Date: 01/07/12 12:07 am Title: Chapter 3
this is a really good story!
i cant wait for the rest!
Date: 12/14/11 05:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Can't even describe how good this is! Please update soon. I need more of Bill and Tom :)
Date: 08/28/11 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 "Learned your lesson yet Tom?"
Yay I'm excited :D
Date: 08/21/11 05:42 am Title: Chapter 3
I absolutely love this. When will there be more?
Author's Response: um...I can probably post the next chapter in...maybe about...2 weeks. But for you guys, ill try and post it in a few days. =D
Date: 07/23/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 "Learned your lesson yet Tom?"
i need a cold shower(: that was amazing
Date: 06/06/11 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awesome! I like the ending of this chapter.
Date: 06/06/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
i just started this and i love it ! teacher x student things are always sexy :D
Date: 06/06/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
i just started this and i love it ! teacher x student things are always sexy :D
Date: 06/06/11 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my god. I need a cold shower NOW! That was so hot! I'm like dying.
Date: 04/27/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
oh wow this is a awesome story please continue it
i cant wait to read more
Date: 11/13/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
Oh my...
I'm not sure how to review this. XD I want to be sincere without offending you.
Your enthusiasm is fantastic and really comes across in the way you write. However, you need to tone it down a little and give your smut a bit more of a serious edge. I personally laughed the whole way through this, so if you were going for humor, you did it perfectly. But if you were going for sexy, you might want to revamp it a little. XD Don't use exclamation points unless in dialogue, use italics instead of capitals, avoid unprofessional slang like 'cock' unless in dialogue, again. Also, your dialogue itself is a little excessive, it doesn't seem like anything someone would realistically say. Tone everything down a little bit, otherwise it comes across as ridiculous and spoofy. And I don't THINK that's what you were going for. ^^;
Understand I'm not trying to offend, just trying to improve you abilities. Gawd knows we all have to start somewhere. XD But really, I think you should re-write this and take it a little more seriously, it's a bit silly as it is now. :) Good luck!
Date: 11/06/10 01:21 am Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
Wow. Just as hot as the first chapter, and yes, it should end with some more.
Date: 08/01/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
dayum O.o''
Date: 05/06/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
ok i had an idea... you don't need to do this... but... since you were thinking of editing... why not adding in the actual moment where Mister Kaulitz uncuffs Tom?? (like with dialog and stuffs xD) lol :P
Author's Response: we were actually planing to do that in the next chappy. I guess great minds think alike! :DrnOR maybe he doesnt uncuff Tom.....hm... lol *looks mischievous*
Date: 05/05/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
omg!! that was AWESOME!! :D would there be more?? xD
Author's Response: yes, there will be more! :D im working on the next chapter as we speak. And im also thinking of doing a special holiday chapter.
Date: 04/27/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
That was hot, i felt myself blushing
Tom begging to be fucked is probably the most sexiest things imaginable
and Bill in control, mmm
Date: 04/26/10 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
is there gonna be more? -looks hopeful-
Date: 04/26/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 "Learned your lesson yet Tom?"
god damn are you trying to kill me -fans self-
Date: 04/26/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2 Extra credit and report cards.
:D