Date: 08/22/10 02:15 am Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
Heya, I'd seen your story on the recents page tonz of times and I had completely ignored it up until this point. And really I'm so glad I finally got around to giving your story a read because it is absolutely amazing! It took me a pretty long time to get caught up to where your at, but it is definitely worth it. I was completely captivated by this story throughout every chapter, and it has played with my emotins in the cruelest of ways... but I completely love it. There are not enough words in the websters dictionary to express how much I love your story... it is truely truely beautiful. What you can do with words is a gift and nothing short of it.
But anyway, about the story, I gotta say I'm BEYOND pissed off at Bill for what he's dong to Tom. I hate how he keeps saying that it's all for Tom and how he's doing it so Tom won't get hurt, but he's too stupid to realize that he's achieving the exact opposite of Tom's happiness. And it really breaks my heart that Tom has been completely broken, and that he's completely given up. I want these two to just give in to each other so they can get a happy ending, but it feels like Bill's stupidity just keeps getting in the way. Truthfully, I'm half expecting you to finish this story with the twins leaving eachother and going their seperate ways. And as much as I hate to say it, I can see the appeal in that. As most people have probably figured out by now, some of the most amazing stories don't end in happily ever after.
Anywho, just do me a favor and update as soon as you can because I feel like I'll probably die if you take awfully long to update.
Author's Response: Ohhh thank you! *hugs* You're sweet. :) Aw, yeah, I can see the appeal in that, too... so would you be disappointed with a happily ever after? Well, I've fulfilled the favor; just updated, and the next and final update shouldn't be all that much longer, a couple days' wait at best. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you finally decided to give this story a read! :D
Date: 08/21/10 05:07 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
so sad. I'm ready for Bill to be done with this, its only hurting both of them. Thanks for the update though!
Author's Response: Ahhh, I'm ready for him to be done, too. So much drama. Thank youuu for reading and reviewing, like always :D
Date: 08/21/10 04:21 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
D: A little voice is saying that they'll be together in the end. I personally hope so.
Author's Response: I hope that little voice is right... thanks for reading :)
Date: 08/21/10 04:00 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
ouch. when is bill going to run out of his period? x'D
Author's Response: I don't know, man, we're already coming up on, what, three weeks? Jeeze, he should go visit a gynecologist, just sayin' 3 weeks isn't normal. XD Thanks for reading as usual
Date: 08/21/10 03:50 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
Awww an other sad but adorable chapter where you succeed in showing just how much they need each other! I feel so sad for Tomi, he's all confused... I hope it gets better for them!
Author's Response: I hope so, tooooo, thanks for reading, love :)
Date: 08/21/10 03:45 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
Zomg, the thought of Tom so sad just pulls at my heart strings.
LOVED thia, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Aw ;_; Happy you loved it, though! Thanks :D
Date: 08/21/10 03:35 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
tippkkimtjkvuii
Author's Response: damn, i'm not fluent in gibberish yet. ;__;
Date: 08/21/10 02:12 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
I'm on Tom's side.. Is there a side?
lol
Poor Tom..
But I understand Bill..
Author's Response: I'd definitely say there are sides here. You either want Bill to succeed, or you want him to... well, fail, basically. XD So yeah, there are sides. Thanks for reading :))
Date: 08/21/10 02:03 pm Title: Day Nineteen: April 22nd, 2010
OMFG.I was bored just one minute ago and then I saw that you updated!Just two days left ;_;' oh no Bill, you HAVE to go back to Tom!Shit, I'm going to cry because of your fic.
Update soon, eeh! *gives you some marshmallow*
Author's Response: Aww, yeah, he needs to go back to Tom... but... we'll see. Oooh! Mallow! *noms marshmallow* Hee, thank you. XD
Date: 08/19/10 01:55 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
wow, Tom's musings in the shower about what he loved about showers with Bill were so sweet and tender. heartbreaking. so was the last scene, poor Tom. They need to talk soon. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: *sniffle* Tom was breaking my heart this chapter... ;__; And yes, they need to talk soooon. Thank you!!
Date: 08/19/10 01:32 am Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Not sure what Tom is doing, but I think it my be working. I'm so glad I have more to read!
Author's Response: Whatever he's doing, I hope it works, too. XD
Date: 08/18/10 12:07 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
aweeeeeeee!
tomii!!
*sobs*
bill!! this is your fault!!!!
Author's Response: It is!!! *sniffle* Thanks for reading:)
Date: 08/18/10 07:41 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
-rubs face into a pillow-
Author's Response: D'awww :3 *hugs*
Date: 08/18/10 06:00 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
bill u bitch go bed him already!!! xD u got the poor thing crying!!!!
Author's Response: hahaaa, that fool XD thanks for readinggggg still :D
Date: 08/18/10 01:33 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
*sniffle* aww poor Tomi! i love this story btw!
Author's Response: yeah... oh, thank you. :3 I'm so happy you do!
Date: 08/18/10 01:29 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
Poor Tomi! That was a heart-wrenching scene!
More soon!
XD
Author's Response: Ahh, yeah. ;_; I'll try to post more soon! Thanks for reading as always! :D
Date: 08/18/10 12:24 am Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
;-; Oh my god. Tom... ;-;
See Bill!! You see what you're doing! :[
It was so hard reading about Tom being like that. He just wants his twin to be with him.
This chapter broke my heart, Bill needs to see reason. ;-;
Update soon please!
Author's Response: He does, that fool! Hopefully that'll be enough to slap some sense into him... Thanks for reading as usual! I'll try to update soon. :)
Date: 08/17/10 11:33 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
That was so sad... the twins dreaming about losing each other always is the saddest thing for me to read :(
I really can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully Bill will realize that his plan is not a good idea at all..
Author's Response: I know, I was always have trouble reading/writing about that, too. :( Hopefully he will! Thanks again
Date: 08/17/10 11:26 pm Title: Day Seventeen: April 20th, 2010
Awww poor Bill was so worried when Tom just left without saying... It's cool to read about that, cause even if he's trying to stop one side of their relationship, he's still Tom's twin... of course he's gonna be scare if he doesn't know where he is! Good job with that ! :)
Author's Response: Yeahhh, thank you! :D
Date: 08/17/10 09:05 pm Title: Day Eighteen: April 21st, 2010
Onhh poor Tom
*heart*
Author's Response: ;__; Poor boy... thanks for reading :)