Date: 03/12/13 02:26 pm Title: Leaving
I. Love. It. So. Much!!!! Please update soon, i can't wait for more!
Date: 06/09/10 01:53 pm Title: Leaving
i think this is dark and interesting and real. please continue.
Date: 05/16/10 02:34 pm Title: Leaving
I accidentaly deleted AndeinerSeitenureineWeile's review. I'm so sorry! I'll post it again, really I'm so absent-minded, sorry-sorry-sorry!
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Date: 05/14/10 03:07 am Title: Leaving
I'm so excited that Tom has brought Bill away from his father. Hopefully Bill stays with him and they can work out his problems together.
It's really cool, the way you describe Bill's turmoil (the fact that he's torn between running away from and clinging to his father). Amazing writing, that's all I can say. :)
Please post more soon! Kisses, Kristina XD
Author's Response: Well, who knows what fate my bring... *whistles*rnrnAw, your words mean so much to me, really! Thank you and I'll try to update ASAP. rnrnxxx
Date: 05/16/10 02:38 am Title: Leaving
Womg I just read this!
Ahhhhh...you write this story with such depth, how do you do it? D: I always love the beginning when you add a little life lesson thing, than "melts" that into the story...it's like what we learned in English class, synthesis writing which is the hardest, dayummm girl;)
anyway, I love how you wrote billa to be the weaker one and Tom like the superhero for him. This is such a good match...and it sounds kinda like twincesty too^^ that part about Tom standing there taking bill's kicks, that is heartwrenching yet so sweet of him ...
Ok I know I wrote a huge paragraph but it's everything I wanna say n_n
have fun writing !
Xx
Author's Response: Sweetie, you are being too kind towards me! And twincesty moment.. You'll get some more of them, haha. Don't know if you like it or not, but be prepared. :DrnrnAnd I love it when you write a huge paragraph! Thank you once again and I luffles you! rnrnxo
Date: 05/15/10 02:45 pm Title: Leaving
i love this please carry on :) x
Author's Response: Thank you! XO
Date: 05/15/10 12:42 am Title: Leaving
amazing.
I can't stop reading DX
I wish you could update a whole bunch so I can just keep reading, lol.
Author's Response: Aw, I wish I could do that, too. But sadly, school and everything else gets in the way :( Thanks, though!
Date: 05/10/10 08:44 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh our poor billa... ( sad face)
Date: 05/10/10 05:52 pm Title: Hurt
Oh gosh, I feel so terrible for Bill.
The way he pleaded for Tom to never hurt him & to never leave, practically broke my heart.
& Tom (:
Such a wonderful person, caring and just...ahh wonderful xD
Thank goodness Bill has SOMEONE watching over him, and trying to make things better.
Btw i noticed just one little typo [or what might be a type. so ill point it out to you, so you can fix it. Its no big deal though, really ^^]
On the line:
“My mother called me today,” he finally blurted out as he was looking around for the water, “to say that his brother’s wife gave birth to a baby girl.”
I thought maybe it should say:
"to say that her brother's wife"
Anyways, great chapter (:
I really like the development of this story, and i think ill like it even more now that Tom & Bill are interacting on a different level
[with sweet little kisses *-*]
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Yes, you're right, there is a typo, thanks for pointing it out! *goes to change it* rnrnAnd thank you for your kind words, you'll see a LOOOOT of Tom&Bill soon! ;:
Date: 05/10/10 01:46 pm Title: Hurt
I love Johnny Cash! I saw the film "Walk the Line" a few years ago and I've had a thing for that kind of old music since!
Excellent chapter! I really love how helpful Tom is to Bill. I hope that Bill can learn to trust him =)
And, I also just realized that I know you Lauraa!!! I didn't put two and two together to realize that this was your story!! LOL. Well, better late then never! Keep up the great work!
Kisses, Kristina. :D
Author's Response: Omg, yes, of course! :O Wow, I feel so excited knowing that YOU are reading this, whoa! Hopefully there'll be an update to your story soon. *puppy eyes*rnrnAnd thank you so much! xo
Date: 05/04/10 11:17 pm Title: The Accident
Omg...I just read this all...it is SOO good D: now this makes me sad and depressed and I feel like crying when imagining Bill in those situations and you wrote it out so real :O wow, his dad is a bastard and I dunno if you will continue this..becuz when toms comes in the story it's gonna sound so interesting... Please pretty please continue! I don't read alot if these fanfics, but lauraaa this is wonderful O_o
Author's Response: Your opinion means the most to me, bb! Love you! <3rn
Date: 04/21/10 04:09 pm Title: The Accident
So damn amazing.
This is seriously one of my favorite stories. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! DD:
Date: 04/19/10 11:36 pm Title: The Accident
OMFG more plzzzplzplzz
Date: 04/19/10 08:30 pm Title: The Accident
I have a bad habit of listening to songs that I think will fit stories. This chapter made me decide that "That Day" by our own beloved TH fits the job perfect. I almost cried.
Author's Response: I have the same kind of habit! And awhh. <3333
Date: 04/19/10 05:22 pm Title: The Accident
this makes me cry...imagining bill being pushed through a window...hurt and crying...it's too much
update soon please :)
Author's Response: Aw. <3 I'll try!
Date: 04/13/10 09:22 am Title: The Truth
Oh Tom was brilliant here, I really want to know if this changes Bill's mind of going home with his dad. Looking forward to more XD
Date: 04/11/10 10:30 pm Title: The Truth
I really like it :3
I don't care if you do but it's just as amazing as all the other chapters
Date: 04/11/10 02:36 pm Title: The Truth
Wahhh!!!! I cry for Bill. Such a good boy with a bad daddy. Tom will help him yeah? :)
Date: 04/11/10 01:07 pm Title: The Truth
W O W.
I'm glad I finally sat down to read these five chapters.
And the girl that did the banner, did a fabulous job. It's beautiful (:
I was happy to see that Tom came into the picture, and that he was 'arrogant' as Bill thought he was. I really like how he has a story & a reason for doing what he is doing. [I definitely think that little fact added a bit of 'oomph']
The first three chapters [well all of the chapters where Bill's inner thoughts are taking place, and the Jorg inside his mind is talking, oh and the flashbacks] are all so emotionally pulling. In a good way of course, it really kept my attention and focus (:
I couldn't stop the feeling of wanting to help Bill myself.
AMAZING job so far.
u p d a t e . s o o n ? (:
-----Samantha.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! Your words mean everything to me! Update shall be up really soon. :) <3
Date: 04/11/10 12:04 pm Title: The Truth
Tom cares about Bill. *_*
Date: 04/09/10 03:16 pm Title: The Meeting
I like it more in present. :)