Reviews For Tart But Sweet
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Reviewer: knw Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 04:01 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

Fabulous, that's all I can say lol. This was just the sort of thing I envisaged with that prompt. So funny ♥

Author's Response: I'm just sorry I couldn't fit in a lot of little scenes of Tom tormenting him. ;) But Georg is so easygoing, and knows Tom so well, it's hard to TRULY rattle him! I'm really happy you enjoyed it, thank you!!

Reviewer: kishmet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 12:41 am Title: recipe for disaster...

I giggled at your summary, and the fic only got better from there. I think I'm most amused by the fact that Tom's dead set on protecting Bill from Georg, and yet Tom eats the better portion of Bill's dessert. That is fantastic and I could so see it happening in reality.

Also love the fact that Tom capitulates on the relationship subject once they convince him they're serious. It's so sweet and proves he's just got Bill's best interests at heart. ♥

Author's Response: *snicker* Not bad for a summary come up on the fly! ...It's such a Tom thing to do, you know? Those two things are totally separate, and besides, what is Bill's is Tom's, and...what is Tom's is Tom's. :D

That was the tipping point indeed. He was going to put up quite an awful fight, but then Georg went and found the one thing that made him know he was SERIOUS, darn it. And Tom does want Bill's happiness too. If it's gotta be someone (besides Tom, heh heh...) then at the end of the day, he knows he can trust Hagen with his Bill.

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 01:32 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

A pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 07:13 am Title: recipe for disaster...

Aw, I love Tom in this. The idea of him trying to be all gruff, when really he's just as much of a flaily little girl as Bill is so charming.

Author's Response: Tom is SO a flaily little girl, I just love it when he postures. It makes me wonder if there are any people that actually believe him. ;) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 01:17 am Title: recipe for disaster...

love it!!!!! hahaha Tom and the dessert!!! hahaha!!
love it!!

Author's Response: Definitely. ;D Thank you, glad you loved it!

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 01:17 am Title: recipe for disaster...

love it!!!!! hahaha Tom and the dessert!!! hahaha!!
love it!!

Author's Response: Tom has met his waterloo! And it's always cake. ;D

Reviewer: tracyjj Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 12:08 am Title: recipe for disaster...

lol...this was great!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 11:13 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

Can't believe I read that ! I'm usually reading twins only but well, once again, it's from you! But you write kissing scene so well I almost forgot it was Georg doing the kissing.. Really cute story !

Author's Response: Haha, I know! I'm such a hardcore twins fan, but sometimes, I have to branch out. Especially for special occasions! I'm glad you enjoyed it in spite of yourself, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 11:01 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

I LOVE this! My god, Tom was utterly hilarious. He and Georg are so close, so with that in mind, it was hilarious to imagine him going from great buddy one day to the overprotective father/brother who hates him the next. xD

You portrayed Bill adn Georg perfectly, and it was so cute; them sneaking kisses everytime Tom left, like two teenagers who've just escaped the watchful eye of their father. The rifles on the wall were pricelsss! And Tom... let's not even get into that, but he was hysterically funny.

I love this so much; primo job, as usual.

Author's Response: Hee! Aw, thank you! I swear, I built the whole concept around this image of Tom hanging a shotgun rack on his wall. :D Tom definitely switched from friend-mode to WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING WITH MY TWIN mode, heh heh. I'm glad you got that feeling from the story - they were definitely supposed to seem like a couple of teens escaping "dad's" watchful oversight! I had a lot of fun with Tom, too.

I'm so pleased you loved it, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 10:26 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

hahahahahahahaha Oh Georg, well played! Awesome job!

Author's Response: Georg knows how to finesse the Kaulitz boys. ;D Thank you so much!

Reviewer: umetnica Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 10:18 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

That was hilarious and sweet and perfect and I love the ending. I will "support" you any time. ;) And now I want a plum kuchen too.

Author's Response: Yay yay yay! I'm especially pleased with the perfect because I want to get the vibe between Georg and Bill just right. Annnnd I'm sure I will be revisiting this pairing. ;) I have a feeling. omg I want plum kuchen too. ._.

Reviewer: flylightt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 10:04 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

I giggled the entire way through this. It was so funny and sweet at the same time.

Author's Response: Excellent, that was very much my intention! I'm so happy you found it both funny and sweet.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 10:03 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

that was cute...disturbing...but cute...

Author's Response: I'm sorry it was disturbing, but definitely pleased it was cute!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 09:49 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

Haha! Lovely! You have to love a protective Tom, and Georg was definitely his laid back self. I'm so glad you wrote this! :D

Author's Response: I DO love protective Tom, I do! *beams* He's so...yeah. He makes me melt. Only Georg could have handled that as well as he did, I think. I'm proud of him. Thank you, I'm very very pleased you liked it! I'm still trying to get into Georg's POV properly...

Reviewer: Buyyouadrank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 09:24 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

god, this was so adorable *_* you might actually get me to start liking Biorg...

Author's Response: *_* I'm so happy! I was totally nervous about posting it, especially since I finished writing a few minutes before I posted...and I never do that anymore! (I'm still a twins girl but this was fun.)

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 09:24 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

I'm surprised Tom didn't crack the short jokes about Georg.  I guess he figured he'd have to deal with both Georg and Bill's mouths if he did.

 Very waffable! I commend you!



Author's Response: He's been doing that for so long, I think Georg shrugs it off and he knows it. Glad you enjoyed the waff! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 08:54 pm Title: recipe for disaster...

Ahhh, this was perfect!!! I think anyone, man or woman, would have to pass Tom's strict scrutiny before getting to Bill. :D

And this:

"I'm NOT gay!" Bill wailed. "Why does everyone keep SAYING it!?" made me lol so hard.

Author's Response: I totally agree, but Bill's so strong-willed, he'd try to bulldoze Tom and everyone would be miserable. It's gotta be someone Tom accepts, for them to have a long-term relationship, whether Bill would admit it to himself or not!

I had to throw that in because of our little discussion the other night. ;) Him being bi would be an easy out - then it wouldn't be a lie! ;_;

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