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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 07:37 pm Title: Day Seven: April 10th, 2010

*facepalms* God. It's like two steps forward and then ten steps back with these two. Oh, Bill. I wish I could offer some advice but I just...keeping Tom in the dark about this isn't making the situation any easier because you're BOTH miserable. ;____;

Author's Response: Two steps forward and then ten steps back is a great way to put it... :( I wouldn't expect Tom to stay in the darkness for 2 more weeks though. They are twins, after all ;) Thanks for reading

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 06:57 pm Title: Day Seven: April 10th, 2010

and i miss this story. pleaseeeeeeeee give us more ^^

Author's Response: i'm sorryyyy i was away practically all of last week. but! the next update is in the works! :D thanks for continuing to read

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 06:42 pm Title: Day Seven: April 10th, 2010

From the start, I've been cheering for Bill to succeed, but now I see they need each other. But to cave would just bring the guilt back, so Bill still resisting is for the better. It still hurts though. :( Poor twins...

Author's Response: I feel ya... I don't even know if I want Bill to succeed at this point. So difficult to choose. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 06:34 pm Title: Day Seven: April 10th, 2010

I don't think this is the kind of thing Tom is going to understand through hints, Billy. ;) I feel so bad for Tom because he still has no clue what's wrong with Bill or with their relationship and I don't think he would, unless Bill starts talking. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Very true... but would it be better if Tom knew/if Bill told him? I don't know, to be honest.. Thanks!

Reviewer: alysmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 02:01 am Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

this chapter so reminds me of this video i saw a while back...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ

Author's Response: mm i love me some rick astley. XD haha thanks

Reviewer: mariawh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/10 08:58 am Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

Aw, that's so sad! Poor Tomi *huggles him - cuz he nees it* I love this, more soon?:3

Author's Response: :3 Aw, I'm glad you love it. Thanks. and yup. just posted more.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/10 01:46 am Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

Ouch, it's getting worse. Tension is building. I might be wrong (hopefully I am) but the dam's probably gonna break soon and they'll jump each other. But then again, Tom respects Bill's wishes and wouldn't force anything. If anything does happen, it's because Bill gives in to guilt. Gah! Love this story!

Author's Response: Hehe, I sure hope you're right. I'm so happy you love it. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 06:43 pm Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

I feel worse for Tom with each passing chapter, mostly because he has no clue as to what he might have done to cause this change in Bill. I don't think Bill is winning either, poor deluded boy. Loving this!

Author's Response: I don't feel much winning for Bill either... ;) Thanks, I'm happy you're loving it!

Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 06:41 pm Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

Uh oh bill 0.0
I wonder how tom will react! :o

Author's Response: uh-oh indeeeeed ^^ thanks

Reviewer: dreadlockrasta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 05:37 pm Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

i've been waiting so patiently for this chapter :) so happy to see that you updated! i like the tension thats building up between the twins as well

Author's Response: :) thanks, glad you're still enjoying it

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 05:22 pm Title: Day Six: April 9th, 2010

u need to update really fast. this kicks ass!

Author's Response: planning on a much faster update this time! xD

Reviewer: dreadlockrasta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 10:31 pm Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

ive been waiting for this chapter! it was great, and i hope for the next one soon

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 12:30 am Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

Is Bill weakening? Coming to that conclusion.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 09:31 pm Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

Awwwww, my heart is breaking for Bill, he is so confused and stressed over this. Not to mention Tom is not helping by chatting up bimbos and then being exactly what Bill needs. Fantastic chapter! I'll be looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 07:51 pm Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

oh god, this story is so crazy.. im madly in love with it! x3

Reviewer: Riiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 05:51 pm Title: Day Five: April 8th, 2010

I love it! T_T

Reviewer: dreadlockrasta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 03:36 pm Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

:) going great so far, can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: glad you think so, thanksss :D

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 08:37 am Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

i just happen to LOVE this story. every chap is like candy to me x3

Author's Response: hehe, really? that's sweet. :3 thanks for, you know.. reading and reviewing again and again (i feel redundant saying this on every review..)

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 11:50 pm Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

Progress! Well, not much, but at least Bill realized that his actions (or inactions) don't affect only him but Tom as well. And in his brother's case it's much worse since he has no clue as to what's going on. Fantastic chapter!



Author's Response: Eh, progress is slow in this story, but remember each chapter is only a day apart. (How much progress can one even make overnight?) But yes, at least Bill realized that. Thank you!

Reviewer: Riiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 09:50 pm Title: Day Four: April 7th, 2010

OwO Poor Tomi...!
Yeah it's a ridiculous process. Come on Bill!

I really enjoy your fic :)

Author's Response: Quite ridiculous. And aw thank you, I'm happy you do :D

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