Date: 08/17/10 08:19 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
I really enjoyed this chapter. :)
Author's Response: :3 Thanks, I'm happy you did.
Date: 08/17/10 07:39 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
Ohhh, poor things. It hurts the both of them.
Author's Response: Mhmmmm ;__; but thanks for reading as always, love :)
Date: 08/17/10 06:46 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
OMFG.I've just started reading your fic, and I have to say: THIS.IS.KILLING.MEEEEEE.
MY GOD, BILL, YOU BASTARD ;_; seriously, I'm dying to know what happened next!Day nineteen coming soon, please? *gives you some cookie*
Author's Response: Yes. He is. :x Well thank youuu for hopping on and reading. :D I'll try to get day nineteen up either today or tomorrow! *noms cookie*
Date: 08/17/10 05:52 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
Oh God, you're killing me here. *cries* I'm crying right now and I really want to slap Bill and cuddle Tom some more. I guess at least Bill has sort of realized what he's doing to his twin. :(
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry. If it's any consolation, I was having trouble writing this chapter without crying.. ;_; Hopefully that realization will be enough to slap some sense into him, too. Thanks for continuing to read! :)
Date: 08/17/10 05:46 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
Tom broke down! Oh man, to witness that should've been really hard on Bill, knowing that his brother's state is his fault... well, I can not even imagine how painful that might be.
Is this episode going to make bill rethink his current 'assigment'? Or will Tom pretend it didn't happen and allow Bill have it his way?
Nice chapter, sad, sad, sad...
Hugs!
Author's Response: Mmm, I think some rethinking will occur, but I don't want to spoil anything, so I'll leave it at that. :3 Thank youuuu *hugs*
Date: 08/17/10 11:39 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Gah, more soon!
XD
Author's Response: More is here!! :D Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/16/10 06:16 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Hi, You were right the last comment I left was kinda Twilight teaming... Never thought of it... ****fail****
This chapter was so full of Tom's Emotions taking charge. Yet, no one can blame him. He's just trying to cope with everything in the way he finds at hand.
Ask and you shall be given what you wanted Bill
Kisses
Author's Response: LOL, it's cool. I might not be much of a Twilight person, but take teams here as much as you like. ;) Oh, man, if this chapter was full of Tom's emotions... prep yourself for this next chapter. :x *hugs* Thanks for reading again!
Date: 08/16/10 03:15 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Oh wow. I loved Tom's reaction and how he thought Bill was being ridiculous in thinking that the feelings would just go away after day 21. I was thinking that too during Bill's entry. >.>
And when Bill was worried about where Tom was, well I guess it's normal that he would be, but he's the one trying to end things, he needs to let go of Tom if he really wants it to end. >.>
I can't wait to see how this ends, update again soon please!! :D
Author's Response: :) Thank youuuu, love, I'm so glad you liked it. Update is here!
Date: 08/16/10 09:51 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
*smacks bills head*
will you realise yet boy?!
oh poor tom :(
Author's Response: I think that boy could use another few smacks to the head, actually. XD Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/16/10 04:01 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
hoooo
now little billy doesnt want distance. what a pain in the ass ne? x'D
Author's Response: total pain. -__- he should make up his mind already, sheesh. thanks for reading, love XD
Date: 08/15/10 07:28 pm Title: Prologue: April 3rd, 2010
yess!!! *heart*
:)
Author's Response: XD *cheers for Bill's regrets*
Date: 08/15/10 12:36 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
I dunno if I'm right in feeling this, but Bill sorta got what he deserved, I think. But even though you said this chapter is nothing, I like it and I think it's a good way to display Tom's side better so we can see more than just Bill's struggle. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (:
Author's Response: I think he got what he deserved, too. :) Thank youuuu :3
Date: 08/15/10 12:28 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Bill is starting to have regrets!!! O_O
Author's Response: O_O *bounces in anticipation* Regrets are a good thing here, yesss???
Date: 08/15/10 12:07 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Awwe Bill. I don't think Tom appreciates that you left him out of the loop.
Dayyumm I LOVE this story SO MUCH!! I'm always über excited when i recieve the notification email saying this fic is update and I rush to read or save it on my iPod for later offline viewing. It's freaking amazing!! Alway leaving me wanting more and just waiting for Bill to crack. XD
Author's Response: Mm, I don't think he appreciates it much, either. XD Aw, thank you!! I'm so happy you love it! XD I'll try to update soon!
Date: 08/14/10 08:02 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Sorry to say it, Bill, but even if this is not what you wanted, it might be what Tom needs right now. *cuddles Tom*
I just adore this story, even if my heart breaks for Tom every chapter (and I know I say that on every chapter, too, hee, but it's true). *sighs* Definitely on Team Tom, I really want to slap some sense into Bill. Isn't what happened today similar to what he's been doing to Tom all along, despite how he wants to see it? He's shut Tom out of his life, out of the relationship bad or otherwise they'd had for years, and then when Tom decides to distance himself, he freaks out and expects him to come running back and apologize for leaving like that. It's very selfish of him just to want things back to what he believes is normal, without any regard for Tom's feelings.
I'll be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Aw, don't worry about saying that every chapter. It's cute, and Tom could always use the cuddles in this fic. ;) And yes, it's very similar, identical almost to what he's been doing to Tom this whole time, and I agree, it's very quite selfish! Thank you for reading and reviewing. :3
Date: 08/14/10 07:31 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Hello, my name is Cristina, and let me tell you that your story is just great.
In fact, I've been reading this from the first chapter, but because I'm from Spain and my English is not very good, not usually say. So if you do not understand something, let me know. =D
I like the storyline, and share opinions with Tom, Bill is only fooling himself. But on the other hand, I also think that the plan might be and it is Tom who has convinced himself that no feature. :S
I also wanted to ask you something important. I wish that you drop your story translate to Spanish and upload it to a page that is in Spanish. Of course, not want you to feel obliged, you're in your absolute right to refuse. If you will not be any problem. =D
However, I ask a favor. I need your answer, say yes or no, but I'd like to read a response. And above all, to know if Bill final plan will work or not. xD
Kiss and Hugs, Cris
Author's Response: Hi Cristina! Well, I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story, and thank you for reading! I'm sorry.. maybe I'm misunderstanding, are you asking to personally translate the story? If so, of course you can. I don't mind at all! :D As to whether or not Bill's final plan will work... well, I'm not even sure about that yet. I won't know until I write the final chapter! XD *hugs*
Date: 08/14/10 07:30 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
xD What did Tom do?
Author's Response: He just blew off some steam, nothing too extreme. Ooh, it rhymes. XD thanks for reading, love
Date: 08/12/10 12:42 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010
Definetely I'm teaming Tom!! I feel so sad for him, trying to fight the one he loves the most and the one he's always given support to no matter what.
Bill is just deceiving himself, he doesn't want to sleep in the same bed for his brother sake, it's his own weakness what makes him leave to the spare room.
I got the feeling these last days are going to prove to be hard for them both.
Hugs!!
Author's Response: Oooh, are we teaming up here like girls do with Twilight? I'M SO TEAM TOM. And yes, these last days are already proving hard... especially for me. :x Gah. Thank you for reading and reviewing, love! *hugssss*
Date: 08/12/10 01:30 am Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010
I really wish Tom would finish his thoughts, it might actually HELP Bill, lolZ.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: LOL, so true. Thank youuu! :D
Date: 08/11/10 11:54 pm Title: Day Sixteen: April 19th, 2010
;-;
Oh wow. I didn't think that sleeping in seperate beds would be that hard, but the way you wrote it made me want to cry. ;-;
Especially when Tom wanted to tell him he was being dumb, but let him go anyway. Bill needs to come to him senses. ;-;
Oh and I loved how their mom just knew there was something wrong with them. XD
Maybe Bill will be able to see how much worse it is if they're... fighting? kind of. :[
Anyway, I don't think this chapter failed, it was a really important step in Bill's plan. Even if it was so heartbreaking. ;-;
Author's Response: *heavy sigh* I think Bill has completely lost touch with his senses here. Silly, silly boy. ;_; He better find them soon. Aw, thank you, love. :)