Date: 02/11/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
hahaha
that was really good
I love the last line hehe
^^
Author's Response: thanks Em :) means the world to me
Date: 02/10/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
that was cute!! *0*
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 02/10/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
THAT WAS THE END?? WHY?? I mean it was great...really great...and so cute, I mean you managed to turn Tom into the cuttest thing ever...I wasn't explecting this chapter to be the final one...but it was perfect...and the ending...“The day our mom is the best cook in Germany, that’s the day I’ll stop loving you” --- poor Simone cooking isn't everyhing ^^...and Bill...god it's so funny that Tom is the naive one and Bill is the little devil....
I have mixed feelings on this...because I loved it...but now it's over...what I am going to do? Well, for starters re-read from the very first chapter...and then...well I still have Embrace and your other fics...I haven't read them all yet....and well I also have that little promise you made of doing a sequel of Summer Camp ^^...I'll look forward to all that...anyway I really, really enjoy your stuff...so whenever you feel like it...write...I promise I'll be waiting ^^
Kisses!!!
Author's Response: oh Hell you just earned yourself a place among my favourite writers cus that was just so extreamly nice of you to say !!! I'm so glad you liked this story and I hope you will like my others too and the sequel of Summer Camp is coming together quite nicely ;) I'm thinking of writing another long story too though and update on my "Playing Games series" so things might take some time, but I will definnitivly write more :)
Date: 02/10/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
*laughs* oh Luce that last sentence of Bill should be framed!! *laughs harder*
it was so very good that i'm sad that it's done...finito..no more...*bursts out crying* it's oovveerr...*cries*
you did so good *snifs*...it's a sad day...*snifs again*....*bottomlip trembles*
*cries* waaahhhhh.....
::dumps truck full of cookies on you:: xD
Author's Response: *climbs out from cookies and runs over to wipe your tears away and hug you really tight for being who you are*
Date: 02/10/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
“The day our mom is the best cook in Germany, that’s the day I’ll stop loving you”
lets just pray that Simone is not gonna suddenly learn it. xP that was what I like to call "um momento fodido" - a fucked up moment. xD yeah...bad words again.. ahah >=D
wait a minute...I just read your end notes... last chap??? oooohhh now I understand the meaning of the title! the boys just lost their "innocence". gaaaaaaaaaaahhh LOVE IT! =^_^= (jumps up and down and sings a random song)
you really can make things soooooo cute!!!! you just beated up my cute kitty bill! (my fic) ^_^'.....well....lets just say I got a bit of courage and posted my first fic. (sigh) ...and my beta doesnt help me a bit. she's always skipping her work times. xP
wtf am I saying?! see? I really talk too much! I was talking about ur story and now Im talking about my lazy beta! *punches herself* ow.. this is why people doesnt like me. lol I talk waaaaay to much.
think positive. you just got a looooooooooooooooooooong review.
xD
what can I say hun? brilliant ending. brilliant plot. brilliant writting. brilliant everything!
*gives you a medal* - for my favourite author. =)
Author's Response: bah *passes out and falls to floor* you make me squeel you're aware of that right??? like really fucking squeel and I get all of these warm feelings and I just can't stop grinning and then my mom will ask me what I'm smiling about and I cant tell her so I just say "segredo" and she looks at me like I'm gouing mental or something ;) haha I thing you're wearing off on me look how I'm talking...*runns off all happy to read your fic*
Date: 02/10/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 *Forever*
oh goddess! holy cuteness!
Author's Response: hihi thanks :)
Date: 02/10/08 11:33 am Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
arhh I'm lovin it ^_^
Author's Response: happy you are
Date: 02/06/08 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
That was really good!!! But you shouldn't contain the sex!!we are all little perverts we like it ^^...anyway the "in love" conversation was the best thing ever...so cute...tom...trying to be the cool guy...and bill reading him so well...I also loved the idea of bill waxing tom's dreads...so cute...and Simone always in the middle isn't she? XDDDDDDDDD
Anyway hope to read more soon!!
See you!!
Author's Response: bah you give me so great reviews :) and I can't stand writing without the sex anymore so there will be some in the next chapter ;)
Date: 02/06/08 09:55 am Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
haha~how cute they everything to each other...xDD
so please continue
Author's Response: thanks :) means a lot to me
Date: 02/06/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
aaww
it is so cute that they share everything and that they do everything to eachothet..I mean its not like one is oing all the work ;) I think this is a really sweet story :)
Author's Response: I'm really trying to make both of them work for it cus in my stories it's usually tom who gets all the action :) thanks for reviewing
Date: 02/05/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
i love this story. you are doing a great job.
Author's Response: thank you so much darling :)
Date: 02/05/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
awwwwwww sweetness!! ^_^ update soon!! just for me!! =DD
Author's Response: aw thanks
Date: 02/05/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
Damn, I made one of my most hated typos... There instead of their... lol.
Author's Response: o.O
Date: 02/05/08 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
Ahhh this makes more sense!! I read it as the next chapter for Embrace and thought it seemed out of place lol.
“Lately I’ve been feeling strange, you know the butterflies thing” Bill chuckled, Tom was definitively not the bad boy he wanted to be. “Bill…”
Loved this, they are so adorable, I love there experimentation, so innocent and gentle :D
Author's Response: guh I am so ashamed of the wrong posting thing but very happy you liked it when it came to the right story :)
Date: 02/05/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 *In love*
nawww that's ok luce don't worry...it just means i can review again!!
*laughs* i keep laughing at Simone, perhaps i should give her some cookinglessons?!
Tom and Bill are so cute when they confess like that...and Tomi has butterflies!! *smiles*
"Do it to me later?" really Tom do you even have to ask that? *laughs* i wouldn't mind *grins*
now...continue!!!...please? *pouts and gives cutesy eyes*
catch Luce!! ::throws lots of cookies::
Author's Response: *hides in shame, but manages to catch cookies* thank you so much for reviewing again I feel so stupid but your cookies make me feel a whole lot better !!!
Date: 02/02/08 08:06 am Title: Chapter 3 *Show me how*
*laughs* tom's hurry made sense after bill said that *laughs harder*
nawwww luce-poo *giggles* how could anyone hate you for writing this *points at fic* it's amazing!!
*jumps up and down on chair* i can't wait for the next one!! *huggles* and for the great chap you know what you're gonna get!!
::gives freshly made cookies::
Author's Response: *eats cookies with big grinn on face* thank you cookie :)
Date: 02/02/08 05:31 am Title: Chapter 3 *Show me how*
This update made me HAPPY =D
Author's Response: and your review made me happy :)
Date: 02/02/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 3 *Show me how*
hate you for writing a whole chapter with sex scenes? are you crazy? we are a bunch o perverted souls! xD and hell! the scene scene was soooo hot! and hell! it was well described! ^^
amazing as ever ^^
Author's Response: oh sweety thank you (and perverted us ??? *big bambi eyes* you can't be serious *can't manage to pull off the innocent face anymore*)
Date: 02/02/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 3 *Show me how*
How can I hate you when you put such a hot chapter...? Honestly I really liked it!! They are just so cute and perverted at the same time...it's wierd actually but you pull it off wonderfully!!
Keep it up!!
See you soon, I hope!!!
Author's Response: haha thank you so much that means a lot to me :)
Date: 02/01/08 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1 *Kiss*
XDDD Kusses means kisses in German ^^
Hope you can update soon!!
Author's Response: kusses for you then girl...hope you'll be back soon *teary eyed* I miss you