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Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 02:53 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010

ohhhhh boyyy.
when will bill just give up ?!
lovoeee itt!

Author's Response: he neeeeeeds to. hmph. Thanks for reading! I'm so happy you love it!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:51 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010

Oh no! I caught up so now I've gotta wait for the updates :P
Really good chapter, poor twins are so confused and hurt... I hope they get better soon!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ehhh, don't worry, only 5 more chapters and updates should be more than once a week. :D *sigh* I'm afraid they won't get much better in this next chapter, though *grimaces at what she has written* ... oh well, drama will be drama. And drama will happen in this fic. Anyway! Thank you for reading!!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:45 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010

Awwww Tom following Bill around was adorable!
And that last scene was really sexy :P They obviously need each other, Bill will understand that, at least I hope so!

Author's Response: He better understand that. And soon. Time is running up!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:39 pm Title: Day Twelve: April 15th, 2010

Haha! Bill and his smiley faces, hilarious !
Really good chapter, it's sad to read tho :(

Author's Response: Smiley faces are hard to write/draw sometimes!! XD Thankssss

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:31 pm Title: Day Ten: April 13th, 2010

I'm really enjoying your writing style, it's funny and captivating ! I can't stop reading this fic :)

Author's Response: Ahahaa, thank you!! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:26 pm Title: Day Eight: April 11th, 2010

Of course Bill is going to miss kissing Tom! Hey boy, he has to much faith in is capacity, he can't resist Tom!

Author's Response: But then again, can anyone resist Tom? ;)

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:24 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010

Loved it but Bill needs to see that he's breaking Toms heart! Poor Tom. I think Tom should move on and sorta break Bills heart

Author's Response: Oooh... a revenge path... you know, I hadn't even considered that for Tom. Hmm. *ponders* Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:21 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010

Go Tom!! You'll win him back!!
*cheers for Tom*

Author's Response: *joins the cheer squad* Go, Tom, go!! If you can't get him no one can!! *throws pom-poms around* XDD Hehe, love this review. Thanks, love.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:15 pm Title: Day Seven: April 10th, 2010

Awww they need to talk, like really soon or it's going to get worse !

I really like the way you write the characters in this, I feel like I'm watching a movie!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:07 pm Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

Tom is such a good twin, always there for Bill even when Bill try to push him away ...

Author's Response: Tom gets that "good twin" compliment a lot in this story... hmm... ^^ Thanks for still reading

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:06 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010

Wrong! I kinda feel bad for Bill (only a little, I'm more angry at him for being so stubborn), but my heart is breaking for Tom, really. I can understand Bill's motives for doing this, but it's more difficult for Tom. Now he knows what Bill wants, but he can't really come out and say he knows what's going on. I'll be looking forward to more. :)



Author's Response: Poor Tom. :'( I'm a little ticked at Bill, too... stubborn boy. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 01:01 pm Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

You can't turn your back to your soul mate, Bill needs to learn this :(

This fic is awesome, I'm enjoying reading it a lot !

Author's Response: *sigh* Bill needs to learn a lot in this fic...

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 12:57 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

That kissing scene was sexy, too bad it ends so abruptly cause of Bill!
I hope is not going to destroy his entire relationship with Tom by acting this way... really interesting story, I'm really into it !

Author's Response: Yay, thanks! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 12:48 pm Title: Day One: April 4th, 2010

Of course Tom is going to feel rejection if Bill doesn’t let him know his plan... awww Poor Tomi :( This can't work if they aren't together in trying to end this thing, even if they shouldn't try to end it in the first place... lol
Reading the rest now !

Author's Response: Exacccctly! Poor Tom ;_; Thanks for continuing reading this, by the way! :)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 12:43 pm Title: Prologue: April 3rd, 2010

Very interesting first chapter! I feel so sad for them already, bad idea Bill, you were meant to be together :)
Can't wait to see where you take this !

Author's Response: Ooh, new reader to the fic, hello! :D Thanks for reading, and yes, they ARE meant to be together, aren't they? I hope they realize that soon...

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/10 10:28 am Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010

this is making them both crazy!
their just meant to be together!

Author's Response: i know, right? hah, thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 05:02 pm Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010

so sweet and tender, but so sad. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: :) thank youuu

Reviewer: ForbiddenRapture Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 07:46 am Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010

-cried so hard that it hurt- oh god, girl, that was so sad. i want Bill to stop hurting Tom and himself, and Tom is giving up? -starts sniffling again-

Author's Response: aww ;_; don't lose hope in Tom. He's a fighter. ;)

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 02:08 am Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010

Hi

It was a sad chapter, or maybe I'm the one depressed, nevertheless it made my heart hurt for Tom. Poor dear, knowing that his love is breaking up his relation giving him no option is tearing him apart.

Yes I must be really blue because this time I don't see any way around the rupture.

See you next chapter!

Hugs!

Author's Response: Aww ;_; Poor Tom. Hopefully things will get better. thanks for reading, love! *hugs*

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 12:30 am Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010

;-; No!! It can't be coming to an end. ;-;
Tom can't just give up, Bill's being crazy! ;-;
I really loved the sweet moment they had though. When they were just sleeping and holding on to each other. ;-; Maybe... if they have to end it, they can keep little things like that...

I really am loving this story so much, update soon please. :]

Author's Response: Yes, little things like that would be nice to keep... we'll see where it goes. ;) Glad you love it! Thanks for continuing to read!

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