I loved your summary. It dragged to read this, definitely. And it was cute, so sweet and kind of light-hearted. I liked the way you melted so many familiar phenomenon, topics and known facts of the twins here; made it as realistic as possible. Also your titles (both story and chapter) were great.

I think you're doing a great job with your english. Of course, since it's not my first either, I can't help you much with it, but I saw only couple tiny mistakes there and they didn't bother me. I know how difficult it is to have a beta, so I hope you'll get one soon!

Btw, I have to aski... You mentioned a Finnish news paper and you said English is not your first. You don't happen to be Finnish yourself, because I am and that's why I'm so curious :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I happen to be Finnish :--DD Thank you for the comment! I aprecciate and like it very much ^__^ kiitos paljon, toivottavasti luet jatkossakin ;3