Date: 05/25/25 09:07 am Title: 1.
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 11/14/14 03:38 pm Title: 1.
Your first FF? Damn, you are brilliant! This is so a favorite! :D
Date: 09/12/13 02:15 am Title: 1.
So damn good. So damn Perfect!
Date: 03/18/12 12:13 am Title: 1.
For a first fic, that was really good ^-^ Hell, that was good even for a hundredth fic XD Well done, Aya-san. Very well done.
Date: 12/16/10 02:21 pm Title: 1.
This was really good. I absolutely loved it. Poor Bill, three times in succession and so quickly too. The boy sure does love his brother. Danke.
Author's Response: Well, in this case too much of a good thing isn't all that bad. :) thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 07/13/10 11:30 pm Title: 1.
what do you mean it sucks, i just hope my smut scene doesn't come out horrid!i hope its half as good as this. . .
Author's Response: GOD emmy, compared to my new stuff...this was...well let's not say. Thanks for reviewing me! and yours will be amazing. We'll make SURE of it! ;p
Date: 06/15/10 02:52 pm Title: 1.
Very hot and sexy! Lovely smutty story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!! XD
Date: 06/13/10 03:00 pm Title: 1.
This was amazing. I love the way you write and the words you use.
Great job, Aya! :D
Author's Response: AWWWW thanks so much!!! I'm totally glad you liked it and I hope you'll read the others and see how it is from a TWC perspective?
Date: 04/04/10 03:03 pm Title: 1.
Wow!
That's HOT !
I really liked this story, I hope you'll make this into a series, I'd love to read more.
Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I've already started coming up with ideas for a series...I just have to write them. XD Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/04/10 01:05 pm Title: 1.
I think it's really, really good. And dirty.
Author's Response: I had aimed it would be sufficiently dirty. Being good...well that's a perk! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 03/29/10 06:56 pm Title: 1.
that. was. awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it. :D
Date: 03/29/10 11:21 am Title: 1.
Is this your first fan fiction? You're a good writer. Sometimes with fan fiction, content is good, but the writing skills are a little lacking (nothing on this site of course :P), but you can actually write, without making me cringe and go, "that was cheesy." So, props to you. It's well done.
Author's Response: Yepp this is my baby. Thanks, I was hoping it wasn't too bad. I know about what you mean, the cheese factor is too high sometimes. But fluff, in its correct proportions, is good. Thanks for te review!! XD
Date: 03/29/10 08:25 am Title: 1.
Splendid job!!
Give us more like this!!
love it so much
so good, just perfect :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll see what I can do. I'm working on another right now. I'm glad you liked it. :D
Date: 03/28/10 11:23 pm Title: 1.
If it's good??? IT'S GOOD!
Do I like it a lot? Hell yeah!
You'll make it a serie's? Well hot damn!
Author's Response: LOL. thanks! So I guess you like it? If I get enough reviews I'll start a series. :D
Date: 03/28/10 10:21 pm Title: 1.
PURE.PERFECT.SMUT.LOVE.
NUFF.SAID. :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! XD
Date: 03/28/10 06:45 pm Title: 1.
Aww, that was so cute and hot! Liked it, very much. Especially the first half was super hot. I don't know, what is it, but I think the overall scenario and because it was so forbidden and dirty. Things like spreading Bill's come on his entrance just blew my mind, really! Nice job, entertaining smut :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. My inner smut monster decided that this story was being written whether I liked it or not! Thanks for the review! ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. My inner smut monster decided that this story was being written whether I liked it or not! Thanks for the review! ;)
Date: 03/28/10 04:22 pm Title: 1.
Damn! That was sizzling hot! I'd really love it if you turned it into a series. It's sooo good!
Author's Response: *giggles* thanks for reviewing! The more reviews I get the more I'm leaning towards making it into a series. So we'll see. ^_^
Date: 03/28/10 03:57 pm Title: 1.
That's good news ! I don't have ideas but I like how you write them, so perfect for each other and really, really in love... so just keep doing what you do! lol
Author's Response: Will do! XD
Date: 03/28/10 03:51 pm Title: 1.
Oh GOD!! *runs to the bathroom*
...
*comes back* THAT was REALLY fucking HOT!! OMFG!!
Please turn it into series!! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!!! I'll start writing soon, so if you have ideas or requests for a series let me know. :D
Date: 03/28/10 03:45 pm Title: 1.
GOd that was so hot ! I'm looking forward to read more from you! And I would love it if you make it a series !
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! If you have any ideas let me know. I'll start writing soon. XD