Date: 08/09/14 04:19 pm Title: Part 2
I hope there will be more :) Cause I really love this story
Date: 05/10/12 11:20 am Title: Part 2
In my opinion, it is alright. I am hoping to be wowed later on in the story.
Author's Response: Well i'm not that good at "wowing" people.rnso i hope it makes your standards
Date: 08/07/11 06:26 pm Title: Part 2
i was smiling the whole time!
Author's Response: Aww :))) well im glad u liked it
Author's Response: Aww :))) well im glad u liked it
Date: 12/19/10 12:05 am Title: Part 1
Wanna know the first thing that caught my attention? The fact that the first words were "Part 1 DECEMBER 30, 2009"
My Birthday! haha. I got so excited. But Anyway, Good Job! I like it
Author's Response: lol, that is sooo cool!!!!!rnglad you like
Date: 09/19/10 06:07 pm Title: Part 2
i dont get this, is Bill actually a chick in this story or something? its kind of confusing
Author's Response: no, i just made bill a pregnant man.rni've never written mpreg and i just wanted to try
Date: 08/01/10 02:13 pm Title: Part 2
Bill is preggers! -Throws glitter- Lol. I like this so far, very much :)
Author's Response: thank you.rni'll update soon
Date: 08/01/10 02:09 pm Title: Part 1
I really like this! Pregnant Bill? Oh yes, I say so^^
Author's Response: yes yes pregnant bill.rnits cute
Date: 07/07/10 12:15 pm Title: Part 2
teehee, i dont now why i thought of this
ready for my critism? (if i even spelled that right) . . . . . .constructive.
wow i have no idea, sorry
anyaways i like your story it's cute :)
Author's Response: I think its spelled Critisim.rnone more I.rnI'm happy you liked it.rnThanks for reading and taking time to review
Date: 07/07/10 12:55 am Title: Part 2
OMG!!! ITS CRAZY AND FUNNY BUT IT HAS IT SWEET MOMENTS I LIKE IT IM ADDING YOUR STORY PLEACE MAKE A 3CHAPTER I WANT TO KOW HOW IT ENDS
Author's Response: Aww!rnDon't worry there will be alot more chapters to come.rnrnThank you for reading and taking time to review
Date: 07/06/10 11:27 pm Title: Part 1
I love it!
Author's Response: I'm happy you did.rnThank you for reading and taking time to review!
Date: 04/16/10 03:58 am Title: Part 1
I loved it. Make your chapters longer.
Author's Response: haha.rnim going too.rnbut whenever i write a new story, the first chapter is always short.
Date: 04/01/10 12:12 am Title: Part 1
Right-click, click Properties, and then copy the link there.
Sorry if it's crap :(
Author's Response: It is soo not crap!rnThank you so much.