'Bro's before ho's'. Never seen it taken that literally... but I liked it.

Well, I think your writing could use some work. This story really moves along way too fast, and because of that, it doesnt feel very realistic.
Personally, I love reading about the twins getting found out because it makes the naughtyness of their relationship so apparent. But I think it's important to look at the situation as realistically as possible. Imagine something like that happening to you and how your friends would react. I'm sure there's a lot more drama. Show the reader how your characters feel.
Keep writing, ok? :)
Btw, I love the saying Incest Is Best, lol.

Author's Response: Yeah i kinda felt the same way too when writing it, and my own twin was trying to make me hurry up and finish it. (Next time ill tell her to shove it and be pacient:).) But thanks for reading!

yay for stories...i may or may not be the friend who said said quote only you shall know the truth deary!! Great job on your first twincest story!! You should write more one-shots!!