haha, I tend to worry, I guess. I need to work on that. ._. lol.
I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. The next chapter has been under a huge delay, but it's coming, I promise! =)
Date: 07/05/10 05:48 am Title: Chapter 6
I love ur story! please keep it up! the way u explain the emotions..the scenes are reali good! I LOVE U!! xD
Author's Response: I'm gonna update this soon, I promise! Promise, promise, promise! ♥ And I'm so glad that you like it. Love you too, doll! ;D
Date: 07/04/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Doooooooooooooooooooo it XD
Author's Response: Are you talking about Bill and Tomas? x] When the time is right, that's all I'm saying... ;)
Date: 07/03/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
A bit bland compared to your other chapters, and it wasn't very realistic, which made it hard to relate to. I love the other chapters though :)
Author's Response: Ah, well, I'm sorry that this chapter didn't appeal to you like the first ones did. But please, keep in mind that in the first few chapters, they were inside of a nightclub, and driven by alcohol, and had let go of their inhibitions, while in this chapter, they were sober, and actually attempting to get to know each other, haha! In either case, I'm sorry that this one didn't appeal to you. Hope you still enjoy it, though. =)
But please, let me know where you felt it was bland, and where you felt it was unrealistic. I'd love to know so that I can improve! And I can't improve unless I know specifics. My email is ofmusicandstyle@yahoo.com. =)
Thanks so much for the honesty and feedback, dear, and if you choose to continue reading, then I hope you enjoy! =)
Date: 07/02/10 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
AAAHHHH when is the 7th extension gonna be released?!
What's the next song gonna be?Love in this club?lol jk.
hella excites!
Author's Response: I know it's taking a while. I'm sorry! ._. I'm kind of stuck; I have the later chapters all planned out--I'm just trying to figure out how to get there. But I will have the next chapter posted as soon as I possibly can, I promise! =)
Haha, it's not going to be that song, but... you'll ust have to wait and see. ;) I'm so glad you're excited! It's highly flattering. Thanks so much, sweetie! <3