Date: 04/10/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 4
i found quite a few errors in this chapter. it looked like you were going fast, just to get it done. next time, if you like, i can look over your stuff before you put it up. i'm good with a red pen, so to speak.
Author's Response: that'll work. it's not password protected so have a day. anything you feel like adding or fixing, feel free. and as always, thanx for being brutally honest.
Date: 04/10/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4
LOL! Love that Tom just invited himself along on Bill's meet the family date.
Can't wait to see Bill and Tom with the kids! :]
Author's Response: i thought it was a great way for not only bill to be more comfortable but also a way to introduce tom into the family. i hope that you do enjoy the following chapters that involve the kids with the boys. thanx for the review!
Date: 04/06/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Love Love Love This Story!!!
Author's Response: i love that you love it!!
Date: 04/06/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Three kids?!!! Can't wait to see how Bill handles that.
Think he'll have an easier time with her having a twin with psychic twin powers. :]
Author's Response: yup, three. and so the craziness will start to ensue over the next couple of chapters. thanx for your review. i appreciate it.
Date: 04/06/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3
If I was crushing on someone that had kids like yours, I'd scream and run away. They'd end up injuring me, so I think that's a valid excuse.
Author's Response: just because they have put ypu in the hospital once or twice is no reason to run screaming...and you know you love them...you have no choice...i'd scream and run away too if i had the chance...
Date: 04/03/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
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NOt bad. i saw a few spelling issues, but they're easy enough to fix or whatever.
Author's Response: danke...just let me know what needs to be fixed. hell, you could look at the unfinished product anytime you want!
Date: 04/03/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great start! Looking forward to more. :]
Author's Response: thanks!! i will definately keep up with this. thanx for the review!!
Date: 04/03/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it!
Author's Response: thank you. really...i appreciate it sooooo much.
Date: 04/02/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I really loved his story before and i'm so glad it's back.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: i'm glad to hear that. i was having a problem with no motivation but hopefully it'll be different this time. the chapters that i had posted i'm going back through and tweaking a little so i hope they'll be more enjoyable. thanx for your review, it means a lot to me
Date: 04/01/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! Looking forward to reading more. :]
Author's Response: i have more chapters ready and will post every few days. i just wanna make sure i don't lose interest like before...thank you for your review,n you have no idea how much it really means to me.