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Reviewer: MegaMegan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

This story is good. Your smut wasn't bad. And don't worry I get embarrassed writing it too. I always think I'll do something wrong. lol But I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I was cringing as I typed T_T Haha! Thanks! Sorry about the wait, we're on hiatus for a bit but I'm thinking up and typing the next chapter as we speak so hold on! Thanks again :) x

Reviewer: betweensecrets Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, seems that NessaCSK said pretty much what I wanted to say, so I'm just goig to reinforce. I love your story, and hope that you update soon. ;D

Author's Response: THANKYOU! Haha, um apologies for the lack of update. I'll write something up now, please forgive me! xD x

Reviewer: NessaCSK Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh! Goshhhh! I just found your story and I'm a total addict! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I love a bad Tomi :P. Hope you can update soon!

Author's Response: eeeeeee, thank you! We're both very sorry for the lack of updates. We did have summer but Dara was in the country side and I was abroad for most of it. Do forgive us! We're glad you like the story, but we're a little short on creative juices right now. Bare with us! (I hope that was the right bare and how to spell it...) ANYWAY! I'll get writing now and hope something genius appears on screen. :) thanks much, Jess x

Reviewer: betweensecrets Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm used to read only Tom/OFC stories, but I'm really liking this one.

Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot, but I'm sorry to say this fic is currently on hiatus. I'm not too sure what's going to happen with it, but please don't hate us! If anything I'll carry this out alone, just give me time! Jess x

Reviewer: WeAreDogsUnleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/10 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I miss a new chapter D:

Author's Response: Sorry sorry sorry D: I'll update soon as possible! I'll write up the chapter now. T_T I've been... busy. School and holidays abroad. :l okay! Forgive me xD x

Author's Response: Sorry sorry sorry D: I'll update soon as possible! I'll write up the chapter now. T_T I've been... busy. School and holidays abroad. :l okay! Forgive me xD x

Reviewer: betweensecrets Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 13

Oooooh my gosh, pleeeease post more. I can't wait to see Tom's idea. ;D

Author's Response: As am I! My co-author isn't interested in writing anymore so that's why it's taken so long to update. So sorry! I'll try and think of something to write up and see if I can go this one alone. Sorry for the long wait! Jess x

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh Oh, Tom's gonna be a bad boy ;)

Author's Response: indeedz ;D Haha x

Reviewer: WeAreDogsUnleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh my >:O
That was kinda sexy c':

I don't want Tom to be in love with Cleo, because then I feel so jealous, eeh D: xD

Author's Response: HAHAHA! Thanks? xD And how so?!?! Haha xD x

Reviewer: WeAreDogsUnleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 11

AWWW, loved it *w*

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 13

oh i like this story more then i thought i would

Author's Response: Really? So we're ok then? x) x

Reviewer: 30061995xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 05:33 am Title: Chapter 13

You're really good at writing lemon :) you shouldn't be embarrassed. Ohh what is naughty Tom going to do? 0___0

Author's Response: Lemon? Why is it even called that? I don't understand, haha! Um, well thanks anyway. And well I'm thinking that myself! We're currently on hiatus because my co-author... well let's just say she's lost contact with her inner fangirl and so she is no longer interested in fan fiction. Just give it some time, and I'll see if I can pick this up but for now... don't hate me! Jess x

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well I guess the older fans like smut *shrugs* lol

Author's Response: Haha probably. x) I had to change the rating back to NC17 tho. xD x

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

You get used to it really! Check out my stories if you like.

Author's Response: OH GOD. Haha, I avoid writing smut but since I got scolded for not including it I had to. :') So I kept some of it clean for the readers who didn't want smut. Haha. Oh gawddd. x) x

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 13

No need to be embarrassed! That was very well written! What is Tomi up to? Mischief I'm sure! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Haha, idk it was just awkward. LOL! And thank you x) Haha. You'll have to wait and see ;) thanks for the review :) x

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

Nicely written smut. But what on earth is Tom planning now??

I'm calling the two of you Queens of Cliffhangers.

Can't wait! :]

Author's Response: Haha! Really? I was cringing as I wrote! And you'll have to wait and see ;) Thanks for that title! Haha, and also for being a loyal reviewer :) x

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

Aww don't be embarrass hun that was very good :D

Author's Response: Hahaha! Sorry I was cringing with every word I typed .__.'' Haha! Thanks x) x

Reviewer: Izzuhhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh Jeeeeess! The proof was pressed against her leg. ;D

Author's Response: GRANDADDIN'. x

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Haha ok cool :D

Reviewer: Izzuhhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 12

This chapter made me awwww - the bit with Tom :]
I got SLIGHTLY worried you might go into detail then I was like "Oh. No, it's Dara, she doesn't do that" x]
JESS. YOU BETTER GET TO WRITIN'

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow! Wasn't expecting that to happen!

Is it just me or was Tom totally flirting with Cleo??

Can't wait for next chapter! :]

Author's Response: o0o0o, maybe he was! ;O Hahaha, we shall see ;) I'll write soon! :) x

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