Date: 04/20/14 05:33 pm Title: DRUGS
This was such a good story. I honestly don't know how I've never read it before. I would love to see a sequel or something from it because this is such a fantastic start to something truly amazing. Anyway, I wanted to leave a review because I was really touched by this. And you're a great writer. Don't let anyone tell you differently!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! While I never wrote an official sequel, there is a companion piece to my fic that I think is absolutely brilliant. It's found here http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=18118 ; I simply love the way it was written, so if you liked my Drugs I am sure A Dream Deferred will suit your tastes. rnI no longer let others tell me what I can and can not write, even my twin has no say in my writings. So thank you for the encouragement. If I manage to get back into the swing of TH and out of the Avengers/MCU love affair I am currently having I might post more here.
Date: 04/05/10 09:07 pm Title: DRUGS
Awe good thing he has Tom. -sigh- so sad the things he does for drugs. Great one shot. I'm surprised at the lack of reviews
Author's Response: O.O!!! A REVIEWER!!! *does a happy dance and then offers cookies and tea* Well I'm honestly not surprised at the lack of reviews I have gotten for this fic, I'm not the best writer on here. But thank you for the review darling ^_^ It is loved.
Date: 03/30/10 10:53 am Title: DRUGS
I will begin with the negative criticism, my dear, so that you will ponder it. The piece feels slightly cramped as if a promising story has been curtailed into too small a word count. I think you might be able to develop it further if only by a couple of paragraphs here and there. Perhaps add something as to how Bill became an addict? Maybe explain a little more concerning those many things he must do to get his drugs? Or (as the beginning feels more from Tom's point of view than Bill's) show us more of what the elder twin sees?
Nevertheless, this is a powerful portrait and the interaction between Tom and Bill is beautifully handled. Raw and real would be two words best suited to describing it. Bravo.
Author's Response: *licks* I'm surprised you played nice oh lovely twin of mine, but you are right that I did make it cramped. Reason being is that I simply didn't want to give a full length drama that I'd never finish. You and I both know that unless I write with you, I shall never get anything thing written or posted. *kisses* So it was simply a glimps of present with Tom chiding Bill and then past to show how Bill is when he needs that itch scratched.