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Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 07:16 pm Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

Hi!

Oh! So now, Bill comes to think of the toll this 'thing' is having on his brother? Finally!

Difficult indeed. I just hope Tom is going to put a good fight up against Bill's ideas.

Thank you for upgrading, I saw the news on twitter today!!

Bye

Author's Response: Hey again! Tom's a fighter, at least in my mind, so I wouldn't be too worried about him going down without a good fight. ;) Thank youuu for reading again. Toodles

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 02:47 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

Quitting cold turkey is hardest! Man! Who could resist?

Author's Response: Resist Tom? Certainly no one I know. :3 Thanksss

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 02:40 pm Title: Day One: April 4th, 2010

Honestly, this is bizarre! I've never read a story where Bill fights their bond like this. On the one hand, I want Bill to succeed, on the other I know the twins will never have anyone else like each other. :S Bill's gonna have a rough time it he doesn't tell Tom about this.

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, it's a little different. They're always fighting to be together, now.. Bill's fighting for the opposite. And I know. I'm having trouble deciding which side to be on, too. Thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 01:19 am Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

Well maybe if Bill TALKED to Tom about it maybe? It might be easier on them both...

More soon!

Author's Response: Maybe. And it would probably would be easier. But... *shrug* we'll see. :p Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 05:06 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

Ups, Tom's growing aversion for Bill's journal could not result in anything good. If Bill has written down he wants to end his incestuos relation with his brother and Tom gets his hands on the diary, couldn't he misunderstood the words and feel hurt and betrayed?

A little stepback in Bill's plan, but, who's to blame him having that hottie as a brother?

Great chapter, I'll be waiting for the next!!

Kisses!

Author's Response: If Tom finds the journal, I'd say he'll definitely feel hurt and betrayed, wouldn't you feel that way if you were him? Seems hurt and betrayal are inevitable in this plot... so... the characters will have to learn to deal? And hahahah! True! :D Thanks for reading and reviewing again!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 04:56 pm Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

Hi, somehow you updated twice and I just missed it... won't happen again.

Bill complains that his brother is everywhere... well, that's nothing new. We all have seen they're always together, so it doesn't take a genious to know Tom's everywhere, at least at every place his twin is.

As we had predicted, yes, 21 days is enough to get read of any addiction only when the so called addiction wouldn't have a mind on their own.

I am sure Tom will eventually get tired of being rejected once and again.

I'm going to read the next chapter.

hugs!

Author's Response: Eh, that's okay that you missed them. No sweat. Yes, we know Tom's everywhere, but by trying to avoid him... Bill's noticing just how true that is, that they're ALWAYS together. It'd be stressful, to say the least, I think. Anywho, yeah. I'd expect Tom to get tired of the rejection pretttyyyyyy soon. ;) *hugs* Thanks for readingggg

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 11:41 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

LOL, I almost feel sorry for Bill, his plan is so not working and I'm so happy about that! *bounces*  

I loved that you allowed us to see what's going on in Tom's mind, his confusion over Bill's behavior. I also loved the kiss, very hot! I'll be looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Oh, it's backfiring and it's only day three. *shakes head in pity* Poor guy... Anywho, thanks! I'm happy you liked it

Reviewer: dreadlockrasta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 04:38 pm Title: Prologue: April 3rd, 2010

aw, izzap! i love you for this! this story is great, i can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: hehe, thanks. glad you're liking it :)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 08:37 am Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

looooool little bill is going dooowwnnnn.... lol

Author's Response: ohhh yes, he is. pretty quickly, too. he better get his act together. annnnd thanks for reading again

Reviewer: mariawh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 02:48 am Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

Hahaha, not easy to break a habit like THAT, I guess. Aw, poor Tom.

Love this, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: No, definitely not easy. :) Yay, I'm glad you do! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:59 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

oMFG no bill u love tom and he loves u no more trying 2 say no :( gosh just make love damn it :)

Author's Response: That would bring an early end to the story, now wouldn't it? ;) Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 10:28 pm Title: Day Three: April 6th, 2010

That was...intense! Tom didn't know what hit him! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: :D Happy you liked iiiitttt, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Mimaia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/10 04:46 pm Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

Oh, give it up Bill. There is NO way he is going to be able to resist Tom for 19 more days. ;)

Author's Response: I know, right? But, I guess we'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for reading

Reviewer: CALI81894 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 10:56 am Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

Bill can't last!! haha i mean come on its TOM!! :D but i do think he should tell Tom that they need to end their....relationship or whatever! :)

Author's Response: Yes, yes, that would be a wise thing to do... ;) Thanks for reading again!

Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 02:47 am Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

:[ oh Bill.. i guess he is determined to change :[ Hopefully whatever he picks in the end he'll be happy. (pick being with Tom!!) Well now i am curious to how Tom will react when he finds out about this (if he ever finds out) D: Thank you for the super fast update!! :DD I can't wait for the next chapter~! :D

Author's Response: He's determined to try, at least. ;) (And I'm right there with you--pick Tom! hehe) Eh, don't expect Tom to sit by idly while their relationship crumbles. He's a smart guy--at least, I like to think so anyway! Yeah, fast update. Sadly, the others won't be this fast, but thank you!! :D

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 10:57 pm Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

Silly Billy, he's fighting a lost battle, but he gets points for trying. Tom is already curious over his brother's strange behavior and I don't think he'll remain idle if he gets an inkling of what is going with him. I'm enjoying this very much! I'll be looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Silly Billy indeed, hehe. Well let's hope Tom gets an inkling and acts on it, yeah? I'm so happy you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 10:15 pm Title: Day Two: April 5th, 2010

Still loving it. The last part was great.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you are. :)

Reviewer: Gloria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 04:19 pm Title: Day One: April 4th, 2010

Interesting! Update soon:)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so! :) Update coming verrrrry soon.

Reviewer: CALI81894 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 11:01 am Title: Day One: April 4th, 2010

omg i think i am going to LOVE THIS! :D

Author's Response: :D Yay, I hope you will!! Thanks for reading, btw!

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 08:21 am Title: Day One: April 4th, 2010

Is it wrong that I actually want Bill to make it? ._. That I want him to actually succeed in getting over Tom?

D:

I love this btw :D

Author's Response: :O You're the first one wishing for him to succeed!! I'm not even sure which boat I'm in, and I'm the friggin' author. :x But no, it's totally not wrong. Besides, Bill needs himself a cheering section. :D Heh, thanks, btw.

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