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Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 08:18 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

THE CABBAGE PATCH OMGOMGOMG

I'm dying here xDDD Oh my god. The cabbage patch. That's fricking hilarious. And that he really thinks that's where they come from. I'm LMAO'ing here. I don't know where you guys come up with this stuff, unless one of you actually thought that when you were little. Haha, I'm dying here xD (Wait, I already said that...)

Dude, I so should have made Tom say something like that in the reality [incredible], because Bill was a total pervert in that, too xD

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 06:33 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

aww!! I'm sad it's over, but that was an awesome way to end it :)

Reviewer: BreatH_of_BlisS Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 06:16 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

The last sentence : AWWWW! The series was SO cute!

Reviewer: heartsdesire456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 03:15 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

haha, aww, poor Tom feeling like a trollop, haha.

Reviewer: boo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:40 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

That was cute! I just have one little thing; you seem to use "the raven haired" a lot, and that's just not grammatically correct - you're missing a noun. The, raven, and hair are all adjectives, but you don't have them actually describing anything.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:05 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

Loved the series-from start to finish! Cute, funny, hot & sexy-awesome job!
(I love dirty talking Bill)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 02:05 pm Title: "You eat that stuff?"

Loved the series-from start to finish! Cute, funny, hot & sexy-awesome job!
(I love dirty talking Bill)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 01:53 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Lmao-the cabbage patch!
Oh man, Bill is having too much fun with Tom...off to the next chapter to catch up!

Reviewer: BreatH_of_BlisS Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 03:05 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

I agree my favorite is the cabbage patch and the stairs. I instantly thought of Tom being in a little cabbage. Imagine the pricing on one Tom Kaulitz cabbage patch doll....
These stories are great, I use the phrase 'sticky out' and sticky in bits' now. It's funny thinking of Tom being so terrified of sex when in real life he puts on this facade that he's some kinda of sex god.

Reviewer: hazex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/10 11:25 am Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

GASP! you mean babies DONT come from cabbage patches?! ;) my whole world is a lie!!

;D

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/10 07:24 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Cabbage patch xD Tom's 17, right? xD
Tom sleeping on the stairs is so cute! aww!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/10 01:01 am Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Hehehhee I LOVE tom in this... god your characters are so freaking cute, this is one of the best series I've read ever and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 08:54 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

hhahahaha awwwww TOM!!!! so sweet!!!! XD
love him!! and bill is so incredible sexy and at the same time cute!!! XD ^^
please continue!! haha!! cabbage patch, he is sure of it!! XD hahahaha!! I canīt stop laughing!! XD

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 12:51 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Awwwww OMK HAHAHAHAAAA!!! Tom thinking that babies come from cabbage patches is sooooo adorable!!!!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 04:03 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Oh my god- that was brilliantly funny! Bill and Simone playing poker was good- and Gordon carrying Bill...the Talk- Lmao! MORE! Its so sad this is the last story! You should totally do one where Tom is mini- maybe hurt and Bill helps him get healthy again.

Reviewer: LadyAya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 08:55 am Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

That was so adorable!! I love this series. I can't wait for the next part! Update soon Please! XD

Reviewer: hughes012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 11:17 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Cabbage patch made me laugh out loud. The whole, "You stuff your fingers up the ass" part was also nice. haha :)

I'm soooo glad I embarked on the journey of this story. Can't wait for the next part.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 10:53 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

Oh my god this was hysterical! I effing loved I literally screamed and fell out of my chair when I saw this posted XD. But fav part has to be the talk and the cabbage patch,

Reviewer: CRAZYhead36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 09:26 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

omg i was drinking milk when i was reading this and i saw the cabbage part and it came out my nose!! ah so funny and cute! post soon please!!

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/10 06:55 pm Title: Gordon and I just put it off because Tom was turning out to be asexual, so there was no point.

i just love it all x3

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