Date: 05/23/10 10:08 am Title: Chapter 9 - Black Blood
Me encantó el capi... q pasará en el sgte? me muero de ganas por leerlo!
Saluditos. :)
Author's Response: Thanks much :D Glad you still like it, even though it's getting a little crazy, lol. Anyway, not much left now, so everything will be explained soon, but thanks for the continued interest!!
Date: 05/22/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Black Blood
O_O''' i was hoping she wouldve died! :O or maybe tom will join in the killing fun >:D >.> ive been reading to many of these storys....
Author's Response: Lol, maybe ;D You'll have to wait and see, lol. Not much left now, everything will become clear in the final part...*sinister music* Thanks much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05/18/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Twenty-Seven
:D i love it :DDD >.< bushido is gunna diee!!! *happy dance* >_> not that i hate him or anything *cough* ...
Author's Response: Lol, I love your comment XD I can't bring myself to feel sorry for Bushido, not at all :D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 05/18/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 8 - Twenty-Seven
oh my God i was soooo waiting for this moment. well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it XD
Date: 05/12/10 10:06 am Title: Chapter 7 - Korths and Fighting Talk
Oh, Bill. Maybe I shouldn't be saying that over a serial killer, but I don't care. I want...tuck him in and sing him a lullaby. Ahem. Love this chapter, but then, that's not unusual. ^_^ Keep being awesome! :)
Author's Response: Haha, I feel the same way :D Obviously not for every serial killer, but Bill is an adorable serial killer...LOL. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 05/12/10 10:02 am Title: Chapter 6 - Enrapturing Momentum
Um...lots of revelations, and my brain is not functioning adequately enough to process them. Love this, that's really all that's running through my mind.
Author's Response: XD No problems, I'm just glad you're still reading. Thank you!!!
Date: 05/12/10 09:57 am Title: Chapter 5 - Rigor Mortis
Love this, like a lot. I love how Tom is repulsed by corpses. Too often in detective stories the cops are just so used to it, and the fact that Tom isn't is refreshing. On to the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad you like that about Tom :D I haven't read that many detective stories, I have read Price of Protection though, which I really enjoyed, are there any others on here that you recommend? Anyway, thanks so much!! *on to next review, lol*
Date: 05/12/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
omg I didn't noticed you'd updated! *feels so bad* (Then again, now I can binge. ^_^) I'm going to hate Bushido, I can just tell. And Bill! He must be a good actor. Also, you and your cliffhangers.
Author's Response: Aha, no worries. Sorry about the cliffhangers...I know it's terrible XD Thank you so much!!!
Date: 05/11/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Korths and Fighting Talk
i think its bushido >:D or gustav oh oh wait wait um um jost??? wait no! georg!!!! wait!!!!! i andreas OwO is he even in this D: wait i got it! its um um um me? OwO or um gosh i have no ideo XD but i wanna i know but it might be there mummy simone? wait no um im pretty sure its bushido >:) thts mah final guess >:D buuwwwahhahahahahaha
i love you >.
Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much :) Well, I won't give anything away...but one of the names you mentioned is right XD Yeah, Andreas is in this, but only over the phone and only briefly in the next chapter, so I guess it's just an Andreas cameo. I only found out recently who he is (I know, that's terrible. I'm sorry!) but I started writing him into my stories that I plan on posting later. Anyway, thank you!!!!
Date: 05/11/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 7 - Korths and Fighting Talk
Nikko Shiro! girl this is brilliance. U know ima b here til you're done. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D Glad you're still enjoying it, so I hope the ending will be satisfactory XD Thank you!!!
Date: 05/03/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Enrapturing Momentum
wow esa estuvo cerca.... me muero por leer el sgte capi, cada vez se pone mejor
actualiza pronto!! :D
Author's Response: XD Thank you, I promise I'll update soon. Thanks for continuing to read!!!
Date: 05/03/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Enrapturing Momentum
:D i love this evil chapp XD its awsome .
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D I know I keep saying this, but I'm so glad you keep reading, THANK YOU!!!
Date: 05/02/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rigor Mortis
anouther awesome and suspensfull chapter!!!! i cant wait to read the next! :D i love this story X3 lol
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Hopefully the next chapter will be up tomorrow, thank you for continuing to read!!!
Date: 05/01/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5 - Rigor Mortis
me encantó el capi. y sigue actualizando! cada vez se pone más interesante y ahora como Tom va a relacionar su fecha de cumple con la del asesinato... woooo le sigue la pista a su propio hermano! q emoción!
saludos!
Author's Response: Thank you :D Yep, something pretty interesting happens next chapter with Tom and Bill...XD I hope it'll be as good!! Thank you so much!
Date: 04/29/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
Woooohoooooo! I was sooooooo right!!!! Ooohhhh a battle of wits between brothers. Deviously delicious, Nik. Keep going babe, I'm cheering you on all the way to the end!!!!!!!! *does a little happy dance.
Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!! I hope the end will be good enough :D
Date: 04/29/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
wow ...leer a bill de asesino a sangre fría y tan condenadamente angelical y sexy a la vez... me tiene pegada a tu historia!
me gustó el capi en espera del prox... si algo definitivamente mayor pasará lo espero con ansias!
saluditos
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D I didn't know whether Bill was believable as a murderer, so I'm happy that you like my story :D
Date: 04/28/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
i loved this chapeter!! >.< and i also love how you make bill so majorly sweet! but then so sickingly and beautifully evil >:) i cant wait till i read the next chapter >.< so pwease hurreh????!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I was going to update tomorrow, but everyone's been so enthusiastic and nice, so I could update today...? Lol, anyway, thank you for the review, and I hope Bill is a believable character! THANKS!!!
Date: 04/28/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
Nikki. :)
Forgive me if I can't pull out a decent comment at the moment, but I'm very tired, and my mood is completely rotten due to those two hours I've spend doing Maths (or better yet, trying to).
But! Bushido?! Like, really?!
As for your Slash: do post it. Seriously, I'm waiting impatiently to see what you've come up with. Tell me when you do, 'kay? :)
When I get the time, I promise I'm going to go and check FDLUDE. :)
Now I really have to go because I totally need to sleep.
Don't worry for the chapter, it was great as usual even if, um, 'nothing happens', like you said (I'm quoting you; I'd disagree, but I haven't enough energy to do it, lol).
Good night! (L)
Author's Response: No worries, I only saw your review this morning, so I hope you're feeling a little better today :)
Yeah, the reason why I chose Bushido was because when I started writing this story, I was looking at the list of available characters and I had no idea who any of them were, except Bushido. So, that character could have been anyone really. Sorry, lol :D
I will post it eventually, lol, it's got some really, really long chapters (like, fourteen pages long...) so, do you know if there is a word limit? But I'll definitely post it, I just finished the second chapter (fifteen pages...), so I'll probably write the third one and then post it. I need to ask though, do you like cinema bizarre? If you don't, would it bother you if a few members of cinema bizarre were in the story? Just curious ;)
Anyway, like I said, hope you're feeling better today :D Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/27/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Opposing Justice
:O write more and soon? please? its so amazing!!!
Author's Response: Will do, promise :D Thank you so much, I'll be updating tomorrow, thank so much!!
Date: 04/27/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Opposing Justice
Hey! *waves* Um, yeah, it's very awkward, but it's me again. Let's say Rebecca, aka Melancholia got me back into English and fanfics, despite the fact I needed to take 'my Break'. But oh, who cares, no? Besides, I don't feel right if I don't review every single chapter you post, so here I am. :)
No particular thought, my dear; you know I'm mesmerised by your writing style, and you do know I'm always intrigued by every story you come up with. Hell, you managed to keep me hooked with a Het! Now it's a Gen. :) Like I've already said, that's enough of a proof you're an incredible writer, isn't it? :) Keep it going, please! :)
Speeeeeeaking of Het and Gen... *looks casual* You mentioned a Slash story you're writing, didn't you? :)
Much love,
Author's Response: Hey!! Nice to see you in the FF world XD Aww, it's so nice of you to keep reviewing even though you were taking a break *cyber hugs* I just finished the ending for this story, it's pretty strange...I hope people don't get confused. I guess I'll find out when I post it, lol.
Your comments always mean so much to me, thank you so very very much :D Oh yeah, I have been writing one that's just a slash, and one that's a combination of slash and het (though the way this combo one is going at the moment, it may as well just be a full on slash, lol), which I'll post when I've finished uploading either this or FDLUDE :D Otherwise I'll have so many fics on the go that I'll get confused and end up uploading a chapter of Cat and Mouse to FDLUDE...which would be a little weird :O
Anyway, thank you so much, it means a lot to me!! Now I have to go before I fall asleep at my pc, LOL, it's midnight!! Bye! (THANKS!!)