Date: 08/07/10 11:29 pm Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010
I really like this story...but if Bill succeeds and get's over Tom, I'm not going to lie, I'll be totally bummed. I'm a happy ending kind of person and twincest is my happy ending. :D
Author's Response: Hmm, well, I'll let you know that I'm a true sucker for happy endings. And twincest is also my usual happy ending. :x Haha, thank you. Happy you like it! :D
Date: 08/07/10 04:34 pm Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010
Maybe I should let him go.
*sniffles* God, this chapter was even more heartbreaking than the ones before. Tom's thoughts and actions made me cry. :(
Author's Response: ;_; thanks for reading, though
Date: 08/07/10 04:29 pm Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010
Oh if Bill only knew!
Loved this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 08/07/10 04:23 pm Title: Day Fifteen: April 18th, 2010
Aw, now this is turning sad ;_; Awww, it really DOES feel like a break-up.
Amazing, as usual
Author's Response: ;_; Hopefully it's not turning too sad, but it IS a drama. I write too many dramas, ugh. But thank youuu, love
Date: 08/06/10 01:02 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
So much for two weeks, huh Bill? XDD
But he did feel bad about it. :[
Hopefully he'll realize he can't get away from Tom!
Oh and I loved how Tom was following Bill around all day like a puppy. XD
So cute!
Update soon? :D
Author's Response: Hopefully! Yup, just updated. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/06/10 02:08 am Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
another great chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/05/10 07:36 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
-smirks- i knew he would break a bit sooner or later, thanks for that...
Author's Response: Hah, well, habits are hard to break... he had to slip up sometime. you're welcome. And thanks for reading. :)
Date: 08/05/10 04:30 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
"I’d rather not say anything"
still laughing
ha that is hilarious!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! :D
Date: 08/05/10 04:07 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
ooooooooooooooooh *_* Dude, that was hot. Damn it xD I feel like I'm Bill in this story. I want them to stop, but when they kiss it's so hot and I want more, but I know they can't and like DD: XD
This is good *_*
Author's Response: Haha, thanks youuu XD
Date: 08/05/10 03:16 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
you're a good twin
Author's Response: ^_____^
Date: 08/05/10 01:48 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
God I love this story so much
Author's Response: :3 good. I'm glad you do.
Date: 08/05/10 01:10 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
End of day fourteen assessment—I’d rather not say anything.
LOL, of course he wouldn't say anything after that kiss. Heehee. I felt sorry for him here, he was so proud that he'd gotten this far at the start with so little slips. The make-out session was delicious, though, so who can blame him from giving into it. ;) Fabulous chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, poor boy... but thank you! :)
Date: 08/05/10 12:52 pm Title: Day Fourteen: April 17th, 2010
Wow!
I'd be also speechless after a kiss like that, so maybe Tom's gonna have to give up some control to his twin in order to get his relation back? Maybe letting Bill's insticts to act on its own was the best to get away with this little victory.
I'd loved to know what's going through Bill's mind now. His slip was a not so small this time.
Great chapter!!
Hugs!!
Author's Response: Yeah, that definitely wasn't a small slip up this time around. :p Thank you! *hugs*
Date: 08/04/10 02:20 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
Hi
Well, Tom's plan went almost as he planned, teasing Bill has to pay him, eventually, something back.
Bill's scared? I'm right to assume that his fear is to his own weakness and not to his twin?
See you next chapter!!
Author's Response: Hello, hello! I think you're definitely right to assume his fear is to his own weakness and not actually to Tom. That's a good observation on your part. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/03/10 11:24 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
Tom is ruthless. But Bill was strong! Yay Bill.
Author's Response: Ahhh, rooting for Bill's success, are we? Hehe, thanks for reading :)
Date: 08/03/10 08:21 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
I liked Tom's observation that Bill looked like a younger, more innocent and scared version of himself. Tom is such a good big brother. Even if he doesn't agree or totally understand whats going on, he is still such a good brother to Bill. Thanks for the update, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Aw, I think he's a good brother, too. ^_^ Thank youu, I will!
Date: 08/03/10 07:17 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
denial is a bitch
Author's Response: i agree.
Date: 08/03/10 04:24 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
god bill!!
just admitt it!! you likey or lovers him!
i think tom should read the diary!
lovee itt!
Author's Response: read the journal again? eh, he might... we'll see ;) Yay, thanks, I'm happy you do!!
Date: 08/03/10 12:44 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
LOL, awwww. I hope they get back together >:)
Author's Response: Yaaaay someone rooting for Bill's failure! XD Hahaa, thanks for reading
Date: 08/03/10 12:14 pm Title: Day Thirteen: April 16th, 2010
Clearly there was arousal or he wouldn't have had that reaction at all!
Silly Bill, still in denial.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Haha, seems he's in the denial stage, hmm? Thanks, glad you loved it!! More coming today :D