Date: 08/10/12 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
Wow I had never guessed that bill wasn't real at all I was like its soooo bill wtff its tommmm o.o then I love how he keepsseeing bill and they continue together yaaaaay wait I shouldntb yaying for murderer o.o wools XDD
Date: 08/10/12 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
Wow I had never guessed that bill wasn't real at all I was like its soooo bill wtff its tommmm o.o then I love how he keepsseeing bill and they continue together yaaaaay wait I shouldntb yaying for murderer o.o wools XDD
Date: 11/28/11 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
Wow, was not expecting that! Great story, i love the last paragraph, very deep and makes you think. Keep writing! xx
Date: 06/01/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
otro wow jamŕs imaginč que el mismo Tom era el asesino...y q era čl quien estaba recontra mal de la cabeza ...jajaja.. me encantň el final... estuvo muy bueno.... y ahora por supuesto quiero leer el final alterno.... :D
saluditos!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and that it kept you guessing (I think, lol) until the end. I wasn't sure whether anyone would like the end, but it seems you do, so thank you very much!! Alternative ending should be up tonight, I just have to finish proof-reading it. Thank you!!
Date: 06/01/10 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Loose Lips
well idk about bushido, but i'm saying in the story he deserved it. ^_^ sry if i confused you.
Author's Response: Ahaha, no worries, I just wondered if there was anyone on the site who didn't hate him xD I don't personally, but I agree that in the story he does deserve it. So cruel to poor Tomi, and all Tomi wanted to do was kill a few people XD Anyway, thanks much!!
Date: 06/01/10 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
i love this ending. that was an even greater twist right there. u think it's bill then all of a sudden WHAM!!! Bill doesn't exist and Tom is the Berlin Slasher. dun dun duuuuuuuuun. love it!!!!
Author's Response: Oh God, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much, I was so worried about the ending, I wasn't sure whether anyone would like it. Aw, but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 06/01/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Answer
the plot thickens..
Author's Response: It's pretty weird for the plot to thicken so close to the end, right? Am I that odd? Anyway, hope you liked, thanks for sitting and reading through XDrn
Date: 06/01/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Black Blood
O.o
Author's Response: Erm...I'm not sure what to make of this. Lol, hope you liked it xD
Date: 06/01/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Twenty-Seven
one up means something about jorg doesn't it? and darn i was sure it was gonna be andreas next. *headdesk* well at least Bushido deserves it. ^_^
Author's Response: Everyone seems to really hate Bushido xD Is he that bad in real life? Lol, that probably sounds really stupid of me, but when I first joined the THFF, I had no idea who any of the other people were, so I only researched Bushido (because everyone hates him, lol), which is why he's in this story. Thanks!!
Date: 06/01/10 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Korths and Fighting Talk
so they don't know that he killed Jorg? is he like a secret then?
Author's Response: Hmm, I'm not sure if my continuity is a little off. I think it's mentioned in a later chapter, but trust me, once you get to the end, everything becomes clear xD Thanks!
Date: 06/01/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Enrapturing Momentum
poor billa!!!!!!!! *goes back in time and kills Jorg before he hurt bill* problem solved
Author's Response: Lol, if only :D It seems like every story I read Jorg is evil, so...he just ended up being evil in my story too xD Thanks!!
Date: 06/01/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rigor Mortis
soooo something about it happening on his birthday......so why does billa kill them?! did something bad happen to him? *wimpers*
Author's Response: You'll find out soon XD Poor Bill. And I'm sorry if my strangely sick and sadistic mind has twisted Bill out of all proportion. I'm a horribly cynical person, and it tends to make my writing really...well, like this xD Anyway, hope you're enjoying it despite the murder and death and stuff...Thanks for reading!!
Date: 06/01/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Freedom In Death
dun dun duuuuuuuun! and the police are in the fucking hotel too! he is crazy! and what are these meds he is taking????
Author's Response: He is crazy xD And I have no idea what meds he's on if he's running about under the nose of the cops. Though, having said that, the cops are a little clueless, lol. Thanks much :D
Date: 06/01/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Opposing Justice
gosh tom is utterly clueless
Author's Response: Ahah, lol, very true. I know I've said this twice already, but I hope you like the story :D
Date: 06/01/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Mice Don't Like Cheese
so now we know why bill is killing them?
Author's Response: Hmm, by chapter two, not sure. I need to reread xD I hope you're enjoying!
Date: 06/01/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Loose Lips
so tom is The Slasher's twin brother? well that is new. o.o
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess so xD Thanks much for reading!
Date: 06/01/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Divine Justice [Intended Ending]
dang! Even though i'd guessed it, i was still engrossed and excited by it. wow. Nik, you can write.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! That really means so much to me, you have no idea how happy that compliment makes me xD I'm literally beaming...lol, anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I think it's really cool how you guessed XD Well, thank you so much!!
Date: 05/29/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 10 - The Answer
Sííííííí!!!!!!!!! wow me super encantó el capi...q emocionante!!! :D y claro q por supuesto q sí tienes q escribir ambos finales.. y estoy 100% segura q ambos me encantarán y serán bravazos como toda la historia....
Saluditos... =)
Author's Response: XD Thanks very much! Okay, so I will definitely post both chapters, thank you for the interest! I hope you do like both of them, that would be cool :D Thank you!!!
Date: 05/28/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Answer
does Tom have split personalties? & Bill is actually dead from suicide cause what jorg always did to him & tim never accepted the bill died? wow. but I would Love to read the alter ending.
Author's Response: Lol, nice guess :D I can't confirm or deny, but you'll find out soon anyway. I'll definitely post the alternate ending, so you can maybe see which one you prefer (if any, lol), kind of like a choose your own ending, I guess...although I will probably mark them as "Intended Ending" and "Alternate Ending". Does that make any sense at all? Anyway, thanks much for the interest XD
Date: 05/28/10 11:08 am Title: Chapter 10 - The Answer
All right, anyone notice something a little...odd about Tom's behaviour? Any ideas what will happen in the last chapter?
Tom and Bill are one person, Tom was the one who was abused by Jorg and Bill was his alter ego to help him cope with it. Tomi's schizo!!!!!!!There is no Bill.
Um.... ok, i've been drinking something called Monster that's similar to Red Bull. Sooooo.......
Author's Response: Lol, no worries. I can't say a heck of a lot, since it would give it away to anyone who tends to read reviews, but that was a very nice guess XD Hope you enjoyed the story, anyway, thanks!