Reviews For Twenty-One Days
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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/23 02:36 am Title: Prologue: April 3rd, 2010

I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/15 11:58 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

This doesn't really have a satisfying ending. I feel like it cut off in the middle of something. Did Tom just accept what Bill did? What did Bill mean there are some habits you just can't break?

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 07:41 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

Cool story! Was an emotional roller-coaster. Love the happy ending!

Reviewer: thosechocolatebrowneyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 09:12 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

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Reviewer: hihhihihihihihi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 03:46 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

so..basically in the end..they are still together??

Author's Response: That's what I was hinting at, yes. Sorry, this ending was kind of major fail. :( I apologize for that. Thanks for reviewing, though. :)

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 09:01 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

oh, i lovelovelove this!!!!!! it was sooo well-written. i nearly cried from day 17 until the end, the tension was sooo hard to read about. i have a question, although it's probably obvious: they are over, right? like, they're just brothers, nothing more? i know i'm being completely airheaded about it, but i had to ask. *facepalms epically*
like i said, i freaking love this and i wanna thank you SO MUCH for writing this. amazing!!!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 09:00 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

oh, i lovelovelove this!!!!!! it was sooo well-written. i nearly cried from day 17 until the end, the tension was sooo hard to read about. i have a question, although it's probably obvious: they are over, right? like, they're just brothers, nothing more? i know i'm being completely airheaded about it, but i had to ask. *facepalms epically*
like i said, i freaking love this and i wanna thank you SO MUCH for writing this. amazing!!!

Author's Response: Whoops, you double posted your comment! xD But, that doesn't really matter. I'm so happy you loveloveloved this! Ah, yeah, day 17 and onward... those were indeed shaky, tense days. Hmm, it's not an airhead question or anything, don't think anything like that, but when I wrote the ending I imagined them sticking together. :x I don't know, maybe the ending can be taken either way? I never really thought about it! (But the ending kind of sucked, I'll admit to that, so I can definitely understand your confusion!!) Ahh, thank YOU so much for reading! I'm so glad you loved it. :')

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 03:12 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010

God, you nearly had me in tears. Well done!

Author's Response: Ohh, yes, those scenes nearly had me in tears writing them, too. Thank youuuu! :))

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/10 09:07 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

Wait, what?? They didnt end??
Oh jeez! I was really hoping for a more defined reunion!! Like, at least ONE more sappy sentence to make them officially back together... but you ROBBED ME!!!! :(
I really loved this story though. I put off reading it for the longest time... actually I've been tracking it since the beginning, but this is one of those stories I knew I wanted to read from start to finish without waiting for new chapters. hehe. Sorry. Take it as a compliment.
I love how multi-dimensional your characters are. The G's are gold, and Bill is delusional and darling, but for me: Tom is the best in this one. The way he tries dealing with each day is touching, but the most impactful part was definitely when Tom cried... OMG, like, that almost made me cry! You made him sound so real and vulnerable. And I really have to say that although every day was awesome, I LOVED the last day, right before the driver picks them up.. that was explosive. And the parts where Bill "slips up", hehe, can't forget those.
Just, really good. A fantastic read. Thanks so much for writing. :)

Author's Response: ONE more sappy sentence? Huh... I'm not sure only ONE could work...*ponders* Okay. -- [A little while later, at the airport.. erm, someplace hidden, you choose] "Me?" Tom questioned as he leaned in a bit closer toward his twin, a familiar, internal tug taking over as he nudged his head a bit upward to meet his brother's softening features. "A habit?" || Bill smirked. "A bad habit," he corrected. || "Well," Tom settled and straightened up a bit, his lips curling into an soft, upward curve. Closing the distance between them, he pressed a tender, reuniting kiss upon his twin's lips, gently cupping the back of his head with both of his hands. Pulling no more than a few inches away, he finished, "Then I guess I'm one bad habit you're not going to lose." || Duh-duh-duhhhh, there, that any better? I'm afraid that's more cheese than sap, though... ahh, well. That sucked, too. Gahh, no luck!! ;__; Moving on! -- Hehe, no worries, I can understand why you would wait to finally start reading it, especially if you know my not-so-lovely history of updating time. :x I'm so happy you loved the characters, especially Tom. Tom was by far my favorite to write, too. And the last day, oy. If you couldn't tell, I really didn't know how to tie up loose ends quickly and efficiently without rambling on forever and ever, hence the lack of sappy sentences. My bad. But it seems a lot of stories/movies/anything and everything have sucky endings... ohhh well. I'm rambling now. Thank you for reading and leaving a review! I'm tickled pink that you enjoyed it! :D

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 12:39 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

are they still together?!?!?
oh god, tom was vicious! i liked!

amazing!

Author's Response: Mmmm, well, I wouldn't yell if you assume that they are back together, judging from Tom's last line and Bill's final entry to the journal. ;) Hahaa, glad you liked vicious Tom! XD Thank youuuuuu!!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 05:43 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

LOL, very cute, I love Bill's final sentence. I am so glad Tom finally said so many of the things I wanted him to say. Great job, thanks so much!

Author's Response: ^__^ Thank youuuu!! I'm glad you loved it.

Reviewer: alysmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 02:19 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

*thumbs up*

Author's Response: Thanksssssss :3

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 02:00 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

Noooo it's over!!!

God I grew so fond of reading this.. how much is needed to create a habit?? I think that, maybe 21 days lol.

It was a great story to follow, and now I feel kind of sad it's finishing, it helps brighten my mood that the twins stick togeher in the end.

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.

Hugs!!

Author's Response: Hahaa, yes, 21 days are needed! ;) Well, thank youuuu, I'm so verryyyy glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for following and leaving your thoughts along the way! *hugs*

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 01:05 am Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

I knew the end was coming, but I still wasn't prepared, lolZ.

LOVED this!

XD

Author's Response: Hah, no one's ever ready for an ending. ;) Thank you!! I'm so happy you loved it!! XD

Reviewer: anjelik Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:58 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

I'm not gonna lie, I really think the ending could have been better. It would have been more realistic to make day twenty-one pass and have the whole "I'm sorry" thing go down farther down the road... maybe like two or three weeks later. And it shouldn't have been a simple "I'm scared I'll get hurt" thing that brings them together, it shouldve been the whole "maybe this ISNT a habit" thing that does it. And if would have helped if you made Tom go out with someone just because, and have bill realize the previous because of the jealous feelings. I seriously feel like you didn't do your story justice, I mean it's good, don't get me wrong... but it couldve been sooooo much better, and we all know it.
NEwho, I guess I'll just have to deal. Thanks for the awsome story. Hope you plan on writing another one sometime soon.

Author's Response: Hmm... well... *heavy sigh* I definitely see where you're coming from, and I agree with some of it, and your ideas could definitely make up an alternative ending to this fic.. I'm sorry you didn't like the ending, but thank you for reading and reviewing. :))

Reviewer: Motherluna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:49 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

Sorry I did not like the end... more so with Bill being in LA and TOM in Germany I'm crying now...stupid story (sorry I do not want to offend you) googl luck in college :)

Author's Response: Ahhh, yeah, I know what you mean with their current situation... :( Well, I'm sorry you didn't like it, but thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts annnnd for the good luck. :))

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 05:57 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

So back to being close but no sexitiems? Ok. It was really hard to come to this point for them.

Author's Response: Hmmmm well, the sexitimes is debatable. Let your mind wander with that ;) Thank you for reading and following this story! :))

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 04:56 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

fucking finally. i swear i was about to kick bill in the nuts. HARD

Author's Response: And I wouldn't blame you. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing all along the way

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:44 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!!

Author's Response: REALLY? YAYYY! I'm sooo happy you loved it!! :D Thank youuuu for reading, love. :)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:38 pm Title: Day Twenty-One: April 24th, 2010

I'm not sure if I get the ending... I guess they are back together, reading the last sentence but I don't know, Bill doesn't seem convince that it will work... anyway, I'm going to pretend that they are together forever :D I really enjoyed this fic, thank you for sharing, it was a pleasure to read!

Author's Response: I like the way you pretend, because you know what? I think you're right. ;) Aw, thankies, I'm happy you enjoyed it! :DD

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